In the Chaotic World of Demons and Martial Arts, I Have a Gifted Tree

Learn a lesson and get out of here! The book is too detailed and makes people lose the desire to follow it. Although it is also pretentious and unexpected, it is too deliberate. It should be like getting out of the way, mixed with some descriptions of the background, current situation, struggles between various forces, etc. To guide the development of the plot and make the characters more vivid!

I guess I transferred it from the female channel. The writing is too detailed, and it is really not suitable for men to read this book. Although this book is not bad, the male videos are definitely not worth ordering. You can watch it while skipping, and you can see that the latest chapter has not left the Novice Village yet. I feel like I can still write a hundred chapters in Novice Village

The writing is okay and you can read it. It's just that sometimes the description of the protagonist doesn't look like a time traveler, but like an aboriginal

Beautiful, Mr. Hakimi! I feel that the writing is very smooth, and it's fun to upgrade Kuku, but it's not too exaggerated, like a rocket flying into the sky 👍

Good water, how many chapters of water does it take to break through to the eighth level?

Why does it feel like a book written by a female channel, where people with high status mock those with low status?

Why not change the name to Monster in Troubled Times? I have a Hakimi. I almost mistook it. The combination of the author's name and the book's name 😏

Don't be sad Hakimi, please give more likes and popularity

Why is this substitute plot in the latest chapter so familiar? I seem to have read it somewhere. As expected, the protagonist ends up worshiping Xing Zheng again.

It looks okay, but the vision is too narrow and niche.

Great book! The writing is excellent, the protagonist and supporting characters have online IQs, the plot is smooth and eloquent

When writing in detail, make the angle of view narrower.

How to say it? Your fantasy martial arts training is more difficult than cultivating an immortal. To practice a certain realm, you need a certain realm of martial arts. Without this state, you can't continue practicing. Moreover, in a small place with a lot of influence, there are also a lot of bullshit. In this small place, I can write novels that hit the streets.

15 monthly passes, quick updates