Grinding Myself to the Bone! My Road to Becoming a Slime Demon King

Overall, the first three chapters are a bit bland, the characters are too naive, the world's realism is too weak, some plots are "sexually repressed" (a common problem for new authors of light novels), and the outline (world framework, character setting, plot design) may be missing or incomplete. Generally speaking, it meets the contracting standards. Although the writing style is immature, it is quite satisfactory. The subject matter is Japanese fantasy light novel, but the current data seems not ideal. Analysis of the reasons: 1. The theme of "traveling into a slime" itself has limitations, is too common, has no innovation, and is not very scalable. 2. The character creation is not likable enough and the plot development is too slow. 3. The world lacks a sense of reality, the plot arrangement is too deliberate, and the intelligence performance of the monsters does not conform to conventional cognition. 4. To be determined, visual inspection of the potential of the work ⭐⭐⭐ (a potential of 5 stars may become a high-quality product) 5. For a new author, the word count of the completed book is predicted to be 100,000 to 200,000 words for extremely poor data, 200,000 to 300,000 words for the completed book for poor data, 300,000 to 500,000 words for the completed book for average data, 500,000 to 1 million words for the good data, and more than 1 million words for excellent data (i. E., High-quality work). Potential 3⭐ means average data and perfect attendance. 5. However, the above are all personal opinions. The author has not yet reached 100,000 words, and the potential may fluctuate. However, the author has only written his second book, and his level has already exceeded that of most new authors. I will continue to observe in the future, and hope that the author can improve the outline, work harder, and make more efforts in the future!