People Who Are Cultivating Immortals Can Only Exploit the Cave World.

The idea is quite good, and the collision of technology and immortality is also well written. What is the problem? The problem is that it's not exciting. It keeps pressing. The protagonist just stands up and then presses down. It doesn't make the reader comfortable at all. The more readers read, the more annoyed they become. I can only say that the data difference is not unreasonable. It's like the lady has no need to appear. It's just a small climax. In the end, the protagonist is forced to suppress the world. The protagonist of the world of high martial arts cultivates immortality. Just skip the plot of the dimension reduction attack. I see that so far, it is really a constant pressure on the protagonist. There is no climax, and it is impossible to think about it at all. People at the bottom can kill people casually. When the top people find out about the protagonist's special characteristics, it is outrageous to capture and let the protagonist run around. I can only say that the writing skills need to be practiced. The imagination is OK, but the writing is poor.

Slip away, the protagonist's strength improves very quickly, but the enemies come one after another, constantly suppressing the protagonist. . .

Come on, author, and good luck!

Brother, have you tested the waters here? Why are you only charging 60? This fantasy traffic is too rubbish.