
Why Does the Narrator Slander Me Every Day?
旁白怎么天天诋毁我?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 137k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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60Chapters
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There is something about this setting. The protagonist is the chief planner before traveling through the game world. The plot and gameplay are determined by the protagonist, but the vertical painting is an unknown one. The plot characters are only known because the protagonist has played the game many times. So are the chief planner and illustrator usually conducting double-blind experiments?
Classic sunny and cheerful torture series, I've read four or five of them
Stretch, muttering to himself in an extraordinary world, a classic poisonous point
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The writing is still okay, it has its own style and ideas, and a relatively complete world view, but it weakens the level of strength, which may cause the problem of combat power collapse later. Generally speaking, it belongs to the card-making series. Regarding programming magic, it is mentioned less frequently (it seems that the author learned Python). It is done well in one stroke. Writing too much will affect the perception. The current rhythm is most likely daily, making cards and downloading dungeons. The most necessary and important thing here is card making. If the effect mechanism of the card can attract people's attention, I will also be willing to subscribe. I haven't seen a card that I like more. The protagonist is a cult character, so the effect of the card is just a general curse, pain, and debuff, which is not good enough. It needs a real core to highlight the protagonist's fighting style. There are very few scenes depicting battles, and it is estimated that there will be a lack of realism in the future. The dungeon is fine so far, but there is still the same problem, the lack of battle scenes. If you keep solving puzzles, the style of the dungeon will be fixed, which will lead to aesthetic fatigue. My suggestion is to try as many scenes as possible. There are pilgrimages of saints, ascensions to gods, beast-fighting arenas, battlefields, blood feasts in ancient castles, eternal nights in forests, and wanderings in deserts. If you change the scene as much as possible, the copy can naturally be tiled without losing the freshness. In daily life, looking at people, there is not much to say. It's just that the Semi-Human Academy is a bit difficult. Is the author playing Arknights? In the entire academy, there are very few people without horns on their heads, which is really strange.
😐Another one has served the emperor
It seems pretty good so far, but after reading too much of this kind, I can probably guess a more likely follow-up that I don't like very much, so I'll give it a try first and wait to see if there is such a follow-up after I finish it.
Adding narration and cards is a good idea
The appearance of the narration in the first 6 chapters is just right. It can be seen that it has been obviously refined. After that, the narration sometimes seems to have been forgotten by the author, and even if it appears, it has no effect. I hope the author will figure out what the purpose of this narration is every time it appears? Create contrast? Funny? Shape the atmosphere? Write after making sure.
The works belong to a relatively classic but still innovative genre, and traces of reference can be seen in many places. This is not a bad thing. It also represents a mature and established brand. The structure is relatively stable, and the follow-up is relatively guaranteed. The Ai hope-style narration is a good starting point and a golden finger. Comparatively speaking, the narration in the first few chapters is more characteristic of Ai Xi and can attract attention quickly. In the later chapters, it can be quickly and naturally turned into its own use and promote the plot. What is commendable is its unique writing style. It is similar but different from the more nonsensical styles such as Lanci, and I hope to continue to maintain the textual essence. Judging from the current stage of new books, it can at least be regarded as being on the upper side of food and grass, and grass jelly... Is a bit reluctant. On the one hand, it depends on the same period and the market, and there is still a gap in itself. The difficulty lies in maintaining the writing style and quality (although the writing style is good, it should not be AI. At present, there have been less obvious fluctuations in some states, but this is also the problem. It is still in the seedling stage.) Get rid of the traces of borrowing and create a more unique plot of your own, as well as the common weakness in the later stages of the same type - should it be said that it is worthy of being a starting point for proving the dojo. Looking forward to maintaining the standard and continuing to make breakthroughs in the future, keep working hard.
Familiar settings
There is a book about a plan to travel to another world. Does the author have any clues?
It's good to read. There are few new books that I can read recently.
Are you a eunuch?😭😭😭
Halfway through, I realized that I was serving the emperor.
ε=(´ο`*)))Oh, it's a eunuch
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