
Douluo: the Martial Spirit Pam Can Fly All Enemies!
斗罗:武魂帕姆,创飞一切敌!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 545k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Small opinion
Although I haven't read a lot of it, I still feel that the author has kept the protagonist's abilities too low. The people who can hang out in the Black Tower Space Station are not only the smartest at the galaxy level, but they are at least at the planet level. Although the technologies named by various geniuses in the plot are exaggerated, and it is difficult to think of suitable inventions of the same level, at least you don't have to let others make a gun, right? After living here for so long, I still live in a thatched house. Also, if you can't think of a genius, then take a look at the hand-rubbing series. Ordinary people can rub circuit boards with their hands. So as the smartest person on the planet and an intellectual destiny walker, it shouldn't be difficult to reproduce modern 21st century technology with just one hand. I recommend the author to watch the anime Stone Age. If it doesn't work, just lean on the protagonist and add some super powers. The ability system is considered complete. In terms of plot, the early stage is an ordinary Douluo fanfic. Since the goal is to rush from the Douluo Continent to the universe, the necessary condition for reproducing a universe-level industry is to have strong power, so it cannot be a personal story. At least you must have your own power to complete industrialization. Maybe go to the Sun and Moon Continent to integrate in advance in the later stage? In short, it can't be a personal quarrel, but the author still focused on Tang San and the dormitory, which seemed a bit petty. We can start with business. Isn't the protagonist a staff member of the Black Tower Space Station? Not to mention that he has fully mastered the skills of the Little Black Tower Doll, but he should also have the ability to create a clone to make up for it, right? Let's start with business. The soul master doesn't care about businessmen. He uses the iron fist of capitalism to attack the feudal theocratic dictatorship. He can also write a hidden line. The character of the protagonist, as mentioned before in terms of ability, does not look like a researcher in terms of personality. He looks like a mean kitten who wants to stretch out his claws to play with everything. Maybe the author will reconsider it. Of course, the above are just small suggestions. Reading is naturally for happiness. Hello, me, everyone is the best.