I Was a Literary Figure During World War II

The overall quality of the book is very good, and it is to my liking. It is worth reading. The quality is at the top level for the same period. It is not enough to read. The author should update it soon.

Seeing this, the author has a somewhat complicated experience with this book, for many reasons, but I would like to say that the first sentence is that many people in the book review area have opinions about the tooth powder incident that "it is not necessary to write about it", "it is more satisfying to open a harem than to write like this", "the protagonist is haunted by the mother's heart", etc., The author's point of view is... Why not write it, write it, write it ruthlessly, write it without touching the line, and push those opinions that have nothing to do with you into the corner! ! ! As mentioned in the preface, now returning the perspective to the article itself, the author has a certain understanding of American society during World War II. However, the author sees that many in-depth authors still lack the courage. It is recommended to read similar books on the platform and official regulations, and try to go as deep as possible without crossing the line, so as to understand the text of the article. The quality of the article plays a big role in promoting The other is the issue of writing style. Large paragraphs of misplaced metaphors may lead to a strong "AI" flavor in the article, and also make it difficult for readers to really get closer to the article. After all, the writing method of era articles must first be down-to-earth, deeply rooted in the social consciousness of that era, and refine the text to be more simple. , This is probably the author's writing level reaching the "final kick" of first-line authors Also, back to the tooth powder incident, the author noticed that one of the book reviews said that he was not opposed to writing about this incident, but the plot was too rigid. This is also the author's point of view. This kind of incident should be written ruthlessly, but the entry point and plot design It needs to be more mellow. It does seem a bit deliberate at the moment. Of course, this may also be caused by the chapter being a little short and not enough foreshadowing at the point where the conflict should arise. And the choice of events is too... Well, how to put it, without describing the specific situation of the factory and the tragic situation of the victimized babies, using this plot to stir up conflicts does seem a bit "pointy" Of course, it does not mean that the weight of this incident is insufficient. It is obvious from this plot that the author is cautious. He wants to write about the bad social nature of the tooth powder incident, but he does not want to write it too ugly. In other words, he is not sure whether this kind of social ugliness can be widely accepted by readers The author's opinion is, either don't write it, Or write it thoroughly. There is a point in the article that "writers draw nutrients from pain", but how come the author does not dare to squeeze out the pain when writing? The story structure observed by the author may be that the author plans to write this part in the later text from the perspective of the book written by the protagonist, but this is a layer that is originally composed of the author's words. On top of "frosted glass", a layer of "frosted glass" constructed by the protagonist's text In essence, I want to cover up the incident, so that the blood only leaves rusty red window grilles on the surface of the glass. This is not to say that this tender and affectionate model is not good, but it lacks impact. The author will easily feel the consequences of wanting to satisfy all readers as he goes on. On the contrary, the pressure of being thankless on both sides will greatly affect the author's mentality, and may even cause this good article to end without a problem. This is a behavior that will cause pressure and regret for both the reader and the author In addition, the author here would like to know from what standpoint the protagonist stands to do this. If it is the standpoint of a sympathizer, The only difference between the protagonist and those aristocrats who sang and danced at the ball and went out to do charity to satisfy their kindness is that he was once a low-class person struggling to survive in society, but he soon forgot about it due to the class jump The author prefers that the protagonist stands with the persecuted workers and children at the bottom of the article. The same people can really do this from this perspective, not because of any class narrative or slogan that makes more sense, but because from the former perspective, logically speaking, this thing cannot be done because of "lack of motivation". The social unrest caused by the revelation of this kind of thing cannot be too small, and the protagonist has family and friends. The class has jumped, but will this kind of mentality of doing good every day make the protagonist willing to pay the "price"? It makes no sense logically. The final result is that calling for change will inevitably become shouting slogans. Nothing can be changed without pain or iteration, but the protagonist is very likely to suffer "unreasonable disasters", and the protagonist's family and friends are also very likely to suffer "unreasonable disasters". At the same time, The power of emotion is not enough, and the power of concentricity can bring about change, but you must first judge whether you want the reputation of "calling for change", or whether you really want to change Of course this is the author's personal idea, and the author of the book has the final say. The author just "hopes" to see a comrade, not a sympathizer. If the author has read " "How Steel Was Tempered", you can roughly understand what the author means by the difference between Paul and Tonya. I don't want to outline this issue online, but there are too many works like this on the platform, and there are too many authors who hold this idea. Whenever I finish reading a work like this, I always feel a sense of loss and regret, or maybe it is because the expectations I reported earlier were too high. I'm older, I want to see a work that really stands on the "ground" instead of "upstairs" on the platform. There are already enough heroes In general, the previous remarks have some judgments that are beyond the facts and bring more of the author's personal emotions. I hope the author can forgive me. Looking at the current situation, the author is still looking forward to the future development of the story. The author's work is written It is rich in emotion, the plot arrangement is in line with the background of the times and is very smooth. The writing style is a little sour but refreshing and refreshing. The story background chosen is also very attractive and the entry is quite smooth. Come on, your work will be successful In addition, there are two small problems that I have to mention. One is that the author relies too much on "writing books in books". The "two layers of frosted glass" narrative technique makes this part not refreshing enough Secondly, it is too short😡 This will not only make readers uncomfortable, but also greatly limit the author's "operation space" in the plot Finally, come on, come on, come on 👍👍👍

