Traveling Through Dou Po, I Can See the Health Bars of All Things

The story about picking up the soul body at the beginning is so good, why is this book written like a piece of shit?

Is Hu Xiaoxun'er serious about the author's writing about not cutting it? What's the highlight of your Xiao family's start? In the mid-term, the whole family narrowly escaped death? Or is it better to take anti-inflammatory food in the later stage and become an emperor?

This name, the son of Xiao Yan and Yao Chen?

It can only be said that you can choose a finger tiger as a weapon. The author's thinking is quite different from ordinary people. This thing is not considered a dangerous item in modern times. I don't understand why it can be regarded as a treasure.

In the first three chapters, the golden finger is not explained clearly. The weapon is a finger tiger (this varies from person to person). He cannot open the door under the cliff and then forcibly finds the Little Medical Fairy. After three months of rising to the Dou Ling, he is preparing to deal with the Amethyst Winged Lion King. He feels that he can run away (when the opponent is planted with the poison of the Little Doctor Fairy). Everything above happened when Xiao Yan had just lost his fighting spirit and the famous scene was still three years away. I won't comment, because everyone has their own opinions.

There are so many people bragging about it, so I just took a look, it's only tens of thousands of words, 90% of it is just water, and there's nothing new at all.

How many times did you get this◔‸◔? There were so many compliments in the comment section, but ten of them were enough to kill people😱

What are these chapters about? I went through two big realms for no reason, and the cave is a bit confusing. What's the use of those gold coins? The space is used to hold the most rubbish things. Herbs are packed in sacks for 666. The space is not cleaned before going to fight monsters. The things in level 6 monsters are no better than those rubbish gold coins. Now that I know how to throw the gold coins out, the author's brain is really invincible.

What is this book's attitude towards the ancient people? You won't be a licking dog for the Ancient Clan again, or let the Ancient Clan win by lying down.

In fact, you are suitable for writing about Douluo. After writing so many Douluo novels, there is no single masterpiece, but Douluo is a masterpiece. It's better to continue writing about Douluo Dalu. Maybe you will already have a certain reputation now.

Oh my god, am I mistaken? Fighters at 1 star are eager to go out and practice. Xiao Yan has medicine, what do you have? Will the hostile forces not attack you now? It can be dealt with by anyone below the fighting master level. So, can you, the one-star fighter, defeat 100 nine-star fighters? A bunch of people are going to kill you in their turn. It's really poisonous.

Wait, that's not right, right? You can see that the health bar on the other side is digitized when the opponent's health bar reaches half health. You should lose combat effectiveness when you reach half health.

Do you have a lot of fans? Golden Chapter 3 didn't even introduce the golden finger.

It is recommended to write down the progress of the disappearance of the health bar while fighting, so as to give a sense of immersion.

It starts smoothly, and there is nothing wrong with being faster in the early stage. Otherwise, how can the upgrade speed be as fast as that of Huohuo in the later stage? Things like Douzun have not changed for decades. You can see that no poisonous points have been found yet.

The author says that Wind Fury Dragon Flame is more suitable for protagonists with wind attributes. It is recommended to conquer it.

Plot discussion post. If you have any suggestions, please post them. The author will adopt them if they are suitable.

The writing style is too white (a running account), and the protagonist is mentally retarded. The author wrote a fanfic without studying the original work 😁 This is just a problem I found after reading the first twenty chapters.

What is the significance of chapters 56 and 57? Pure poisoning

Writing fan fiction is all about having fun. If you don't feel happy, who will read your fan fiction? It's better to write a new book yourself

There is no harem

Alas, being able to see the health bar means that even if the Fighting Saint is hidden in the space, as long as he appears in the line of sight, he can be found. Even if the opponent is crippled, you can know whether he is really about to die. You can also know whether he is a clone. There is an introduction next to the health bar. In the status, identity and camp, there is no such thing. I have no idea what is written. Alas~

It is recommended to have multiple female protagonists. A single female protagonist seems a bit monotonous. It is a bit hypocritical to act innocently when one of them has traveled through time.

I've also written about the great master. That's all there is to fighting.

I read Douluo Shenshen, a previous work by the author, and I feel that the main character is pretty good. Why do I only collect this when there are so many words? I would like to ask, is this the author's book that Q has read? Is that why you don't have any collections?