American Horror: the Exorcist

Don't go back to the national water word count and pretend to be a slap in the face later in the writing. Just keep it level and finish it after four or five hundred chapters.

Is there a Shennong? What is this heavenly master? American Iai? Or traditional Chinese exorcism?

Is The Phantom of the Opera original? Why can't I find movies?

It is recommended to strengthen the image of the protagonist at the beginning. For example, the name is more catchy than that of the supporting characters. It would be good to add labels to the supporting characters, such as that little black one. After all, they are all foreign names. Reading the first few pictures is a bit tiring. If you can't recognize the person, you will lack a sense of immersion if you can't recognize the protagonist. There will be less desire to read. Also, add some detailed background descriptions to establish the character first, and then the plot. Come on💪💪💪

Alas, these authors just cut each other off. They all have their own reasons, and they don't have to force you to write. Why are they always like this? They don't even say hello. There is really a lack of basic respect between readers and authors.

It's my favorite subject matter, but there are too few