When the author wrote that the protagonist wanted to report an unscrupulous businessman, I knew that I must follow this book. It is just like reading another great article. This is a kind of humanistic care. I have read many literary works, but most of the protagonists in the stories are selfish or conservative. Very few protagonists can express their positions directly. After all, few people do things that will hurt themselves. They know that they will be plotted if they speak out, but they still speak up and do not be the silent person. This kind of behavior may be laughed at by others as a fool in reality, but I don't think so. After knowing that you will be held accountable for doing this, you still do it firmly without caring about the loss of personal interests. In my opinion, this is a noble soul. Some people may not understand him and say he is the Holy Mother, but what I want to say is that no matter how you say it, this kind of person is great. He really did it. I don't think such a person is a pure Holy Mother. Oh, no, Holy Mother should be a complimentary term, it should not be derogatory. In reality, people have lost trust in others. What has happened in recent years has also made us understand that helping others comes at a cost, and others may not necessarily thank you. But novels are different. At least they leave me with some nobility and morality that I won't lose.

The writing is really good. In this fast-paced era and the selfish protagonists are gathered together, the protagonist of this book has normal views and some idealistic feelings. Isn't this exactly what we expected for the future, society and ourselves when we were young? You can stand up bravely when facing injustice. There are still more good people in society, and stand with yourself to fight against darkness and unspoken rules But the reality is that you have been smoothed out by society and are complicit. The purpose of work is no longer life, but survival The protagonist of this book is like the dream of the working people, another world, different choices, the ideal self I hope the author will keep it up, his writing is really excellent

Americans are the most rubbish, they only believe in money and guns. Without cultural and historical background, he is too impetuous. Novel is just some popular reading. Not interesting

After reading the first few chapters, especially in Gentleman, I felt that the protagonist's character was too arrogant and too good to be a teacher. Some words should not be said by a stranger, or even by someone of the same level, but you also said them, and they are quite subjective. If possible, I hope that the protagonist's character will not be so arrogant in the future, which makes it a little uncomfortable to watch.

Literary hero, you can be more powerful than Hemingway, but in the end you won't be monitored to death by the CIA.

After reading the latest chapter, the plot of tooth powder is a bit too deliberate and far-fetched. Reporters can obviously be investigated, but the protagonist even lurks into the factory himself...

I feel that the writing style is very simple and fails to successfully outline the taste of the United States at the end of World War II. It has a feeling of tomato author yy. At the same time, the overall structure is very awkward. The too fast pace makes people unable to calm down and think seriously. However, the plot conflicts are not intense enough and make people feel unhappy. I hope the author can adjust it well.

So far, this book is a pleasure for me to read. It is difficult for foreign writers to write, and it requires a high level of knowledge on the part of the author. But the author of this book is obviously very knowledgeable, and the writing is very detailed and perfect. I feel it is as good as the Russian writer's book. I wish it a blast.

I suddenly fell in love and I didn't want to see it for a moment

Capitalism has also gone astray and almost became socialist.

After the war, Hemingway died, and Hoover's team was monitoring him. I'm afraid you'll end up committing suicide or a car accident.

It is estimated that leftist writers will be in trouble in the United States after the war.

