Rebirth 79: Starting from Saving the Female Educated Youth

The opening chapter is eye-catching. The rural gossip field of the late 1970s is brought before your eyes. The villagers are chatting about the scandal between Chen Jianghan and Teacher Su. It feels like you are squatting in the corner of the grain drying field and listening to the story.

The first twenty or so chapters are indeed a bit rushed and there is not enough foreshadowing. In order to advance the plot, there are few emotional changes in the characters. Thank you for pointing out the problem in the comment area. We will improve it in the future. If you have plot-related discussions, you can put them here. I will actively discuss them when you see them. Oh, just to mention it, some people think that my main plot has not been advanced. In fact, you have also seen the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It is more complicated. The heroine saving people is the cause, the gossip is the effect, the male protagonist's avoidance is the cause, and the heroine's inability to return to the city is the effect. The heroine's suicide was the cause, and the male protagonist's family was destroyed as a result. Therefore, I think the male protagonist's more than 40 years of suffering in the previous life is quite complicated. When he returns to his previous life, saving people is an obsession, but after saving, it is also a normal reaction to take care of him carefully and not to dare to approach. The same goes for the heroine. After committing suicide and being rescued, her heart is closed. She actually needs to re-examine the world until there is such a reason to rekindle her life. If it can be written according to the pure and refreshing way, three days ago she lost all hope in the world, and three days later she changed her mind because the male protagonist saved her, and even fast-forwarded into a mindless love affair. The routine is too old and has no new ideas. Everyone is tired of watching it, right?

Originally, I wanted to make it more distinctive, but it seems that Wu dialect is a bit niche. Do you think the dialect should be retained?

The plot is reasonable, the writing is fresh, there is not too much nonsense, and the conflicts are vivid and watchable. The disadvantage is that there is not much nonsense. After reading Chapter 15, it felt a bit tight and urgent. There was no nonsense, it was all about plot advancement, and it felt a bit tense all the time. No investment because it's the end of the month. The issue of investment amount. This means that the book has nothing to do with me, but I can definitely read it.

Artificial respiration, in that era, even if you knew it was saving people, there would still be a lot of gossip behind it.

It tastes good, but I wouldn't recommend it now. It is recommended to open a new book

The environment and characters are delicate and vivid. It was actually quite difficult to write about that era because some places were simple and some were very complex, especially about human nature. Good luck, author.

I have always liked reading chronicle stories, and this one is good. The author has also done a lot of homework and can delve deeper into the psychology of the characters. Is the protagonist someone who has many years of life experience and is reborn with a young body and a young mind?

Stopped updating? What does it mean if there is no update for three days?

The data was in a mess, only single digits were left during the holidays, and the reading kept dropping. After struggling for three days, I decided to cut it off. I needed to settle down a bit more.

It's a bit tacky. Although I like reading periodicals, this cover is too tacky.