
What You See with Deep Eyes
深瞳所见
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 372k Words
- Genre
- Military
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- War Fiction
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Can the author learn the art of white space?
Let me first tell you how I felt after reading the first thirty chapters. It was terrible. The author uses a lot of inner monologue to describe a monkey roaring in two cages. One cage is the company of the day, the other is the dreamland of the night. The author seems not to understand the art of blank space. There are a lot of inner monologues and adjectives in the novel in an attempt to portray the protagonist's image in the reader's mind. I have to say that this is very lame, just like a steamed bun that has been chewed countless times by others, which makes people lose their appetite. Excellent novels depict characters through their language, actions, and clever foreshadowing and pit digging. Even after reading it, I need to think about it several times before I can understand the behavior of the characters. It's like a humorous joke. I didn't understand the meaning at first, but after I went through it in my mind, I understood it and made people laugh. On the other hand, the large number of inner monologues and chronicle-style descriptions of events in this novel do not make people want to think at all. What is even worse is that the main story scenes are limited to two fixed places: the company and the battlefield in the dream. In addition, the previous chapters of the novel were revised later. The descriptions before and after Chapter 26 are very fragmented. I had confessed the truth to my girlfriend before, but my girlfriend didn't quite understand and her symptoms had improved. Why did his condition suddenly worsen again, and his girlfriend said that the protagonist had been hiding it from her? In addition, I read the first dozen chapters of the novel, and then spent 10 seconds reading ten lines of each chapter at a glance, but it did not affect the subsequent reading at all. I may be unfair to the author, but the large amount of details and inner monologues... He is really a strange talent.
I actually like to read dirty articles where someone is cold-blooded and knocked down. The author is satisfied.
Da Da's writing skills are very solid and beautiful.
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The plot is compact, exciting, and enjoyable to watch.
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