Devour: the Ancestor Fell at the Beginning, but I Will Kill the Immortal with My Sword

Aboriginal, I don't think I can write a few pictures.

It makes me laugh to death. Only the overlord of the universe "deserves" the top soul treasure. A peak soul attack can break the defense. Doesn't the author understand the mechanics of weapons and armor, or does he care about obscene writing? I don't know if the armor does not break the defense if it reaches the upper limit, but if the upper limit of defense is exceeded, the attack will be weakened by a percentage? Forget about ordinary soul defense treasures, or you can say that the most rubbish soul treasures are defeated by the invincible soul masters in a decisive battle, but one is the top and the other is the peak king. The overlord of the universe is not impressive at all. Persuade to retreat, persuade to retreat!

Natives, what are you doing? The sense of immersion is poor

Swallowing the Starry Sky If you write fandom about indigenous people, you will probably be thrown into the street 🙂

I know why Devouring fandoms are offended when they write about natives, because in Devouring, a world view that treats low-level geniuses as slaves, such a cesspit world, in the words of a plane butterfly, in such a deep ruined area, without a variable like Chairman Cheng, it is still a dream. Write an Aboriginal protagonist. The natives only deserve to die; they cannot and do not deserve to rise. Not only does the worldview prevent him from rising, but high-dimensional readers will also not agree that an indigenous person can rise.

There is no one who doesn't like it when a fan writes about indigenous people. Although I don't read it, I hope the author can succeed. Come on.

I only read the comment section for primitive Aboriginal novels

Chapter 28 Just Charge Are You Crazy for Being Poor? Top soul treasure, even Luo Feng's second senior brother has to go to Luo Feng to borrow it. You tell me that a Zerg Queen can break it open? Isn't it possible to write like this?

One of the most important selling points of fan fiction is the foresight This is not only the protagonist's sense of superiority, but also the reader's sense of superiority... "Hey, I know what you are going to do next, I'm so awesome" People who read fan fiction read with the mentality of "I know what's going to happen next, and I just want to know how you make it up" Fan fiction writes about natives, just wait and see.

Chapter 30 wasn't even released on the shelves, but it was already sold out.

No matter how well you write about indigenous people, you will be thrown into the street!

A lot of things are common sense errors that will make people laugh to death. Looking at the title of the book, it's about a fanfic about Devouring the Starry Sky, but you can't just randomly change the common sense grounding, right? Originally one plus one equals two, but when you wrote it down, it actually got three. It is recommended that when you write a book, you should make a logical outline of the original work, and add the things you want to write in this outline. For example: the timeline of Swallowed Starry Sky, character settings, ethnic group settings, character levels, combat power elements, value settings, etc. Are compiled into an outline. Based on this, you can conceive your own plot points, intersperse characters, form new character conflicts, and trigger a series of story lines. In this way, the fanfic you write will complement the blank areas of the original work. There won't be so many embarrassing places.

The natives can't do it. How can we change our destiny without travelers?

It's so long-winded, especially the fight. There are so many long-winded chapters, shouldn't I just use my ultimate move? ? ? ? ? What about this turn-based system?

No respect for the original work at all. This novel has been sold out

Charging starts at chapter 27, awesome

Are you sure you want to write about indigenous people? It's still too late to change the chapters now

Which fanfic about indigenous people has started to be written?

Writing about indigenous people will reduce readers by at least 90%

Now is the period of testing the waters. I beg all the handsome guys and beauties to read the latest chapter. This is very important to the author and is related to the subsequent recommendations and results of this book! It would be great if you could vote for more monthly votes and recommendation votes. The author would be very grateful!

Not to mention the shoddy writing, the book was charged even before it reaches thirty chapters.

