Hong Kong: Turbulent Times

One thing worth affirming is that the dialogue is in Mandarin, unlike some authors who use dialects for dialogues. It is difficult to read in dialects. Who will read it?

It's the system again. Is it impossible to write books today without a system?

It looks good. I kill decisively without procrastination. I just remember to include pictures.

The supporting characters are not outstanding enough and cannot highlight the protagonist Meng. Focus on the key points, which direction does the protagonist's character go? Fierce? Negative? Evil? You can't just be awesome, you have to be awesome. Every kid is awesome, and occasionally someone is not awesome. This way you will be even more awesome.

To be honest, don't join the gang for the sake of the plot. There are people above you. Although Inspector Hua will fly away soon, he is still influential. Set up a court or start a company. If you can fight and make money, there are still people.