This Portal Is Very Unfriendly to the Savior.

Last May, I wrote a book review titled "Heavy Fantasy" for "The First Empire of Mysteries". In the article, I expressed my deep concern about the author's excessive use of forensic evidence. Now it seems that this overflowing torrent of ideas is not an exception. The opening chapter of "This Portal Is Not Friendly to the Savior" is amazing. As an independent unit drama, the first volume still has flaws, but it is still enough to arouse sincere touching and resonance. However, entering the second volume, the story unknowingly changed. I have always believed in the idea that forensics itself is a betrayal of storytelling. 90% Of authors are not good at writing grand narratives. As for inserting modern theories into completely different fictional backgrounds, it will become a disaster. In such a quasi-medieval kingdom, introducing a group of revolutionaries with iron willpower and noble moral character out of thin air is like tens of thousands of Pauls wandering into the set. It will only make people feel abrupt and at a loss. Everyone in the Cocoon Breaking Organization must be pure and spotless, while everyone in the Molten Heart Kingdom must be corrupt and unforgivable: people are labeled like objects, and identity determines everything. If you are not a red-faced person, then you are a white-faced person. As a result, we see a large number of almost repetitive tragic scenes, with villains sharpening their knives, rebels making heroic sacrifices, and tears falling at the end of each chapter. Doesn't this kind of story really make people feel tired? Return to title. Fantasy starts from reality and returns to reality, but fantasy is not reality and should not coincide with reality. The author is obviously in a state of wanting and wanting. He can neither let go of his attachment to the magic system nor his reliance on traditional forensics, which ultimately creates an irreparable rift in the story. If Joanna can destroy an entire cavalry with one sword, is the result that countless ordinary rebels have piled up with their lives just a joke? If super magic can already achieve nuclear weapons-level deterrence, is the confrontation between soldiers on both sides at the level of cold weapons just a game of house? If the micro-perspective road movie style of the first volume is continued, the sense of fragmentation will still exist, but it will never be as dazzling and sharp as the second volume.       ，， In comparison, the book's flattening of character creation and rapid emotional progression seem to have little impact. I feel regretful that the story has frequent cracks; I hold out hope that the fantasy will not fall apart in the end.

Baby, please stop being a eunuch. If you don't read the next chapter of "This portal is very unfriendly to the savior", Wadasi😭😭😭

I didn't read the cool title. It's... Over...

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