Hongyan Yufei

This novel was a hit, but the more I wrote it, the more I liked it. I could clearly feel the growth of the protagonist and the entanglement of the supporting characters. This novel is my first novel. I haven't written it for several years. It seems that the novel was popular many years ago. It was really not well written at the beginning. From the sixth chapter, I gradually started to feel something. As I went on to write, I became more and more comfortable. It was as if the characters in the novel were telling me how to write, rather than me making up the fate of the characters in the novel. I guess no one will see this post here, because the name of my novel is a four-letter name, and the content is hardly interesting. It is a bit more painful literature + serious literature. There is no golden finger or time travel. The number of people watching is destined to be very few, or even none. But I will always insist on finishing it. This is written for readers and myself. Let's encourage each other and work hard together. Dear gentlemen.

The writing is very good, but the plot lacks conflict and excitement. After all, it is still an online article. Come on, I feel that if you change it and continue writing, the editor will make money for you! ! !

Yang Shoushan got up and got out of bed, but suddenly he lost his balance and fell to the ground. Everyone wanted to help him, but Changchun Taoist Master stopped everyone. Everyone was puzzled, and Changchun Taoist asked everyone to look at Yang Shoushan's face. Everyone saw that his face was covered with blood and his eyes were full of confusion, but he kept crawling towards the door, where his mother was waiting for him to return home. His knees were worn out and there was blood all over the floor. He crawled towards his mother little by little. He knelt in front of his mother and gently placed his face on her lap. His voice was hoarse and he said slowly: "Mother, my son is back." Under the setting sun, Li held Yang Shoushan's head, touched his hair, and said, "It's good to be back. Let's go home for dinner." She took out the broken lotus leaves from her arms, and took out the pastries and beef that had been crushed to pieces. The pastries were all stuck to the beef. She took out a piece, fed it to Yang Shoushan, and said kindly: "Shan'er eats first, mother is not hungry."

It's very comfortable to read and the writing is getting better and better! You can feel a lot of thought and enthusiasm put into it. Keep writing, more people will definitely like it!

If you are capable, you can help with tweets. Don't let good books bury you.

Hold on, brother, your book is slow to gain popularity and is destined to be a stand-alone book for a long time. Come on!

I thought the protagonist was a Taoist from Changchun 🤐

Ah, I browsed to your B station, and you are so excited with 30 collections.

Vote for yourself, I should be cutting it. After writing about it, I turned to Chuanwu again. I glanced at the list of new martial arts books, but I couldn't find 20 books. . It's too outrageous, it's really a dead end. I remember when I wrote a book called Chuan Wu Cai, it was close to 300, and it was even more than ten. Now that I've changed the track, I'd better write about high-level martial arts fantasy. . Come back again with another vest, I will give you all the money from now on

I'm from Bizhan. Although it's not my type, I'll give you a few votes.

One, is this category, fictional history is a bit difficult for newcomers The second is, the pace is a bit slow, and the conflicts in the first few chapters are not obvious. The amount of information given at once was too much, and the fireworks were dazzling. The writing is a bit fluent. It is recommended not to try such a difficult subject right away, unless you are a 🐔 Yue Ren type of genius.

I came from Bizhan. I have read two or three chapters so far. I feel that the writing is really good and very attractive to me. Thank you to the author! I will keep watching.

Keep up the good work, the writing is very good

It's beautiful

It's 180,000 words, come on, one million words will make you a god!