Dou Po: Becoming Xiao Tiandi from the Nine Secrets

If Xiao Yan and Gu Xun'er were not childhood sweethearts, then the Gu clan also belonged to the big boss. After all, such a thick family background was eliminated back then. He was actually trained by the clan leader to become a great fighting master. You said that as the patriarch of the ancient clan, you, Gu Yuan, cannot use family resources to help outsiders. When you are a powerful person at the pinnacle of the Nine-Star Fighting Saint. Poke a few mud balls off your body. Can you feed a few fighting emperors? A few pieces of steel dropped from the wallet can help Xiao Zhu train a few low-star heroes. The Soul Palace was turned into a Dou Huang by Xiao Zhan. Although it was because I was afraid that he would go too fast.

To explain, in the original novel, when Xiao Yan was visiting the market, a young man said that the third young master was still as friendly as usual. It is obvious that Xiao Yan was always kind to others regardless of whether he had talent or not. However, people in the family looked down upon him without talent.

The starting point of the Nine Secrets is too high. It is estimated that even Yuan Zun in the world is not as good as him, let alone the great master.

Many people discuss whether Nalan Yanran can break off her engagement in public. I think Nalan Yanran has no brains. She should say this about Uncle Xiao. Grandpa Xiao and my grandpa are brothers. Yan'er wants to imitate her grandpa and become a brother and sister with Xiao Yan, hoping that Uncle Xiao will make it happen. Isn't it better to simply break off the engagement in public? Giving face to the Xiao family and being able to talk about breaking off the engagement decently is not as hot-blooded as breaking off the engagement. Of course, I think there are other ways.

I hope this can be explained in advance. Don't ask for a few days off, only to have people wait for a long time in vain.

It has nothing to do with Xun'er, don't torture the ancient tribe severely

I really brought Yao Lao and Anti-Inflammation to life, and I gave you all my 12 monthly passes 😭😭😭

If Xiao Yan and Gu Xun'er were not childhood sweethearts, could this book treat the Gu clan as enemies?

It's okay, but the emotional line between Gu Xun'er and Xiao Yan is still too affected by the plot of the original work. It feels a bit imprecise that the protagonist, who has been in coma for so many years, can achieve the trust that the original work has cultivated for more than ten years in such a short period of time. And in the story about the Chamber of Commerce, the protagonist seems to be a teenager. Is the blood flowing down? It's interesting (). Then the rest is okay. Putting aside the plot related to the female character, so far, the author's creation of Xiao Yan and the character, I personally feel that it is better than a considerable number of Dou Po fans. In summary, although the character creation and control are slightly flawed, they still maintain a good level. Friends who like to read Dou Po fan fiction can give it a try.

The relationship between Xun'er and Xun'er is shallow, so he shouldn't torture the ancient clan severely, and Luo Jinxiashi, the ancient clan, did it too. If the soul clan is the main enemy, the ancient clan is at least a secondary enemy.

Next door, Ye Fan travels through time to eliminate inflammation and is now a eunuch.

Waiting for a hit, if any other novel has a touch of Zhidian, there will definitely be a Zhidian fan who will come to criticize it, it will be weird if you don't jump on it

The early stage is the development period, starting from the destruction of the other two forces in Wutan City and then taking off. I feel it would be too hasty not to write this part. Thank you for your suggestions 🌹

The introduction is wrong, I thought you were letting Xiao Yan grow up, but I didn't expect to be in a coma for more than ten years 😅

It's pretty good, the writing is much better than those of other fans. It would be great if the characters more closely match the original work.

I have ideas, and I'm writing pretty well so far.

As mentioned, after waiting for half a month, I can't clear it out...

What's going on? I thought I was going to be a eunuch

This progress doesn't feel good.

The update is too slow🙂

The starting point of the Nine Secrets is quite high. Ye Fan is still using the Nine Secrets Unified😏

Ten thousand words a day is not too much