Heavens, Start with the Divine Elephant's Prison-Suppressing Power!

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Hurry up and understand the Divine Fist of Heaven and Hand of God. This way you can write momentum. It is really difficult to write that kind of invincible momentum in the early stage.

The author is definitely someone who has practiced divine imagery. Everything is written very rigorously and nothing is taken for granted. I forgot the references, and I don't know the citation format. Anyway, I'm from Wuhan University, so academic misconduct is just academic misconduct

I haven't read it for a long time, and when I came back to take a look, I found that it was getting boring. I barely finished it, but the Potato Trilogy was really boring. In order to include the heroine of the original work, I wrote it to death. To be honest, half of the popularity of this kind of world with low combat power is the original protagonist. Originally, readers didn't like to watch this kind of world with too low combat power. In the end, the original protagonist was written to death. Readers of fantasy fan fiction with high combat power have high requirements for female protagonists. Don't waste it. The heroine of things, the Chendong trilogy is all about Liu Shen for this reason. If you want Liu Shen, you don't want Huo Ling'er. It's useless. If you don't have Xiao Lin, just forget it and change it like this. What's the difference between it and the original? Fans are originally about emotions, and the magic change directly overturns the foundation of emotion. It's just a thing with the original name. It's better to obey most people and write the Shetian trilogy honestly.

Not my buddy, how dare you write about the world of immortality? There is almost no one who writes about the world of immortality at the beginning. This has almost become a forbidden curse in this type of novels. If you dare to touch it, you are really not afraid of being unlucky in your old age.

Have you ever practiced the divine elephant's prison-suppressing power? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The God Elephant Suppresses the Prison was overhyped. The original author probably didn't even know what he was writing, so he just boasted that the invincible defense is followed by the invincible attack, and the invincible power is followed by the invincible defense. Those with a chaotic system can be said to be obsessed with beating themselves in the face 🙂 If you really want to write, I suggest, just a simple suggestion, first summarize a definite power-increasing system yourself, and then summarize the elephant power into it. This way, you can write more clearly and let people understand.

Yang An

I hope this book will have the protagonist in the original novel, and not create any parallel worlds, fan worlds, etc., And just watch the gods and elephants suppressing the prison and killing each other 🤓

Since the author has written about the Divine Elephant, you should remember that the Divine Machine relied on top-level settings, big scenes, and side promotions. The books he wrote are not about combat power. The protagonist can also be aggrieved, but as long as he is strong enough, he will immediately take revenge. The Divine Elephant can also be replaced, but never. Do you have to hold the Ten Evil Techniques or 4 results like there are several fans who can't beat the Great Emperor of Cultivating Humanity? As for the debate in the comment area, as long as Shenji's book and Chen Dong's book are in the same novel, they are indispensable What you have to do, author, is to completely crush one side, then Both sides are fine, don't think about pleasing both sides at the same time, don't think about being able to reconcile both sides, just dominate one side, so that the results will be better After all, Shenji is the ancestor of stacking boxes, and Chen Dong opened an extra chapter to stack boxes. Both of their books have many big scenes, and the values are greater than the mechanisms. You can only choose one between the Zhenghuang Battle Force Party and the Great Emperor Battle Force Party In the end, the author, please don't try to please both sides. Chen Dong's trilogy can't even end according to his own ideas. Shenji hasn't written it for many years. The two of them are the signatures of both sides of the Battle Force Party.

I'm so touched. I haven't seen this kind of immortal protagonist for a long time. It's just like this. I watched a bunch of mortal protagonists a while ago, and when I came back, I got such a pure immortal protagonist. I was really happy. 😭😭

The combat power is really not overwhelming, unlike a chat group next door. With the idol, I still got the original version from Yang Xiangxiang. As a result, in the perfect world, I can't skip levels, I can only fight at the same level. The newly opened book is also a chat group in Zhetian.

I saw that Gu Xiaosang appeared in the title "Honor of One Life" in the catalog, and I hoped that the protagonist would not spoil her and beat her to death if she dared to go crazy. Many fan stories about Gu Xiaosang are very unpleasant. In some novels, Gu Xiaosang goes crazy and kills the protagonist, but the protagonist still forgives her, saying that she is afraid of the Golden Emperor or that she is Meng Qi's wife. The fandom is brought into the perspective of the protagonist. Gu Xiaosang has no feelings for the protagonist except Meng Qi. In this case, why should she be given preferential treatment?

