Qingyun Ji

The writing is really good at the beginning, but the story behind it is not so good. The plot is unreasonable because there are no plug-ins, and the protagonist has too little initiative, no ability, and can't do anything.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               . The correct story should be: Ye Chen went to measure spiritual roots, and was coerced by the "immortal" to go to Black Mountain. He met Beigong Chan, a girl from the sect who came out to experience. After being rescued, Beigong Chan refused to enter the mountain. Beigong Chan entered Black Mountain and was in danger and fell into a coma. Entering the Black Mountain, Goldfinger Qingyun uses his power to directly absorb the magical herbs and gives the protagonist a basic skill. Goldfinger senses the unconscious girl Beigong Chan. After rescuing her, he sends the girl out of the mountain due to taboos in the mountain. The two say goodbye reluctantly, leaving a hook to pave the way for the next chapter.         ，，，，，，a，，……        Entering the ancestral cemetery, it turns out that the fog was deliberately set by the ancestors, the protagonist was taken away, and the golden finger Qingyun exerted his power.        ，，"""，"……   Then we start with the protagonist's golden finger: What is the protagonist's golden finger? A blue cloud in my mind and consciousness pointed out the title of the novel. What's the use of the old saying at the beginning? So much ink wasted at the beginning. It should be hinted that the old man is a big shot. He wants to collect the golden finger from the protagonist and pretends to be a mortal to get close to the protagonist, but he has never found it. Where does the golden finger come from? It is transformed into a simple stone left by my late father. What is the function? Increase your training speed, simulate martial arts secrets, and improve your understanding... Anyway, it's fun to cheat The protagonist Ye Chen is called to test the spiritual roots. There is a plot where the protagonist wants to report Li Dapeng and take the opportunity to extort money. This paragraph can be used to design a plot. The protagonist is like a clear college student who has just emerged from society. He thinks that reporting on Li Dafu can stop him.        ，，，""，，，， The protagonist Ye Chen gradually understands that the world of immortality relies on qualifications and strength, not morality. By the way, shape the world view and respect strength. Finally, come on, author!

Awesome! It's so beautiful, I can't stop

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What is the use of the supreme position? With cultivation, you will come as soon as you shout, and you will go as soon as you wave it.

The title of the book is good. At first glance, I thought of Zhu Xian