
Cyberpunk: Saving Lucy Begins with an Orbital Airdrop
赛博朋克:救露西从轨道空投开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 155k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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48Chapters
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_(:з∠)_Come on, author!
Come on, author, there are too many long paragraphs, you can divide them into as many as possible
Mutual evaluation
1. The paragraph is too long, it is recommended to divide it into sections of 20-30 words 2. It is best to write two chapters a day, each chapter is 2000 words, which can increase the exposure and readers are more willing to read 3. The more important conflicts can be put in the beginning to attract readers 4. The paragraphing seems a bit strange (?) 5. There are too many descriptions, too many descriptions of environment and details. In fact, it may not be necessary, because readers have played it, and they are We will figure it out by ourselves (only the masters dare to write like this, because there is a fan base) 6. The chapter title is not attractive enough, you can change it 7. The introduction is a bit bland, you can have more gimmicks and jokes 8. It is suggested that a custom cover would be better 9. The rhythm is a bit strange (it is best not to be in a tight state all the time, readers will be tired from reading) The above suggestions are for reference only, please point out if there are any mistakes. Come on!
Since when is the main character Lucy?