The Days When Life Players Were Gods in Ancient Times

The setting is very good, but the plot is really awkward and the writing is average (only readable). The author needs to think more about the plot. The pretentiousness is also poorly written.

I could watch it in one sitting, but the second time I watched it I was not willing to pay for a subscription. The overall protagonist is just a puppet, a tool to promote the plot, and the performance is the overall mental retardation.

To be honest, the protagonist's quality is a bit low How can anyone lick their faces and ask for all kinds of hints to accept them as apprentices? There will be regrets in the world. If there is no fairy fate, there is no fairy fate.

The setting is good, but instead of making a villain, can you just show the villain's growth experience? I really don't want to read the life of a mouse.

Tomato's mc is good and can be used as a reference, but it's not necessary to revive the monsters later on. Only my own method is the highlight. Others are okay because the protagonist becomes a monster, but the large-scale resurrection is disgusting.

After writing so many chapters, why have I never seen the issue of lifespan, especially in the latest chapter, where the disciple is not interested in cultivation? I'm going to cultivate immortality! Live forever! ! What god would not be interested in immortality? It feels like it doesn't matter whether the disciples practice or not, and they have the same concept that they will die in a hundred years whether they practice or not. If this doesn't explain the poisonous point, it's too big!

The author's writing is very good. You will feel like a fairy at first glance. It is very reasonable and well-founded.

The more I look at it, the more absurd it becomes. In ancient times, those who cultivated immortality fought those who practiced martial arts. What can be good about dimensionality reduction attack? At least let others stand with the same strength.

How can this be written from cultivating immortals to developing people's livelihood... It won't end up turning into a clichéd turf war.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is too poor, the food is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it.

After seeing Chapter 69, the writing of the assembly line officially begins.

Why does it look like a nanny article?

After reading all the paid chapters, my first thought is... The title is fraudulent, where are the real-life players? At the beginning, the life game system is transformed into the immortal sect system, and the disciples are recruited and combined with the skills to completely cultivate immortality. The point is that this system of cultivating immortals is very versatile and has no sense of life at all, just like playing a game with Wind Spirit Moon Shadow turned on. The second thought is, is it not good to be a free and easy god? Anyway, spreading the magic can help you upgrade, just accept a few close friends as apprentices and stay with you. Others were taught immortal magic, and they thought it would be good to establish a sect, fight for hegemony, be an official or a hermit, and describe their respective experiences. The protagonist doesn't need to capture everyone who can cultivate immortality

I think it looks good. I just hope there won't be any eye-catching emotional scenes later on, even though I know the writing is bad.

The protagonist has no character at all, and many things are taken for granted by the protagonist without seeking verification. He just believes what others say, which looks very silly.

How many words have it been before the protagonist has nothing to write about?

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is very poor. Everything is okay.

I still want to see farming and creating things from scratch. It's not like this. You start with a bunch of full-level basic skills. Suddenly an apprentice falls from the sky. The main plot suddenly starts. The protagonist's basic skills are all maxed out. He hasn't even left the forest. It's strange that he can find it as soon as he looks for it.

In fact, this book is very well written and very logical. I have read another book with a similar theme to this one. That book is really mindless. The beginning is similar to this book, saving a young man, and then the young man wants to become a disciple. Then it was different from this book. The protagonist in that book accepted a disciple without saying anything. After that, I was really worried about that disciple. I was speechless. It was neither a relative nor a reason. Taking a cheap disciple was as good as treating him with my heart and soul. He cared about food, housing, and revenge. The disciple he treated was more like a son than his son. This book is much more normal. The reason why the protagonist accepts an apprentice is because this apprentice does bring an opportunity. Since there is a destiny, then just accept it. His subsequent attitude towards this apprentice was also very reasonable. He neither lifted him to the sky nor demoted him to the ground. He was just a normal disciple.

I changed the title of the book and it turned out to be a novel about urban supernatural powers. It's just a scam.

The plot at the end is too fragmented and often jumps to the other side without finishing the explanation, which feels like an anticlimax.

Bro, if you end it like this, I'll have to find a hotshot ghostwriter (dog head saves life)

When will new dimensions be opened for exploration? This way sword repair and the like will be useful. In the future, even if insects and evil spirits invade, you will still have some experience.

It's all over the floor 😭

Is there anything else you recommend with this theme, except for the old man who carries you around?