Creation Soul Path

Let's encourage each other. Since readers have not read many romance novels, they will not comment too much on the plot. The setting is a setting where the male and female protagonists swap bodies, such as Your Name, Yamada-kun and the 7-man Witch, and The Hero is a Girl. These works are of this type and you can take a look and learn from them. Of course they are all very good-looking. ps: When I first read the introduction, I thought it was of the familiar type of Zero: The Familiar. The scene transition is a bit confusing and vague. It should be noted in this regard that the switching of multi-person perspective has a great impact on the perception of this type of novel, which is a point deduction. It is recommended to modify the world setting more so that readers can understand it at a glance. Some settings are really confusing. ps again: the author doesn't have chapter names, it seems like he is a bad namer like me. And whether there will be a war between the two worlds in the follow-up plot like the fantasy Self-Defense Forces? Of course, romance novels should deliberately obscure this aspect. As for the content, it is recommended to polish it more. Some of the content is rough and it affects the look and feel. Similarly, the author can completely ignore the above content. It is just a little suggestion. There is no need to be discouraged or angry. PS again: Please come and read my novels and give me some criticism and suggestions.