In January 2015, the r virus turned into the rr virus, killing 2 billion in three months In September 2015, countless monsters launched an attack In 2018, on June 16, 39-year-old Dong Nanbiao killed a tiger-headed dragon on the banks of the Yangtze River In March 2021, laser cannons killed two king-level monsters, and the war ended. 2026, Hongze Lake, Battle of Hongze 2038, June 8, Luo Feng was born June 7, 2056, college entrance examination June 28, 2056, receive graduation certificate and volunteer application br>July 1, 2056, quasi-warrior assessment August 1, 2056, warrior actual combat assessment August 28, 2056, Fire Hammer Team went out for the first time October 7, 2056, Fire Hammer Team A month after the team purchased the genetic medicine, Luo Feng met Xu Gang Luo Feng practiced swordsmanship for 50 days On November 30, 2056, Luo Feng transferred 50 million to his younger brother On December 2, 2056, Saturday, the battle The funeral of Shen Lu Gang Entered the 003 city three days later, hunted for half a month, killed the Huya Team, and was offered a reward On January 8, 2057, Luo Feng sold the armored dragon egg for 5 billion and the SS sword for 8 billion and the SS vest for 15 billion On February 26, 2057, Luo Feng came to the Extreme Martial Arts Gym for testing On March 1, 2057, Thursday, the Fire Hammer Team entered the wilderness area again On March 12, 2057, the Fire Hammer Team sold materials for the last time 20 On March 21, 2057, met Wei Wen and Xu Xin On March 28, 2057, went to the elite training camp On March 29, 2057, Chu Qiang held a banquet On March 30, 2057, William provoked Luo Feng On March 31, 2057, Luo Feng defeated William On April 26, 2057, passed the first level c stage On April 28, 2057, passed the second level ab stage On April 30, 2057, signed Signing an incentive contract July 29, 2057, Luo Feng and Candace's gambling battle July 30, 2057, Luo Feng's combat power amplitude 12 August 1, 2057, Hong appeared, traveling to Australia Jiangnan Base City The president is Zhou Yongzheng, and the three chief managers are Zhuge Tao, Wang Kefan and Yu Sen. 3515——3516 God of War Planet level 52, Extreme Martial Arts 8, Thunder Martial Arts 6, Mercenaries 7/8, HR Consecration 5/6, Five Powers + Base City 25, A few days later, the God of War Palace on August 15, 2057 Auction On August 26, 2057, Commander Li Dawei of the Southeast Military Region, Luo Feng, with the rank of "Army Major General", On August 31, 2057, he was notified to enter the ancient civilization ruins On September 1, 2057, Luo Feng inspected the banquet. Mayor Ye Zhong, the head of the Xu family, Xu Yunguo, the head of the Ye family, Ye Yifan, the assistant commander of children's education in the Northern Military Region, and the supervisor of the thunder and lightning martial arts hall Lei Meng On September 29, 2057, Luo Feng went to the ruins of ancient civilization On December 26, 2058, Luo Feng unearthed the ruins of ancient civilization On January 1, 2059, the spiritual teacher planet level 2059 On January 5, Luo Feng took over as the inspector The Battle of Muyajing In the spaceship, the Warrior Planet On January 12, 2060, Luo Feng gave Xu Xin eternal love On January 13, 2060, the golden-horned beast was born On January 14, 2060, Luo Feng killed 37 king-level monsters On January 16, 2060, Luo Feng gave Hong Lei Shen weapons March 2060, Buro went to Earth September 15, 2060, Xu Xin gave birth to Luo Ping and Luo Hai November 22, 2060, Xu Xin committed suicide December 3, 2061, went to Mars In the spring of 2062, Hong and Lei Shen woke up In the summer of 2062, killed the Thunder Dragon Huang The second level of the realm of the 8th level of Huang Hong, the first level of the 9th level of the Thor planetary level, and the 8th level of Luo Feng's planetary level spiritual master Basics, artistic conception, domain, world, On October 29, 2062, Luo Feng came back from the Horned Dragon Planet to hold a meeting On November 23, 2062, Buro invaded the earth The Carlo Empire, the first three elementary empires. The Nuolanshan family, the third family, a thousand-life planet. February 21, 2063, Pula went to Earth April to November 2063, Thunder World, Realm