Rebirth 83: Become a Big Boss in a Small Town

Don't give up, I feel it's okay, author, keep working hard

Don't give up. I feel like if you continue, you might explode.

The routine of the short play is that in my previous life, I was ignorant and lived a miserable life. I want to make up for my regrets in this life. I want to say that I don't deserve it?

When you write emotional dramas, just write emotional dramas. You are like a kitten. Silly women look so embarrassing. Why do so many novels have protagonists who are so ambitious and so mean when they see women?

County town, boss Writing about life, you didn't write out a sense of the times that readers can relate to, it's all messy plots. The things that are truly characteristic of the times, how they affect the protagonist, and how the protagonist responds, are not written in that way. Big brother, where is your information? After being reborn, the first three pictures are no different from a native. How do you let readers take the role and realize the sense of expectation? If you are not a big boss and have no motivation, then isn't it just daily writing about farming? This is probably my first time writing, and it feels like a waste of emotion.

Chunchun Sinovac played too many games, and then there were too many short dramas.

"Starting Again from 1981", daily writing, can you guys help me read it and make corrections?

Recommend this book, "Starting Again from 1981", no matter how bad the author's data is, it will not be cut off

It's pretty. . Cut the chicken feathers. . Men need to have staying power. . I'll give you a reward when it's put on the shelves later

The writing is not bad, but the motivation to follow the reading is really not enough. The plot is too bland, and one scene can only be described once every day. There is also a need to change the way you think about making money. After all, you know where the opportunities are in the future. Then it is important to accumulate capital quickly. For example, if Baozi makes money, then it can run a school.

If you can write more, I will read more. If not, I will read more of others.

After being reborn, I watched a lot every second. This kind of down-to-earth life after rebirth is surprisingly good. I hope the author can keep writing.

Recommend this book, "Starting Over from 1981"

The writing is smooth, the characters are slightly exaggerated but vivid, and the plot is compact and reasonable, which shows that the author has life experience. It would be better if there were more descriptions of the environment to highlight the atmosphere of the era. All in all, it's a good work so far.

I saw the latest chapter, Chapter 35, and overall it's pretty good. The positive attitude is great. The plot development is also good. The characterization at the beginning is too dull, too cliche and unlikable.

The writing is pretty good, don't get into the habit of cutting it.

The book is well written with smooth logic and tight rhythm.

The rhythm seems to be good so far, keep it up and don't overdo the content, I think it will become popular

Gu King Struggle

Don't get carried away with the plot, it's pretty good now.

So there is absolutely no charge for novels that don't have 1 million words.

This book is still very good, the content is very good, it's a pity to cut it

Don't cut it! The data will be good as soon as the update is completed. The plot is only starting to gain momentum now. You said you want to cut it? Give it a little more time, at least put it on the shelf

There are only a few in Sanjiang. At least this book is finished. I read a lot of books about The Eunuch by many authors, and then I wrote several books about The Eunuch and then didn't write any.

I like your writing style, it's not AI writing at first glance

Woc, I cut it as soon as I posted a new tweet 😰

It's really nice, it feels a bit like a small fishing village. I should buy a house and open a shop in the county in the future, and have a baby as soon as possible. Come on!

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