I was shocked when I watched the London Olympics opening ceremony! Dai Ying despises Americans as uneducated country bumpkins. It really makes sense!

Now that I have read Chapter 160, let me write a brief review: The story before Chapter 130 is quite strong. The several novels written by the protagonist are all progressive and high-C. In addition to the idealistic portrayal of the protagonist, the other supporting characters are also satisfactory, but the characterization is weak and thin, not three-dimensional enough. Chapter 130 "Earth Cannon" was directly banned by FB Ai. From this point of view, the author does not understand the freedom of speech and publication in the United States. FB Ai has no right to ban any book. Without a court hearing and pronouncing a verdict, the book was banned just because of a description of "atomic bomb". This is unconstitutional. There is no censorship of publications in the United States. As long as it is not unconstitutional, any speech and publication can be expressed freely, regardless of wrong, right or position. Therefore, we can see that anyone in the United States can comment on the president, and AM people can change their words day by day. This is normal in the United States. Maybe most people don't understand this. Before the Cold War (actually before 1945), the United States was still left-leaning. The enthusiastic humanitarian support of many people in the East-West war in the plot was indeed real and commendable in the context of the times. After the Cold War, there is no need to say it again, everyone understands it. After Chapter 130, the story becomes dull and slow, a little sloppy, and the emotional description is also very pale. The author seems to have encountered a bottleneck... Generally speaking, I personally give the book before Chapter 200 a + rating.

The author is probably a short and fat man. He doesn't know what 181 only weighs 70 kilograms. He may have thought that he has a very well-proportioned figure 🤭🤭🤭

The protagonist gave the heroine tips on popular science writing, saying that British life should have a British flavor. However, the author himself made several supporting characters speak in a style similar to that of contemporary Chinese netizens, which was a bit of a drama. Could it be considered to make foreigners speak more like foreigners and not use so many Internet memes?

I just read the first few chapters and discovered that the protagonist's Virgo is actually the "Chao Wen Dao" of science fiction literature. I would like to state in advance that I like Liu's works very much. I have read them all, including the novels Three-Body Problem and Ball Lightning, as well as the short and medium-sized novels Supernova and Glasses. But I still don't like to write "Chao Wen Dao" from the beginning, because this novel was born too late. Whether it is pure literature or genre literature (fantasy, mystery, science fiction, horror, etc.), It cannot escape the influence of works from earlier eras, and most of them will be reflected in it. If a work that is ahead of its time is written so early, then it may be difficult for people to find works that had an impact on it in real history written after it. Moreover, if the readers of the book cannot see the regression in ideas and writing methods, it would be a bit insulting to the readers' intelligence. So instead of copying "Chao Wen Dao", it is better to copy the works of Heinlein, Arthur Clark, Steven Baxter and others first, and proceed step by step.

I ordered it all, but when I saw that the protagonist wrote a science fiction novel, I felt like I didn't want to read it. The author really didn't check the information.

It can only be said that new authors who have not subscribed or read are totally deserving of it. The seniors have blocked the road. In the past, they did not dare to click if they did not have 500,000 words, but now they are afraid of having a million words.

The monthly votes you cast before are in vain, just pay for the eunuchs to enter the palace. There will be no eunuchs even if they take one chapter a day. Deleted

You shouldn't believe it. Just delete the book after today.

The author said that Senegalese soldiers were pushing a broken down Renault tank, which I find impossible. The Renault in the book is the Renault ft-17, with a total weight of 7 tons, no power, and crawlers. How can it be pushed on the rugged beach by human power.

The author's writing is too ink, and cheating on the word count is not at the expense of the readers' enthusiasm for reading. For example, the training and preparation before the battle are completely covered in one chapter, and the situation of family and friends at the rear can also be written in the fragmented time after the battle. There is no such thing as writing almost 50 chapters. I am really convinced. I hope that the protagonist can fight all the battles of the First Marine Division, preferably with multiple injuries. Those novels that fight without being injured completely ignore the cruelty of war. It would be best if you lose your eyes or lose your limbs in the final battle.

No objection, I suggest you take a ten-year holiday!

It's gone… I don't know whether to feel lucky or not that it didn't cost much to book it all.

Good book, I'll give you the monthly pass

The right way is to eat in large amounts and control enough. Be careful if you are fed to death and you will cry again.

I kind of understand why this kind of doll can be sold