Douluo: Become a God from Devouring

The author writes well, but the sense of crisis is the same as that of wholesale. Crisis often comes from the unknown. Once you know it, you will judge the situation. The innate soul power itself is of great value. If you want to hide a grain of sand, just throw it into a pile of sand. It is very fragmented. As a time traveler, the protagonist also has a system. In my opinion, this system is not very powerful. The storage enhancements and upgrades are all good, so why is it not good at all? As an adult, there are good and bad, and there are opportunities in every crisis. If you are a child, you are paranoid and naive, and the environment must cater to you. Every communication and every description is said to be in line with the character, which is too rigid. Tang San felt a sense of crisis when communicating with him, he felt a sense of crisis when communicating with Old Jack, he felt a sense of crisis when he looked at Tang Hao, and he also felt a sense of crisis when he entered the Seventh House. Except for Su Yuntao, this sense of crisis never stops. What I can't stand is Qishe, who is so crying. The master said you are a waste, but you show that you are a waste of martial arts, and you are the top loser in Douluo Continent. All reasonableness and conformity are completely inconsistent with previous life and time travel, haha. Each one has a powerful aura and an undisguised gaze. Is it worthy of this sewer world? Author, you have a serious mental illness. You don't want any readers to read what you wrote for yourself. You also want to write about cowards on floor tiles. I admit that some of the ideas and writing methods are good, but it's hard to read when you write like this. When I awakened my martial soul, I almost wanted to leave. I just wanted to see the development later, or was it not like that? These shortcomings need to be greatly improved in this book. If they can be improved, it will not be a problem to make it a high-quality book. It's all about the sense of crisis and the haze in my heart. I don't want to look at this kind of wholesale product.