Sick Girl Is Severely Dependent

It's really good, the writing is excellent, the protagonist's personality is upright, and it leaves you wanting more.

Introduction: Why didn't you kill Yamata no Orochi🤓

I am Shennong. After tasting it, I identified it as a spiritual herb. I have a special attack on readers who like the free part.

I thought that the author could write something new, how could it be exactly the same as my life, 🤓 Alas, I think back to those wasted years in the past, invincible, and how lonely it was.

It's very comfortable to read It reminds me of a BA fanfic I read a long time ago, which is about the husband who chose to sacrifice himself in the Treaty of Eden chapter. The same warm gentleman, the same clumsy white-haired girl (Zi and Letty do look alike in some ways). I hope this book will bring a smile to everyone's face

Where is the Demon King? Where is the goddess? Two less

If I understand correctly, the Brave Team should be the top powerhouses in the world! Or is the moral baggage too high, even for all brave men? ? ? With that strength, even if the demon clan is gone, the struggle between the nobles will not stop!

The words and sentences are very particular, with a different world flavor and delicious taste (●'◡'●)

When I read Chapter 8, I feel that there is a lack of scene description. A large part of the interaction between the male and female protagonists takes place at home, but I can't imagine what this home is like. If the scene can be strengthened, I feel that the heroine's psychological description of gravity will be much easier to read. What is the living standard of this Eldama City? It feels like England in the 19th century

The writing is good, but it seems like there is no main line at the moment. It's hard to support a full-length novel by just writing about daily life. I've seen too many such works cut in half ()

I like the settings very much, but I personally feel that some of the text is a bit too hard and could be slowed down a bit.

It's a shame, I still like this book

Is it the gravity field again? Yes, yes, you have to watch Twisted, I hope it will explode more 😍

My eyes are so thirsty in this boring and suffocating sea of ​​sand, and since you are willing to give me wine, why not give me one more sip? Why be so generous yet stingy?

So far, I have read 60 chapters. The writing is acceptable, the setting is good, and the plot is mainly based on daily life, which is slightly warm, but the main line has not yet appeared. It is too bland to advance the plot through daily life, and it is easy for people to forget the book inadvertently while watching it.

As in the title 🤐, did the author cut it off so quickly?

Is the author planning to reset this book?

Is there a ccb🙂

You don't know how to use a knife, right? It must not be the unsatisfactory GS ending where one person dies here and another person dies and is reincarnated 5555 Although there is nothing I can do about it, after all, I am not writing it, and the author's writing is quite nice.