Hunter X Hunter: From Obtaining the World to Transcending Heaven

To be honest, I have recently been planning to write a hunter fanfic based on the stand-in, but after thinking it over again and wasting tens of thousands of words, I came to the conclusion: Shizuo is not suitable It's not that it is not strong, on the contrary, Shizuo is too strong. If we follow the intensity of the original work, which takes a few breaths and a few seconds to start and stop, basically no one in the Hunter World can resist it. Even if he is as strong as the Ant King, he can be killed once the protagonist's physical fitness is improved. Even, only a tiny wound is needed to kill the ant king through non-stop attacks. Nitro's extremely fast attack is also a joke in front of Shi Zhan. It's so buggy, really. The plot is designed with time and stop as the core. Unless it is a restricted map and extremely short plot, it can be fully used. Once the map expands, the unsolvable nature of Time Stop will be revealed. This is a fatal weakness for hunters who focus on upgrades. If it is daily life where the collision of characters is the main focus, it is feasible, but the existence of pauses in the daily life plot is even more redundant. No solution. At least as far as my ability is concerned, the ability to stop is unsolvable. Strong. But it's too easy for the plot to collapse. Adding restrictions will greatly reduce the fun, which will make readers unhappy and the author will be constrained in writing.

By the way, if you stop for five seconds, you can instantly kill five systems except the enhancement system. As long as the whole body is not strong, when the enemy uses flow to distribute mind energy, it can be killed instantly by stopping. After all, not all people with telekinesis abilities can develop their telekinesis abilities to a very abnormal level, and even oaths and restrictions are set subconsciously. There is no need to spend a lot of time writing about every enemy you encounter in the future. You can abbreviate it appropriately and it will be done in seconds. After all, most people with telekinesis abilities are at the same level as the Yin Beasts. They rely on their guessing abilities and intelligence games. Stopping at any time is equivalent to being able to flip the table.

The combat power is very annoying, and then it's really hard to watch when it's mixed up with Cajin in the opening scene. The length of Kajin Empire exposes Togashi's irresponsibility in my opinion. When reading novels in comics, he could just write some settings and draw a few pictures to make money.

Some readers mentioned the problem of why they stop shooting from time to time The reason is very simple. In the seventh part of JOJO, Diego tried to stop shooting from time to time, but the gun misfired, so he definitely couldn't fire from time to time But there are other things that are not clearly stated whether it can be done, such as whether it is okay to throw away the bullet. , I think it is possible. This involves the issue of why telekinesis users consume telekinetic bombs after throwing them. The explanation will be given in the text In fact, real-time stopping itself is quite contrary to physics. If Araki hadn't explicitly mentioned that you can't shoot, I would think this kind of thing doesn't matter.

It feels like the world is too demanding and not as good as the Crimson King in a Wheelchair

I can understand the restriction that the author placed on the protagonist's long CD. After all, according to the settings of a few breaths in the original book (estimated to be only five or six seconds), in Hunter, as long as the protagonist keeps up a little, no one else except some monsters can resist. Even the time stop given by Araki in the original work is very restrictive. For example, the strong mobility ability of the Platinum Stand is cut off, and the time stop time is forcibly weakened.

I took a look at it today, and it was the first time I saw that I didn't awaken my nen ability myself, but had to be taught by others. It stands to reason that people who know the existence of nen and have talent can easily develop it, but those who don't know that they can develop it are even more monster-like geniuses. However, this doesn't mean that others can teach them. I mainly came to see Jojo. I wonder if the main character can have a Jojo style of painting. That is, he speaks exaggeratedly, has a wonderful metaphor, and has a handsome posture. No matter what situation he faces, he can solve it invincibly in the end. Yes, I just want to see that man, that invincible man. That invincible man would not behave like this after Nitro noticed that the protagonist had special abilities. If it were him, he would probably scratch the brim of his hat and say, "Hey, hey, hey, he's really a troublesome old man!" The unknown ability of the substitute is indeed scary, but so what if it is known. The invincible man will only say, it seems that we are similar substitutes! Jotaro didn't know how to use a substitute at first, but his courage grew through battles again and again. He was never afraid, no matter how strong Dio became in the future, he would keep up and get stronger. If the main character is in the Jojo style, I feel fine as long as I feel temporarily cheated. If I am beaten to a residual health during the battle, I will say one sentence. The war song of mankind is the war song of courage. Walking on the road of justice is the only way to break fate. World, let time pause. One second has passed, three seconds have passed, I have reached the limit, but now I will cross the limit. Five seconds have passed, I am in front of you. 5.2 Seconds have passed and you are dead. At this moment, time resumes its flow.

It is said that the protagonist wants to develop the stand-in ability of weather forecast. Then you already own the world, and weather forecast is redundant. It is better to develop and strengthen your ability to use the time-stop mechanism. For example, to develop fast mobility, it is best to use air dance. This increases the range of movement and attack you can make during a stop. If the enemy attacks from a range, you stop for 5 seconds and run 200 meters. Now you can fly 1,000 meters. Does this increase your ability to attack and evade during a stop? For example, the Turtle Style Qigong can be used as a killer in normal times, and when it stops, it is an unavoidable attack. You can also develop Sun Fist, Qi Yuan Slash, and Kaio Fist. These Dragon Ball-type abilities are even more powerful and are far more suitable for you than weather forecasts. To put it bluntly, weather forecast requires a lot of detailed combat settings, and is far less powerful than the simple and crude ones from the Dragon Ball series. Your Dia's brain is not that good, and you still have such a wheelchair mechanism and a world avatar with powerful values. Why do you need to develop such a complicated ability as weather forecast?

To be honest, it would be better for the author not to add props from the JoJo world. Unless they are exclusive to the protagonist, there is no need for a stand-in battle, right? The hunter's battle of wits is hard enough to imagine. Can the author of Hojo write that feeling?

I'm very curious about why time can also stop. Instead of writing about Platinum Star, this book should write about the world... Obviously the world has lost... 😅 I'm even more curious about why it doesn't write about weather forecast, gold experience, Crazy Diamond... Well, forget about Crimson King... 😜 To create a self-healing idea, Crazy Diamond can cause more trouble than time stopping... 😁 Speaking of which, the Hunter's Thief Tips also go well with the substitute White Snake... 😏