
Comprehensive Website: Happy Life of Cultivating Immortals and Refining Weapons
综网:快乐的修仙生活炼器篇
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A strange weapon refiner, the first to see the recipe for a certain death material.
Shennong is here
The first comment is in Chapter 1, Introducing the Comprehensive Network, Article 5. I'm too lazy to type it again. All in all, it seems that the author is a product of the assembly line industry of the Comprehensive Network training class that has emerged recently. I will continue to take a look at the follow-up work and wait for my news. After all, you can't be beaten to death with a stick.
The protagonist is a monk who refines magic weapons. Not a blacksmith. Why do you still have a fixed formula? Forget about fixing the formula. After all, we are still in the apprenticeship period and it is not time to start a business. Where is the happiness in the protagonist's plot? There are weird copies at every turn. At the beginning, there was a cesspit script like a mine + zombies. The second one is still weird? The third one is even more difficult, a cesspit script with time backtracking. With these copies, I can't see how happy I am.
I just saw the Flying Sword Blueprint released in Chapter 70, and I couldn't help but complain about it.
1. To refine a weapon, you need blueprints! ? Forget it, I rely on the comprehensive network to provide materials, wouldn't I buy them in reality? Can't we just get a few I-shaped beams and a couple of steel bars or something? And if you really need the blueprints, you can find a lot of them online, including guns, crossbows, compound bows, motorcycles, etc., And you can't just make the parts yourself and assemble them again? The protagonist has to rely on weapon refining to improve his cultivation. He has four and a half copies before and after? (Zombie, Night Road, Marriage, Half Killed by God, Ling Ying) The first three have been played at least several times, and the Qi training has only reached one level. Wouldn't the protagonist want to change? 2. The comings and goings are all copies of the underworld, and they are in the same background. There is a rare interspersed with another type of result that ends in an anticlimax. Where is the Zongwang? Isn't this really a fairy in a net suit? Forget the wild boars, fishmen and goblins that are frequent visitors on Zong. Com, you can't always play in the same dungeon with the same background, right? What is the full name of Zongwang? Do you remember it? It's the Multiverse Comprehensive Gaming Network! What's the difference between you disconnecting from Steam and still having only one game in your game library? Isn't your website really a pirated version? There isn't even a version number. 3. Isn't it said that magic weapons need to be sacrificed and refined? I didn't see the protagonist refining any magic weapon. The first umbrella I got has never been upgraded to the first level. 4. The protagonist is practicing immortality and qi... Why does it feel like his brain is getting stiffer the more he practices? At the beginning, I would buy a chainsaw to use it (although in fact, if I want to use the chainsaw for fighting, it is really not as useful as an ax), but later on, after I practice my Qi, I will have to compete in a meat show by myself? ? Don't you know how to make something like a crossbow? If there are no runes and talismans that are too complicated to make, then we can just tie the fiery flame powder to the arrow, right? Also, after using it for so long, the Fiery Flame Powder is still wrapped in paper, and it has been blown away several times. Wouldn't it be wrapped in wax pills? Anyway, in the end, the protagonist still needs to spray fire by himself, wrap it up with a thin layer of wax, and melt it as soon as the fire is sprayed, right? And come on, the protagonist is a modern person. How many people would give up long-range attacks and choose to go to meat gambling? The writing is not like a weapon refiner who relies on magic weapons to make a living, but like a reckless man. The protagonist knows how to refine weapons, but it is written as if he does not think for himself. Instead, he is more like an NPC who is led by the system and uses whatever magic weapon the system comes up with. Isn't this just a meat pigeon game? What's more, there is no meat pigeon game where you can choose one of three. Anyway, you can only use whatever the system gives you? You have to remember that the protagonist is currently on Zongwang and is a gamer. Are there any gamers who don't skip classes? Phew, I've finished my rants, let me say one last thing. All the above problems actually have an ultimate solution. As long as you update ten, twenty, or even fifty chapters a day, there will be no problems at all 😜😏
It's not bad 😏 but the protagonist, a weapon refiner, looks a bit incomplete. Weapon refiners can't be written like blacksmiths. They've become immortals and don't even have serious techniques.
After reading the first two copies, I can only say that I am so happy.
According to the difficulty of the dungeon, ordinary people can't do it. I think if the protagonist hadn't died several times, there would be no joy. Looking at the title, I thought it was a daily fun game.
There is only one world for the daily dungeon and he is deeply involved in the plot. He does not know how to shop online or buy in real life. He does not supplement theoretical knowledge. He has only a little knowledge. He does not know how to upgrade his equipment or level up. He does not enjoy mowing grass at all. He keeps using ghosts to pressure the protagonist. The protagonist can only be a Taoist from the underworld and cannot use the subjective initiative to improve his strength at all. Rather than saying that it is a comprehensive network, it is better to say that it is the system text of the ghost world that has been traveled through.
Can I be happy even if I am a blacksmith? Refining the same magic weapon adds a little experience, one level is one hundred, two is two hundred, and the materials are refreshed every day. You may have to refine it several times. Are you planning to write a novel for a lifetime? ? How funny! ! !
Where do you find happiness in your cultivation? Why don't you go back to work?
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After reading a few chapters, I throw everything into the stove and burn it, and it will automatically come together after it's burned.
The author should pay attention to the details.
If you write this kind of data-oriented article, you still have to pay attention to the accuracy of the data. In the previous Chapter 20, the effect of Guidance Technique was introduced, but it was not reflected once later. Every time the data is posted, the upper limit of proficiency in Qi Refining Technique remains unchanged. For data types, it is better to be more rigorous.
It feels like a studio article...
Author, see for yourself, are you really happy?
This is a waste of time. I suggest you change the dungeon to only one person.
1. The comprehensive network is not connected to the Internet. I have watched three or four dungeons. They are all in the same series. I have never seen the invitation letter. The new dungeon appears as if it is set, not randomly. At the same time, this comprehensive network does not have functions such as forums and trading houses. It only has dungeons and weapon refining, which is more like a stand-alone machine than a stand-alone one. 2. I don't realize happiness. What I write is a copy of the underworld. There are ghosts, night demons and evil cultivators, and the atmosphere is gloomy. I have accessed the Internet and copied it, but I can't feel the pleasure of mowing the grass and the refreshing feeling of falling. 3. The settings for cultivating immortals are messy. The upgrade system in the comprehensive network has been integrated. You are still doing private settings, upgrading and adjusting the exercises. It is troublesome enough. 4. I don't know how to refine weapons. I don't even have the imagination to refine weapons, and I don't know how to use modern conveniences. I showed it when I downloaded the dungeon for the first time and bought a chain saw, armor and thermite (other novels are badly written). 5. What are you saving Zongwang coins for? Are you waiting for the platform to give you interest?
The weapon refiner suggested cultivating weapons in Akagi, refining magic weapons, and using magic weapons to drive cultivation.
Don't do it, your investment will fail in one day. This book looks okay.