Douluo: Peerless Huo Yuhao Returns from Naruto

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I feel that Huo Yuhao in the author's new book is not as good as the previous one. Although Huo Yuhao's character in the previous book was extreme, he was able to arouse readers' emotions, but now it is too light. Moreover, it is another book about Huo Yuhao going to the world of Naruto and coming back. Most of the authors who wrote this type of book have jumped at it. And since Huo Yuhao has experienced some of the world of Hokage, his character cannot be like the original work. Dialogue is the best way to bring out the character's personality. The dialogue is too rigid and feels like an NPC that provides clues to the protagonist.

Chapter 67 so far, I haven't seen any explosive points. On the contrary, I am quite disgusted with Shao Zhe and Ma Xiaotao. I don't know how the author will deal with these two things later, and I don't see the need for the protagonist to stay in Shrek. Instead, Ling Luocheng is implicated, which feels quite useless.

With the Sharingan, is there a fairy body that must be matched for evolution? It would feel a bit wasteful to use living gold as a consumable instead, and don't tell me you didn't bite off a bit of meat when you bit it.

It would be better to change the name of the protagonist. Dai Shushu is just a dog.

It feels okay, I will continue to wait and see. Come on, author. The plot is a bit bland, but that's normal considering it's just the early stages.

After reading a previous book written by the author, I realized that I had added a bookshelf, but I seemed to have forgotten about it (*¯ㅿ¯*;) I would like to try this

After reading Chapter 40, I feel like I haven't read anything 😒

It feels quite average. I found that I read Huo Yuhao's Restarting Life in 20 years ago. Although I haven't finished it, I thought about it and read it, but I still can't stand it.

It's relatively slow to get started. Compared to Reincarnation and I don't know the plot of the different world, Huo is really difficult to write, so the feeling of enjoyment is not as strong as the previous one.

I didn't see that Sharingan Pure Quotes 💀 lacked the eye link that I am most proud of.

Can't you find talent elsewhere? Tiantian thought about instigating Shrek's rebellion, and asked them to fight their great ancestor Tang San. In the original work, they were all loyal fans of Tang San. Even though they knew Huo Yuhao was cheating, they never questioned Shrek, and they were still proud of it. They were all Shrek's pillars. Believe that they are moral, believe that you are charming enough to make them give up their faith, believe that they will agree with what you say, then return from their lost ways and rebel against Tang San. It is better to believe that the abyss plane is a peace-loving plane and Tang San is a true gentleman. These Shrek geniuses should be buried with Shrek. These second-hand geniuses and Tang San's minions can betray Tang San, and they can naturally betray you. If it doesn't work, they can still be used, but after they are used up, destruction is their only fate. One day he was Shrek's man, and his whole life he was Tang San's dog.

Are your grades so bad? . . The author makes a py to promote it.

Can the author finish the setting of this novel?

That's right, the selling point of your title is Naruto. Judging from the results, the Sharingan does not show any contrast. You do not write a comparison between ninjutsu and soul skills, and you do not make a judgment. You even wrote a special picture of Wang Dong'er's soul skills in the later stage. The most important thing about the Sharingan is the control of tailed beasts, but it is not reflected in this book.

How about Huo Yuhao who returns from the Moon Project? Want to see this

Brother, can you please give me more? It's too short, can't you do it?

It's okay to have a single female protagonist. There is no vicious plot. Let's just wait and see if you exert strength in the later stage. Just be stable in the early stage.