Dragon Clan: Uchiha Sasuke Crosses Paths with Lu Mingfei

Just delete Lu Mingfei, it would be better to write Sasuke as the main writer

Let me show you the way. You actually have a better way to follow this inspiration. First: All of Shao Zai's plots are failures. Because Shai Zai himself is Jiangnan's failed male protagonist. Only some readers of Chasing the Dragon who loved watching Jiangnan's literary youth would pay for it. However, your comment section has proven that no one wants to see the bad guy grow up. The real payer is for Sasuke. Fans of Naruto will only pay for the Wangdao Shuangwen. After 25 years of the Wen Qinglong clan, no one has paid for it. Moreover, when Sasuke set up Shaizai in various aspects, it was completely useless to Shaozai's so-called help Sasuke plot. Sasuke is better than Shuai Zai, no one can doubt it. Second: Do you think that the content without a bad boy may be too short or make no money? Answer: No Because of the power of Sasuke➕Black Dragon, the returning ninja world is at least the top Kage in terms of combat effectiveness. It can show how Sasuke➕Word Spirit can veil the ninja world. There is also the w-adult law thing mentioned in the latest chapters. The civilization of the ninja world is very confused and chaotic. Let Sasuke return to the ninja world and create a new ninja law and a new order. It also satisfies Sasuke's pursuit of revolutionizing the ninja world in the original Ending Valley. bro, you need to know where your base is. How many people watch both Naruto and Dragon Clan? Are there more people here who like Sasuke or Shuai Zai? If Shao Zai can really help Sasuke get revenge, then Ryuu Si won't be so lazy and Eriki won't die. In the situation Sasuke encountered, as long as he was offline for half a second, he would be instantly killed by "Orochimaru", "Hachibi Kirabi", "Deidara", "Danzo", "Raikage" and "Tobirama". Do you think that the world of Naruto is an urban superpower like the Dragon Clan? Don't you know how much more pressure there is to start at zero frame than in Lao Lu Long 40%? Shao Zai's life experience is not comparable to Sasuke's. (This is true)

It would be perfect if the trashy Lu Mingfei was deleted. I get angry when I see him.

Is this asking Sasuke to kill the dragon clan? 😨😨

In fact, if we follow the time travel time as written by the author, we can write millions of words, but this is also the difficulty. We have to write about the growth of the two protagonists without making the readers feel confused. I hope the author can have two outlines and not let the two protagonists have any communication in the early stage. The two parallel lines move forward in parallel, allowing Lu Mingfei to see the cruelty of the ninja world, and making Sasuke feel the powerlessness of genius in the face of blood ( (meaning there is no power or power), since the time travel, let the time travel to the end. I feel that the ninja world can use Loulan's points when returning, and the dragon clan can use it before going to Japan (I want to see Lu Mingfei killing randomly in Japan 😡), and then let the two protagonists meet. If there is an outline, just pretend that I didn't say it. I want to see blood flowing like a river 😡😡😡

This Lu Mingfei looks nothing like Lu Mingfei. From the third chapter, Lu Mingfei's writing is very OOC. He keeps complaining, making a fuss, and is thin-skinned. There is absolutely no sense of being scalded by boiling water in the early days of the original work. Exactly, the character in this article is the kind of FW web protagonist who uses cheats and has to put food into his mouth to get ahead. Not a person at all. Then the article itself is also extremely colloquial. The reading experience is quite bad. For example, what does it mean when you use the word "hello" a lot?

Are all those who write Dragon Clan fandom a bit infected with the coward virus? I can't stand it anymore. I can't even pretend to understand.

You can use various plot transitions here, but you have to make a plot about the return of the crooked dragon king. As the author of "Lu Mayi, Meet the Little Master", do you read Douyin short dramas every day, or do you delve into new media articles every night?

The author has 100% never seen Dragon Clan

The painting was so big that I couldn't control it. The crazy changing of the angle of view made it feel so cool. It went straight to the climax without any foreshadowing and the mood couldn't get up. When the angle of view was changed, the mood was completely cut off. The two intertwined worlds must have priorities, and the protagonists on both sides must interact. The protagonist Sasuke pretends to be a b, and the heroine Ming Fei takes the lead. Let alone Lu Mingze, directly Brother Zhuzi possesses the rescuer Qingtianzhu cos Itachi educates the stupid younger brother Lu Mingfei "Your temper is no more than this "This" When Brother Sanxia Zhuzi was pretending to be slapped in the face, Lu Mingfei wore it again and said not to try to turn the tide Pure male version of Alicia The love of Naruto and the desire to grow up in the Dragon Clan are not all there Now there are two systems and two books

Uh-huh, if only Sasuke was the only one, I would read it, and I would pay for this book, but it's a pity that there's also Mud Lu Mingfei, so I can't read it.

We shouldn't have written the story of Chen Jianjun. We could just let the uncle give him the money once the lawsuit is over, and then write the story of Sasuke in school. Writing the story of Chen Jianjun is really slow, and it's not interesting and makes people feel boring. It's not as exciting as the previous ones 😥😥😥

One by one, there is a video of Chuunin exam questions on site b. Sasuke said in the original book that he couldn't write a single question. According to Sasuke's level, he is a living idiot who can't even go to high school. That's what the author said. You can use responsibility and responsibility to step on the road. You can step on it with study. There is something wrong with it.

The classic frustrated Lu Mingfei is such a magical character, it makes me sick when I see it

The writing and plot are good, but the biggest problem is that Lu Mingfei has nothing to watch in the ninja world. I think your book just skips the ninja world and goes straight to Uchiha Sasuke in the dragon line If the latter has eight points, the former only has four points at most. The gap is too big It's better to just write about Uchiha Sasuke in the dragon line.

Don't write like this. Why don't you separate the stories of two people into two books? The story is well written, but the viewing experience is really bad 😡

The recent plot is not only dragging on, it's not fun yet, I'm disgusted all the time. You're so awesome, you slipped away.

Some of the plots and details from Sasuke's perspective are a bit intellectual, but I enjoyed watching them without thinking. Lu Mingfei's perspective... Failed to describe personality contrast, failed to describe the conflict of world views and character interactions, and even Lu Mingfei's growth violated the image of Lu Mingfei. Or did you write it out, but it was just boring?

Lu Mingfei needs Sasuke But Sasuke doesn't need Lu Mingfei

Let me tell you my opinion first. I personally feel that Sasuke should give some plug-ins from the Hokage side. After all, Lu Mingfei can use the Dragon Clan plug-ins on the Hokage side, but Sasuke can't use it. It won't work because if you keep writing it like this, Sasuke will change. It's not like Sasuke, because after all, he is a child who traveled through time without the anchor point of Hokage. When you come back, you are just another person with Sasuke's name. You still have to give him the Sharingan. Without this thing, Sasuke always feels less interesting😟

This is the title of the book originally. Everyone who clicked in came here because of this title. In the end, I had to listen to those people and send it.

The best example of being ruined by spam and survivorship bias

Shai Zai Lu Ming is still Shai Zai after time travel, the essence cannot be changed!

The subject matter is good, but there are a lot of mentally retarded scenes, otherwise the results would definitely be better

I finally found an interesting one, why did I stop updating it?

Now that the ninja world has fallen silent, we have to wait for the next reward to come out to make our presence felt!

It should be a drill, it might be in the original work.

These chapters are a bit confusing, this was two months ago? How is it like two months later?

The ninja world part is okay, and the psychological changes of Lao Lu are okay so far.

I didn't see the request for leave. No updates?