within a Realm Mingyu transferred 20 billion cosmic coins and sold 48 treasures to the Universe Galaxy and Galaxy and received 11.23 Trillion cosmic coins. December 26, 2063, Golden Horned Behemoth Universe Level 2063 Two years of training October 25, 2065, Luo Feng Star Level Seventh Level 2065 1 On October 28, Baikaluo arrived on Earth December 16, 2065, Qianwu Auction, once every three years Three-star account deposited 10 trillion cosmic coins March 9, 2066, hanging list On April 16, 2066, the registration for the genius battle ended On May 16, 2066, the preliminaries took one month On July 17, 2066, the arena competition began, and the arena melee lasted for 5 days July 23, 2066, the final of the arena competition, one game per day July 26, 2066, the fourth match of the two-by-two battle in the arena, Luo Feng vs. Savage On July 30, 2066, the reincarnation battle began. March 2, 2069, the last day of the reincarnation war. September 6, 2070, the decisive battle of genius battle 1000*1000 September 18, 2071, Luo Feng went to the Virtual Universe Company 30 years of the original universe, 100 years of the original universe 2074, entering the initial universe 8 months after Bolan's third level, On June 9, 2075, Luo Feng obtained "Falling Snow" In September 2075, Gu Siluo and Long Yun passed the first level In January 2076, Luo Feng experienced enlightenment for the second time for 7 days 2076-2077, Wuka, Qianshui first level At the end of the fourth year of Chaos City, 1,000 people passed the first level Layer In August 2082, 22-year-old Luo Ping got married and had a child 2086, the base city expanded 2089, Luo Hai entered the universe 2092, built a city on an island in the sea 2099, Mars was transformed 2103, Luo Feng's grandson got married >4 years in Chaos City, Rongjun 2 floors 7 years in Chaos City, 2 floors in Tao 8 years in Chaos City, 2 floors in Gusiluo, Longyun, and Galaixi 9 years in Chaos City, 2 floors in Qianshui and Wuka, 4 floors in Bolan 10 years in Chaos City, Luo Feng's first set of swordsmanship in "Falling Snow", passed the 2 and 3 floors, and became the main level of the Golden Horned Behemoth Domain. Luo Feng became a disciple 13 years in Chaos City, 3rd floor of Rongjun 19th year in Chaos City, 4th floor of Luo Feng, 5th floor of Bo Lan 21 years of Chaos City, 3rd floor of Wuka 25 years of Chaos City, 3rd floor of Longyun and Jialaixi 28 years in Chaos City, Qianshui 3rd floor 30 years in Chaos City, Rong Jun 4th floor, Luo Feng 5th floor, Bo Lan 6th floor 2174, body universe level 2 years after leaving Chaos City, Luo Feng 6th floor Blood The 80th year of Luo World, there are still 6 years left for the once-in-a-century qualification battle 7th floor of Luo Fengtong Overpass 2262, qualification battle 2268, the inheritance of the magic sound ends 11 years of mopping up mission In 2279, breaking through the domain master Domain master level, Taichu, the lowest level is 8, primitive, the lowest level is 10 levels, one person has 11 levels In 2280, to Qiongyu Star, to the earth Fifty years of feudal officialdom 233 Year 0, Territory Lord Level Mission, Year 1, Go to the Golden Horn Clan 2331, Golden Horn Behemoth Realm Lord Level, recognized by Golden Rule Beast God Statue Year 182 2513, Return to Earth to control the Zerg Brood, Wei Wenheng Star, Di Fen Realm Lord Level 2514, went to the Mother Star Territory, Taobao for two years 2518, Territory Lord's highest points task, the earth was sold 2519, went to the initial universe 281 In 9 years, he understood the essence of 108 and passed through 12 levels, 10 levels of immortality, 15 titles, 18 titles, and 21 venerables Bo Lan passed 8 levels, Luo Feng passed 8 levels, 9 levels, 10 levels, 11 levels, 12 levels, and 13 levels, and the Lord of Chaos City accepted a named disciple br>2837, Territory Lord Qualification Battle In 5519, 800 years after the Lord of Chaos City accepted his disciples, he entered the original universe 900 years ago, and the original universe 3000 years ago, Bolan became the original secret realm master, and Rong Jun became the Taichu secret realm master. Cosmic level Tongtian Mountain, 12 floors, 100 million points. Domain Lord Mountain, 16 