Virtual Production

If you think there is anything wrong with what I wrote, you can tell me and I will try my best to change it. I also have the strength to change it.

I just finished reading it, and the author wrote it really well. The writing style is fresh and natural (it's pretty good among the unsigned works I've seen. You don't have to try to pile up words, it's already good to be able to tell a story clearly), and the sense of logic is also very strong. Maybe it's because I rarely dabble in related topics. I didn't understand it at first, so I read it several times. If you insist on revising it, you can actually describe it in more detail, use more psychological descriptions and popular descriptions, and then give metaphors and examples. (If you plan to sign a contract, you can try to change a popular theme to create conflicts and excitement at the beginning. If it is purely for love, you can ignore it.) Finally, the only drawback is that the number of words is too small (you must also go to school, I don't know what grade the author is). If you are not old, you can try to write more, as everything has a foreshadowing process. Looking forward to a blast! 😡😡😡