Start a Family and Start a Business in the Pirate World

I used to be able to change my destiny against the will of heaven! More than ten years ago, I worked hard to bring the class villain with me! Nowadays, only those with blood can win!

Speaking of One Piece, are there any fans writing about the Valley of the Gods now? Let's have a depressed protagonist who accepts Xia Qi as a harem. I haven't seen her become a heroine. Who would have thought that the beauty of the empress in front of Xia Qi would be Keiichi Ichi 👍 and Oda. Who would have thought that the NPC character of Kei Ichichi in the early stage would be promoted so high in the later stage. However, the IQ of people in the One Piece world has indeed been confirmed once again. It is indeed not that high, with such beauty. If she is strong, she should give her the sweet fruit to eat, and directly petrify all the strong men with white beard 👍 The Tianlong World Government directly unified the whole world. Now we know how Yi Mu won in the first place. It is estimated that Yi Mu is the enhanced version of Sha Qi, and Sha Qi is the enhanced version of the Empress. The enhanced version of Sha Qi directly rebelled against Nika's allies. This makes sense why Nika lost, because the female brothers attacked from behind 🤭

Did other book lovers feel that this book was bland? It's just that after you read it, you don't have the desire to click on it even if there is another update.

The new book starts with a realistic and depressing style of writing, and has lost most of its previous highlights. It has no more fascinating features. This book is probably going to be a hit 😟

Nami, Nico Robin, Vivi, Nokiko, Makino, Perona, Keya, Korra, Hina (Tina), Dashiki, Peach Usagi, Kalifa, Iron, Stussy, Boa Hancock, Shirahoshi, Hiyori Kozuki, Garrott, Bonnie, Reiju, Charlie, Scarlet, Violet, Rebecca, Nicole Orbia

What's the use of this fruit? It's a bit useless during the day for Kaido and at night for Moria, right? 🙂

Originally, Aokiji appeared, and the protagonist determined the template of Escanor, the Sin of Pride. I thought that the next step would be Robin confessing his identity + the protagonist expressing his feelings, and then the two embarked on a magnificent escape journey, and adventured along the way to become stronger and fight against the Draconians and the World Government... But when I saw the Mafia, the protagonist came to kill the leader, then supported a puppet, and even started to plan the development of the Mafia, and cooperated with the winery in his village? Not even the mastermind behind the Grand Line's scheme was interrogated? 🙂 When you co-author this book, you only plan to revitalize the countryside, live with Robin, slowly develop your power, and wait for the enemy to come and provoke you? Have you ever thought that writing like this doesn't sound like a pirate at all

Without force, how could Pig's Feet be so content and content as a civilian?

Author, your book is called "I Raised a Family as a Pirate" and the story should be told from the perspective of the protagonist. In the following chapters, the protagonist is simply the background for daily hang-ups. There is already a big problem with the outline! There are too many scenes with other characters in the back, and the protagonist is just idle. If I didn't mention who the protagonist is, I would think that the protagonist is the Straw Hats! This book is called "I Raised a Family as a Pirate". So who is this "I"? It is the protagonist, not other characters, so this book should be the story of the protagonist. You can write the stories of other characters, but you should not take up the role of the protagonist and let the protagonist be a background! ! ! Author, if you don't know how to write the subsequent story, you can refer to other Pirates fan fiction, and then spend a few days reorganizing the outline and thinking about how to write it later, instead of treating the protagonist coldly and treating it as a background for daily hang-ups 😡😡

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I have heard that calves born in sheep pens will behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, but becomes tired. Isn't this abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues , great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing that makes you cry for the author, and there are six things that make you sigh for the author. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If not passionate, the actor's heart will not be touched. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who rarely updated, delayed updates, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, and were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and let future authors feel sad about it!

That's right, a one-handed axe!

Why don't you develop the protagonist's fruit? Guangguang Fruit should have a lot of ideas. It would be too wasteful to use it as a cultivation accelerator now.

Author, do you want to write about the latest comic plot, related to the era of great depression?

Now that I see One Piece, I can't hold back anymore. I suppress the king.

This book has writing, but not much. I feel that some of the sentences are a bit strange. I can read it, but sometimes I feel that the sentences are not smooth and difficult to organize.

The battle scenes are really well written! Several books are like this, and they would have collapsed sooner if they had not been able to support themselves in the field of farming. There's no progress at all, it's all about resting on the laurels of creativity.

When I first heard about the light fruit, I thought it was a special nature similar to the dark fruit. I didn't expect it to be so low. It can also be called a light fruit. It might as well be called a daytime fruit, or a sunshine fruit.

He's old enough, but Ace is just a child who lacks love.

Brother, what did you write after your secret fruit came out? ? ? Play house with Luffy and the others? Luffy no longer saves Robin, but instead saves Blackbeard... The perspective is all given to Luffy and the others, and the protagonist doesn't want it anymore?

What will you write in your next book? You won't have to wait another half a year, right?

Do you know when the next one will be released

I really need to adjust my sentence making skills. It's really hard for me to listen to books. There can be several adjectives and adverbs in one sentence. It feels even more difficult than using AI.

The author's forte is writing about farming for fun, but these books just don't have the right flavor.

Similar to the original One Piece, it ended suddenly. I still felt that the ending was too sloppy. Forget it, let's just finish it off.

I won't say when the next book will be, and I won't talk about it whether I write it or not.

Knowledge is power

I have read the entire book and it feels quite relaxing. It is not as bitter and hateful as other pirate novels, and the style is also different from most pirate novels. Just like the title of the book, it starts with retirement and starting a family and then starting a career. There are only two trivial poisonous points 1. The author's chapter names in this book are very casual, but the content is not bad and very sophisticated 2. The author's writing on combat is very poor. It's a bit like Ultraman fighting monsters by hitting two and then fighting against each other to decide the outcome. It's very bland Summary: Ignoring the shortcomings in combat description, the plot is very innovative (not the traditional hegemony story, nor like the AI story from the studio). I have a wife, a career, children, and a happy family.

The scribbling is complete, and the fruit has not yet awakened.

Additional updates!

Did you kill Sengoku? The author writes that Sengoku is purely a hypocrite, the most loyal dog of the world government. If you don't even kill this kind of person, then the protagonist can be said to be the most cowardly protagonist I have ever seen.