floors, 3 billion points. Realm Lord Mountain, 20 floors, 100 billion points. The first qualification battle for the original secret realm master, the 1 billionth point, the 2nd to the 10th and 300th, and the 11th to 100 and the 100th. The fifth picture of Jiuyu Chaos Monument, the first transformation of the beast god, 15th floor. The personal disciple of the Lord of Chaos City and the Lord of the Human Realm. In 6519, 300 years after the initial universe, we left the initial universe. In 6540, Taobao's 21st year, the first set of generals. Lord level 9 of Luo Haiyu. In 6579, Taobao's 60th year, the second set of generals. Go to the battlefield outside the territory, Wusha Island for a hundred years, the ordinary "New Seven Swords" 7879, 1200, the peak "Ming Yue Ce" 7882, the three-year sacrifice to the mainland to seize the treasure, the second calamity. In 8068, the 189th year of the Yan Festival on the Mainland, the treasures of the pagoda were sacrificed. In 8069, the King of Daohe. In 14161, the Star Tower successfully recognized its owner. In 14170, after sleeping for 9 years, I woke up. Ice Prison, Ancestral God Religion. It takes 30,000 years to create unique knowledge and 50,000 years to wander the universe. In the year 97,000, the original star was opened, The Starry Sky Behemoth Alliance accelerated its cultivation ten thousand times for 180 million years. In 115,000 years, the original star killed and became the Lord of the Universe. I killed 6,000 Universe Lords for the Secret of the Universe. Achieve the status of the Lord of the Universe. Earth returned. Moro was immortal thirty thousand years ago, at the peak of his feudal status. Bolan Rongjun was granted the title of immortal king. Hong Lei Shen is immortal. Wei Wenyu's main level is ninth level. In 118,000, he broke into the cosmic sea, and obtained the most powerful treasure with the giant ax The Duandong River inheritance started 148,000, Luo Feng received the Duandong River inheritance 157,000, after accepting the Duandong River inheritance In 158,000, Luo Feng returned to the original universe The giant ax fell, the Beacon Frontier, and the true god of the post-war Chaos City. Eight million years later, the world of Jin In the second era, Luo Feng obtained the Lieyuan Technique In the third era, Luo Feng had the authority to kill the masters of 443 universes The masters of the 4 universes of the monster clan, the masters of the vassal 5 universes The masters of the 6 universes of the Zerg Alliance, In the seventh era, the First Lord obtained the secret technique of burning divine power and mechanical treasures, which were on par with Luo Feng. In the 91st era, Lord Zhenyan broke through the Lord of the Universe, the third after breaking the East River In the 1003rd era, the second true god Peng Gong In the 3405th era, the gene was 60,000 times ⏩72,000 times In the 13,000th era, the Lord of the Universe was Hong. At this moment, there are 32 Lords of the Universe in mankind, and 9 Lords of the Earth, including the God of Thunder. In the 39000th era, Hu Yanbo, the Venerable Universe, has 50,000 Venerables in the human race. In the 53000th era, Venerable Luo Hai, the third Universe Venerable of the Luo family, In the 91000th era, Luo Zhenni was accepted as a disciple by Luo Feng In the 91200th era, Venerable Luo Zhenni was the Universe Venerable. In the 330,000th epoch, the 'Fire Dome' was born in the territory of the original prison tribe In the 1910,000th epoch, the third true god of the human race, Darkness In the 9,200,000th epoch, Luo Feng's genes increased 72,000 to 85,000 times In the 100 millionth epoch, the fourth true god of mankind, Huangjian br>The 700 millionth era, humanity's fifth true god Qingdong A million more epochs later, Huo Qiong became a true god The 1200 millionth era, humanity's seventh true god Bingfeng The 19th billion era, humanity's eighth true god Long Xing The 10 billion era, humanity's 21 true gods, the master of 239 universes. Hongmeng 7 True God 1220 Lord of the Universe. Yaozu 4 True God 51 Lord of the Universe. Zerg 2 True God 32 Lord of the Universe. Machine Tribe 2 True God 39 Lord of the Universe. The Hell Clan 4 True God 78 Lord of