Prisoner Game

Feeling a little dry? The number of words in the paragraphs is nothing. I would rather say that I particularly dislike one sentence after another. However, after reading 6 chapters, I felt it was dry. I didn't know the world view, the incident suddenly threw you in the face, the characterization of the two protagonists was superficial, and the description of the environment was vague and unclear. For example, the protagonist's hacking ability is inexplicable, and the way he uses it is also inexplicable. There is a sentence or two explaining that "the level of network security in this situation is not high", but it is too unrealistic. Or, if there are powerful people at the party, shouldn't the powerful people provide their lackeys with above-average network protection? What actually happened that the powerful don't want to know? Anyway, after reading it, I felt that it was whatever the author said it was. Anyway, I felt tired and wanted to delete the book and not read it.

The introduction is not interesting enough to attract people. I passed by the bookstore four times before I came in to take a look. The paragraphs are a bit long. You can read the paragraphs on a computer with the number of words. Nowadays, I read novels on mobile phones and I am basically used to it. If it is too long, it will make my head hurt. As for the picture below, a sentence of more than five paragraphs is too much for me

Note that blockbusters with segmented text look very bad.

The author, you are Sansan She Xiao Xiao right

In fact, I can read this paragraph quite comfortably. It can be seen that my writing skills are good. Keep up the good work.

Coming from the snow chicken side, I hope I don't disappoint.

It's very interesting to watch. The beginning is a bit abrupt, but the plot is very tight and the characters of the four main characters are also very interesting.

Just like the title, generally. The beginning was pretty good, but after reading it for a long time, it just felt messy and aimless. The protagonist looks like an aimless puppet. When writing a novel, you must at least clearly explain the background story, location, and what you are going to do.

WOC worked for a month, how could he survive? 😭

Lan Shou, two good books died suddenly at the same time