How is this book? The one next door is about covering the sky and practicing divine elephants. It has already pushed the sacrificial path to the narrative level and is the pinnacle of the world.

The Divine Elephant's prison-suppressing power is very powerful, and it has no expressiveness at all. It's more like Tang Shenwang Xuantian Gong boasting. When he took it out and saw what kind of underworld spear he didn't know, he thought it was an unknown third-rate weapon. I don't know what a group of people were bragging about🤣

It's best to pretend to be dead and open a trumpet silently, otherwise it would be too clowning to pop up later. If you lose your character like this, you should be prepared to give up.

There are a lot of books about divine elephants, but this one seems to be a bit more fun. Others make me laugh to death. They use up a lot of resources. Their combat power is not invincible, but they can still survive two attacks. Even if they study the Emperor's Sutra, they will make them laugh to death.

The writing is not good and the writing is not up to par. The most important thing in this kind of novel is the character. If the protagonist in this field is not written with character, then this kind of novel is just a novice novel. How is it possible that you can't write well and still want to eat this bowl of rice? There is a book (My Name is Huang Tian, ​​The Sky Is Dead) that has a very average plot setting, but the main character is really strong, and it's on the same track as you. It has 380,000 fans in 200 chapters.

Zhetian and humanities, I feel this article is well written. Other fanfics. Afraid of cause and effect, afraid of change, change or something like that

To be honest, the audience of Shengxu is much smaller than that of Zhetian. I suggest the author not to write so much about Shengxu, otherwise it will not only conflict with Zhetian, which is difficult to deal with, but also thankless, because many people will not read Shengxu. When he sees that you have been staying in the world of Shengxu, he will turn around and leave. Try to choose a hot world before putting it on the shelves. Shengxu is only superficially popular. It all depends on Chen Dong's popularity and Zhetian Perfect's accumulation. When you are accumulating popularity before it is put on the shelves, I don't know what you think about choosing Shengxu. Just look at how many Shengxu fans there are. Then look at how many fans there are like Zhetian Perfect Douluo. Why don't everyone write about Shengxu fans? Hasn't the author thought about it? It's not that the Holy Market is not that popular and can't make money.

Save money: The author received 🐔God's curse on Eat Crazy Thursday. The computer was broken today and the network has not been repaired yet.

Personally, I think Zhutianliu can be divided into two categories. One is to attract readers by making fun of various worlds and opening up their imaginations. The main focus of the novel is the interest of the story. I feel that the author is not very outstanding in this aspect. The other type takes the path of seeking the Tao from the heavens, wandering through the heavens to absorb the wisdom of cultivation from all realms, and find their own path to enlightenment and transcendence. The author's first two books followed this path. They both relied on a powerful world practice system, absorbed the practice wisdom of other worlds, made the practice of each realm extremely powerful, and also showed the practice characteristics of each world. Because this book embarks on a path to reach heaven at the beginning, the result is to go to various worlds, and then refine various heavenly materials and earthly treasures to become stronger. It does not reflect the characteristics of different cultivation systems and the sublimation after the collision of wisdom, and it lacks a lot of highlights. I feel trapped by the overly powerful and complete system framework of Divine Elephant Prison Suppression Power. I don't know how the author will solve this problem in the future. Otherwise, it will just become a series of killing, refining, and killing again. It is easy to get tired of a single cool point.

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I didn't want to read it at first, but suddenly I discovered that the author is the author of Immortal Phoenix. That book is really good.

I asked why it looked so familiar, it turned out to be you. At least veteran authors don't have to worry about becoming eunuchs after writing two to three hundred thousand words.

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This book is so beautiful, it is number one among all heavens, and it is well deserved 🤓😡

The Other Side of Deep Space, Illustration of Destruction, The Battle of the Great Road, The Supreme Humanity, The God of Shepherd, Emperor, Projection of the Heavens, The Fantasy World Travel, The Fairy Gourd, Shu Mountain

The veteran author of so many books is still pretending to be dead

Give face to Shenji, the Supreme Immortal does not even have a single body Great Emperor = Supreme Immortal, Great Emperor is single~multiple True Immortal, Red Dust Immortal = God All realms of Immortal King = Heavenly King Quasi-Immortal Emperor = Immortal King~Supreme Broken Immortal Emperor = Gate of Eternal Life So, Immortal Emperor is equal to Holy King Wuwu