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Looks uncomfortable
Gay literature? And why should the male supporting character be so humble? It's just a game, he has such a bad mouth, and he feels handsome, right? If my brother is great, I won't think he is cheating, but I will feel that he is great from the bottom of my heart. Birds of a feather flock together, and people flock together.
The writing was okay, but I didn't like it, it was awkward, and I just used that system to advance the plot. It's not the CS I play, it feels like the kind online, which is depressing, violent, and confusing. There is also a bottom line for bad mouth between brothers, and it is not like this kind of masculinity.
It's the first time I've seen a non-shuang article about random killings.
It's obvious that the protagonist is killing indiscriminately, and even if there is a flaw, he is still killing indiscriminately. But the author uses a lot of space to describe "the system forces the protagonist to do things through punishment", and also uses a lot of space to describe "how much the protagonist doesn't want to do this". It seems very aggrieved and useless. To be honest, I personally feel that even if I write about the protagonist and the system, even if I comment harshly during the live broadcast and broadcast my inner thoughts in 10 languages, it will be more comfortable for people to watch than now. I don't know what the author was thinking. Maybe he was writing the article because he was sprayed with anger? The more frustrated the troll is, the happier he will be.
Forget it, give up. Living is already tiring, and reading novels is stressful.
Poor look and feel
Is this rich second-generation brother so humble? He points his nose and scolds but keeps smiling.
There are some books that you regret after reading three chapters, but you will regret it for the rest of your life if you don't read them! And you my brother! Your book👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
After reading more than twenty chapters, I felt that the environment created by this book was like a high-pressure tank. It was so uncomfortable to read.
In view of the readers' questions, let me give a unified reply.
Logically speaking, an author of my level has no right to try to explain something to the readers But I couldn't help but burst out After all, for an author, every book is like his own child Seeing that his child is questioned, incomprehensible, and even verbally abused, a mother naturally cannot help but explain it to her child. Okay, without further ado, let's start with the character issues of the protagonist mentioned by readers: Q: The protagonist has a bad mouth. A: I think it can be more strictly called poisonous tongue. After all, venomous tongue is the core point of this book. In fact, readers should know clearly after reading the introduction. This is the story of a reborn man who was forced to go back to playing professionally because of his venomous tongue. Moreover, the author actually used the template of the young version of the big brother Senpo. In fact, there are many famous star players with extreme personalities in the professional circle. Of course, this is also related to the author's own writing experience. The character of the protagonist in the previous book was too soft, and was criticized by many readers for this reason. They felt that it was too fake and did not look like a real person. The author learned the hard way and forgot where he saw the theory. The general meaning is that no one is perfect. The shortcomings are actually memory points. They are a way to get rid of the stereotyped faces and labeled characters, and make the people in the book come alive. For example, people with unique personalities such as Sherlock Holmes and Dr. House will leave a very deep impression on people. The character design problem has been explained here, and next is another point that the reader has questioned: If you look carefully, you can find that the timeline is reborn and returns to the beginning when the protagonist first came into contact with CS. It would be weird for a newcomer who couldn't even walk around yesterday to play a game with his roommate the next day and suddenly make a sudden move. The roommates may feel excited at first because of chasing points and winning every round, but after the excitement, normal people will have doubts, suspicions, and even tentative insinuations about whether the protagonist has opened the game. If it does, they will definitely take it seriously, or even scold them. This is a gamer who sincerely pursues fair competition, rather than the kind of score slave who pretends to be ignorant and feels at ease to score points on a trailer. It is only reasonable for roommates to be skeptical and confused. I really think this logical relationship is very normal and does not involve anything like the so-called birds of a feather flocking together. The article is a bit long, so I'll end the explanation here. Maybe the author's level is limited and he cannot satisfy all readers. I can only say that it is mine. Those readers who like this book also hope to vote for this book. The story behind it is absolutely wonderful. Readers who don't like this book will scratch it out or delete it from the bookshelf. Xiaopu has no choice but to stand still after being beaten. He bows and apologizes: "Sorry, I didn't let you enjoy it to the fullest. I'm really sorry." If you have any comments or suggestions, you can leave a message in the post and speak freely. As long as you don't curse or quarrel, it will be fine. Above! By the way, best wishes to those who keep reading and those who have deleted the book? For readers who haven't seen it yet, happy National Day and Mid-Autumn Festival!
It's okay, but I don't like it. Delete it directly (no picture)
The author is really hypocritical, writing a novel that brings great suffering and hatred.
Has the protagonist saved Zhang Yang's life in his life? Can he endure such pressure and disgust?
This book is not enough
I have been subscribing since the protagonist started the live broadcast. Now that I have seen the latest chapter, the overall feeling is that the early live broadcast was the highlight. The reaction of Chinese players when they first joined the professional team also continued to be explosive, but the subsequent game sessions fell off a cliff. I feel that the author is quite tangled. Here are the uncomfortable points: Live broadcast stage: 1. The God-defying system. The author wanted to give the protagonist a reason to play CS again after rebirth, so he added a system to provide a reward and punishment mechanism so that the protagonist has to continue CS. However, the tasks and punishments released were quite speechless and too powerless to make trouble. You said that this system controls my competition and training, and can make me improve. I accept it, but if I complain in my heart and spray a few trash words, it is already within the scope of life. 2. Interpersonal relationships, the high pressure of the protagonist on the supporting characters, the high pressure of the family on the protagonist, and the high pressure of the system on the protagonist, give people a feeling of breathlessness. If the live broadcast part were not exciting enough, I would not be able to watch anymore. It is too realistic and makes people uncomfortable. Competition stage: 1. Strength description, compared with the live broadcast stage, it may be because the environment has risen from the fish pond of the game to the ocean of the competition, and the opponent's strength has changed, causing the protagonist to change from a blast kill to a variety of 64 attacks. It does not reflect the protagonist's familiarity with various routines after rebirth and the system's bonus to the attributes of the gunman. The feeling is the same whether you lose or win. The protagonist cannot be said to be a roadblock, but not like the protagonist. It may also be that the author doesn't want the protagonist to be too strong from the beginning and directly overwhelm his combat effectiveness. 2. The distribution of the description of the gun and the command. I feel that the author wanted to highlight the command attribute of the protagonist in the later period, so the description was slightly more, but the details of the gun and the reaction of the audience after winning were less, so even if he won, there would be no passion at all. In summary, this novel is readable and okay, but it doesn't feel refreshing enough. Except for the s plus one explosion during the live broadcast, the protagonist's emotions and the rhythm of the game have been suppressed by the author. I feel quite tired watching it.
It looks good. I love watching it. More and more is not enough.
Congratulations on signing
Just like the title, I suddenly signed a contract and gave me 70 points 😁
Write less about the system, less about the characters and competitions
The number of system appearances is too high and too frequent. Not only does it take up a lot of scenes from the protagonist and the game, but it also steals the show during intense periods of the game. At a critical moment in the game, a system crash occurred, forcibly interrupting my reading experience. The above is purely a personal opinion.
The imagination is okay, but some places at the beginning smell like AI, especially the detailed description of the protagonist and the introduction of the system UI, which is like the exaggerated writing style of deepseek... I don't know if it's an illusion Game writing doesn't pay so much attention to writing. I'll see if your writing skills are good enough later, so be more confident.
The content is good, but the system fails. Every time the system comes out, I want to abandon the book. One is that the system has no obvious positive feedback, and the other is that the tasks are too complex and stressful. Personally, I think a poisonous-mouthed protagonist is a good entry point, or I can just write a "saint" instead. There is no need to force the break.