Both of Them Are Her, Isn't This Called Pure Love?

I want to see the future heroine regret it after the male protagonist falls in love with the current heroine.

You dare to write a library plot, but I don't dare to read it. The habit of embarrassment has happened again.

After reading the first few chapters, the male protagonist is written like a girl

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It's okay as a new author. It's pretty good.

It feels pretty good. The newcomer is already very strong at this level.

He is so weak that he just accepts everything he does, and the points of conflict are all based on the fact that the protagonist is weak and can cause conflicts to advance the plot. Either he was kicked by this, or he was tricked by that.

Faster, faster, more, who can see this?

I like the feeling of youthful virginity😍😍

This is enough for anyone to see, don't act like an old man peeing. Update soon!

There are relatively few dialogues and interactions, and the psychological description feels a bit lacking. But having said that, the setting of world destruction sounds too heavy, and it will add depression and internal friction to the protagonist's emotions. It might be more appropriate if the setting is that Dalin will disappear or his personality will change drastically. In addition, the character's family background is not shown much, and there is no mention of career line. It seems that the protagonist has a sense of tool. For the reasons mentioned above, it is a bit sweet. The protagonist and Dalin should find a way to explore the mechanism of the system. For example, the integration of the current and future career lines can also reduce the difference in timelines. Then the love line and the career line can promote each other and increase interaction. It will feel good. Looking forward to the next plot twist🙂

This introduction is very similar to a Japanese comic I have read.

Sister, come on, this is too little.

My girlfriend is from the future😄

The top leaders of the kindergarten came to watch the masterpiece!

The writing is pretty good, and considering that I've been busy lately, it's a good book.

"The Tribulation of Dawn", which has not yet fully bloomed, also has a similar setting to you, the author. You can learn from it.

It's a bit of a running story. The protagonist doesn't have anything he wants to do. He's a student but the writing doesn't look like it. It's still too difficult to connect the relationship between love during student days and destiny and future. Simply put, the character cannot support the setting and is not promising.

Let me see how it goes 🙂 ps. Women may have higher requirements in the future 🤭

This cover looks like Kuang San

Such a beautiful novel, such a good idea, why are there so few people? Shen Nong tasted a hundred herbs, fairy grass!

Can the author leave me a message? 🐉🐉

I'll be reading it when it's not on the shelves, thinking I'll read it later when I get older, and I'll finish it when I get back. I ordered the ending chapters and realized I didn't make any dumplings, ugh.