the Universe. Crystal Clan 5 True God 49 Lord of the Universe. In the 1600 billion era, the 23rd true god Hong of mankind. Luo Feng's 89999 times life gene level In the 1630 billion era, the dark place of Hong and Tong Demon God. Eight Heroes Gathering: Jue He, Divine Eye, Bei Chi, Skeleton Lord, Nine-Headed Demon Lord, Jiuyou, Chaos, Luo Feng World beasts appeared. Thousands of years later, Luo Feng became a true god and killed world beasts. Tens of thousands of epochs later, the world of Jin left. More than 10 billion years ago, the True God Ximo of the Youhai lineage. After more than six trillion epochs, the original universe ended. There are 98 true gods of mankind and 1,222 lords of the universe. Bolan Rongjun, the God of Thunder, Nako, the Lord of the Universe, and the Lord of the Uka Universe. Virtual Universe Company 5: Lord of Chaos City 5, Lord of Darkness 5, Lord of Ice Peak 4, Lord of Dragon Walk 4, Lord of Youhou 3 Giant Ax Arena 5: Lord of Xujin 4, Lord of Yanshan, Lord of Lanzang Cosmic Mercenary Alliance 3: Lord of Huangjian 4 Universe Galaxy 3: Lord of Qingdong 4 Universe Galaxy Galaxy 2: Lord of Peng Gong 5 Lord of Darkness Beginner, Normal, Peak, Top, Top of the Top Monster Tribe: 2 True Gods, 20+ Lords of the Universe, 21 Top Universe Overlords. 16 Top cosmic overlord clans. Zerg: 1 True God, Lord of the Young Universe, 2 Top Universe Overlord. 81Universe Overlord. 9 Top overlord clans. Mechanical race: 1 True God, Lord of the Young Universe, 4 Top Universe Overlord. 12 Top universe overlord clans. . Crystal Tribe: 1 True God, 15 Lords of the Universe . The third level of the Yanshen Weapon and the three swords = the 1st floor of the Tongtian Bridge The fourth level of the Yanshen Weapon = the 4th floor of the Tongtian Bridge The fifth level of the Yanshen Weapon = the 5th and 6th floors of the Tongtian Bridge The sixth level of the Yanshen Weapon = the 7th and 9th floors of the Tongtian Bridge The seventh level of the Yanshen Weapon = the 10th floor of the Tongtian Bridge The eighth level of the Yanshen Weapon = the 11th and 12th floors of the Tongtian Bridge The ninth level of the Yanshen Weapon = the 13th floor of the Tongtian Bridge The first floor of the Star Tower, the ultimate secret method of the Lord of the Universe. The second floor of the Star Tower is the most powerful secret method of the Lord of the Universe. The third level of the Crazy Demon Destroyer Armor, the Lord of the Universe fuses the most powerful secret method. The third floor of the Star Tower, the sixth level top secret method. The fourth floor of the Star Tower, the seventh-level top secret method. The fifth floor of Star Tower, the eighth level secret method. The sixth floor of the Star Tower, the top of the eighth level. The seventh floor of the Star Tower, the ninth level.

Why is the book of creation worth more than tomatoes?

Is this crazy? Fan fiction also writes about indigenous people. There is a lump on the skull.

After reading so many articles, do you have to join the Virtual Universe Company? You can also join other forces.

The Lord of the virtual universe saw the protagonist being enslaved by the soul. I remember that the soul enslavement only lasted a moment, and even the Lord could not save him. Then after the Zerg kings used enslavement, they saw that the protagonist could resist, and several kings stood still. If they didn't hit the protagonist until he fell asleep, they would naturally be able to enslave successfully or directly kill him. Also, the protagonist has a top-level soul-type heavy treasure. Since the king's peak soul attack is only weakened into a normal king's soul attack. Moreover, several great kings are still grinding away at the peak of the human race to kill the masters of the world. Shouldn't this be a matter of a few seconds? After killing, they can directly leave the Kingdom of God and give the protagonist time to strengthen his will.

Just look at the catalog and you'll see what a big deal it is. . The enemy comes to visit, and the mastermind behind the scenes appears. The protagonist turns the tide, pretends to be a slap in the face, and saves the family from danger. . . Good work should be rewarded. . . .