Zongwang: Rewards for the Self-Disciplined

I can't watch anymore. I saw two skills in Chapter 20 that I haven't used once and don't know what their use is. The professional skills given at the beginning have never been used. The skills that are drawn later don't even have explanations. What are you doing?

There is basically nothing wrong with setting up the plot, but the overall writing style is a bit too chatty, and the large-scale family interactions are too much and too frequent. It's not that this plot is unnecessary, but that this kind of plot should be an auxiliary interspersed between the main courses, but the author's current arrangement has been a bit reversed. To put it to the extreme, the 20 or so days he waited for could have been skipped in just two or three chapters, instead of the 20 or so chapters now taking up almost half of the total.

Investigation report: "No." -349 Investigation target: "Zongwang: The Reward of the Self-Disciplined" - Male Protagonist - [Chen Liluan] Investigation Result: [Borrowing a Corpse to Resurrection] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on August 28, 2025

What the hell is this name? It makes me uncomfortable. Sometimes I can't tell the difference between the elder brother and the second brother.

They are: ghost, fishman, goblin

Those who are willing to buy the magic way might as well be the righteous way. This is an ancient person, and he still has an official family. Really 6

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① You want to write about growth, but if you advance the plot too slowly, you will lose readers. ②Self-discipline means setting a goal and moving in that direction, rather than laying the foundation for everything. ③ When creating your character, look at the profession and version descriptions to favor legion combat. But are you moving towards the mage now, Fatan (or Gandalf)? ④ The professions given by the comprehensive network are very strong, but if you have a part-time role in a late-stage profession before the main profession is mentioned, it is still a joke to lower the level. Suggestion: As for the description of your own plane, I suggest that you increase the progress of the dungeon and intersperse some daily routines, then conquer the world with absolute strength, then evolve the world, and use the world as a resource point to conquer the infinite world. At this time, whether you are writing about small group battles, large-scale legion battles, or direct world wars, you have many writing points. (You can write about abyss, hell, the evil camp's lair, or even develop the world and improve the world standards. The comprehensive website is an alternative time travel to infinity made up of copies and funny messages. It is a growth-type cool article protected by a mother. It is a guaranteed legendary road to the throne of God. The above is for reference only

The writing is a bit messy, but the plot is high. It is recommended that the author polish it, and this section should be divided into sections.

I have too little experience and I can't make a judgment I feel very entangled and anxious I hope the almighty netizens can give me some suggestions and requirements.