Sinner

Very outstanding creativity, very rough, empty plot, characters, historical background, and no other basic settings looks sloppy and rushed

First, it is not recommended to require fan points to speak during the free period. Secondly, I think the character of the protagonist is too strange. He completely changes into a different person every day with the changes of the 7 deadly sins, and there is no way for me to get involved. The pace of the third story is a bit too fast, why come to this world? What is an association? Why is my personality completely different every day? The front desk directly called the male protagonist as a time traveler? I received too much content at once and it was very tiring to read.

I have read Chapter 41 so far, and I would like to share some of my opinions: 1. The protagonist traveled to an animistic world, and provoked a master at the beginning, but this so-called master just played with the rules and showed no strength at all. He was just like the alchemist in other novels, with no fighting power. The so-called animism seems to be quite powerful, but it is essentially synthesis and upgrading. Furthermore, brother, you have traveled to a supernatural world, and the protagonist is a weakling who has nothing to do with him. Why don't you just kill him? It's just a bug that eats iron. One of the three people went to entangle it, and even gave it the armor to eat. The protagonist is a weakling and an ordinary person. If he can't kill it, why not give it a beating? Are you still a villain? Either you set it to be full of ordinary people, otherwise the guild at the beginning will not see why the time-travelers should be afraid of the guild. Anyway, they are all ordinary people. If three people catch one, they don't dare to take action. This rarely happens in real life, let alone an extraordinary world. 2. The protagonist's seven deadly sins personality replacement. Is arrogance such an arrogance method? Isn't this just mindless? You can't tell it at the beginning. Later, when you enter the burial place, you take a dozen first- and second-level resurrected objects to attack an undead with at least a third-level bone dragon. Can't you understand the difference in strength? ? ? He even followed me and started making faces. Has your lich been resurrected? Not resurrecting a second-level undead soul with a bone dragon that has no pets? Wow! ! What kind of world is this? It's too rule-based, isn't it? Not to mention bringing a group of third-level undead souls behind to rush through the space cracks that even fifth-level undead can't survive. Are you arrogant? Isn't this just mindless? Arrogance also knows what can and cannot be done, and insists on doing it even if it cannot be done. You are so arrogant, why don't you order the dead worms to be resurrected? It is suggested that the author should revise the expression of the character. You can refer to some characters in animation. For example, Jin Shining in fate, it might be better to design arrogance based on him.

The Seven Deadly Sins are the Catholic classification of human vices, including the seven core sins of pride, envy, wrath, sloth, greed, gluttony and lust. The progress of the timeline is a bit fast. I have become so much stronger in just a few days.

The progress is too fast, and it seems a bit weird that the protagonist changes personality every day. I wonder if it would be better if the personality change is slower.

The idea is quite novel, it's a cool version, there are no details, I don't know if it's the author of the short video.

By the way, take a look at my novel, now I write about fighting against the way of heaven, fighting against the will of heaven, and moving forward fearlessly!

Author, why haven't you updated yet? Do you want a eunuch?