They Promised to Experience the World of Mortals, but Why Was It Wrong with the Fairy?

It's okay, it can be used as food and fodder. The disadvantage is that there are relatively few new books. Everyone has their own opinions on whether this type of book is popular or not.

This style of writing and this structure of the writing don't look like a newcomer. At first glance, they look like the reincarnation of an old veteran from outside the country.

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This writing ability is really strong. Even if it is accelerated to a general framework, it is still interesting to read. It seems that you have been reincarnated. Those who have not been in this industry for a long time or have no talent cannot do this. It can be seen that you really want to develop this transitional plot, for example, you want to enrich the image of Xiaobai or something. Unfortunately, this is an online article. I think you really have the potential to be a platinum author. Haha, I will pursue it. I wish you success.

Isn't this hook just a mock article?

It's quite interesting, but the plot is too simple and idealistic. It feels like a mythical system mixed with a fairy tale?

This is the waistcoat of an old man. Who can read it if he writes it so slowly? Please quickly present the large-sized work to me to satisfy my craving.

Although the arrangement of this emotional line is a bit deliberate and awkward, the writing about the battle is really good.

So far, the viewing experience is very good, with an epic feel and a sense of time and depth similar to Shadow of the Colossus. Although the shortcoming is that it is very green, it is at least better than nothing. However, it is only a seedling and it is developing slowly. The outline and author's ideas cannot be determined, so the content will not be judged.

The writing is okay, but judging from the introduction, I haven't finished writing the first small world yet, and it's a bit slow and feels easy to cut.

It looks good, but the amount is too small, which makes me feel uncomfortable 😭😭😭😭

Are you sure you have multiple heroines? I originally wanted to wait until the first world is finished before reading it, but it turns out that it's not even finished yet. With your length and focus, it's more like a single female protagonist.

I think you need to change that introduction. The text is better than the introduction.

Highly recommended, there is very little love part, it is more about the growth of the protagonist, more like Zhu Tianwen, there is little description of the main world, the small world is the main one, it is stable and does not collapse, it should be a masterpiece

Um? What was it going to be about? I thought it would be about love as if I were experiencing life with a fairy, but after reading it, I felt that the flavor of love was very weak. Should we leave it to fantasy?

It was obviously written by Lao Deng, so experienced 😍 Hurry up and update

There are only two updates in one day. Who can read this? Let foreigners see it and think we look down on it! One update per person!

It's well written, but the title is too confusing.

Not many people read it. Please update more. I quite like this kind of light invincible writing.

In fact, it's well written. The pace could be tighter and more enjoyable.

It's very interesting to watch. The main world hasn't been developed yet, but the small world is very well integrated with Classic of Mountains and Seas and Ancient Times. It's very interesting to write.