
Black Dragon: Building an Eternal God System from Scratch
黑龙:从零开始建立永恒神系
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 94k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I just found out that this is still an old author, and he has cheated on two books. I'll give you some advice, what's the cool thing about dragons? It means crushing, a sense of superiority, and you have to write this sense of superiority that we can understand. For example, when writing an official novel, the plot you write is about becoming a director. I understand this thing realistically, and I can get this feeling of satisfaction. But novels and reality are different, so the author wrote about levels. Break through the realm and upgrade. But there is a word called collapse, which means the collapse of combat power. Essentially, they fail to grasp the real feeling of upgrading. How can such practicality come about? One is a detailed description of the improvement in status, and you have to write about the hard-won breakthrough to this level, so that you can highlight the power of the protagonist and stir up the readers' hearts. Your first book also had this kind of collapse problem in the later period, but I can still read it. Why? Because the book you wrote is considered a traditional dragon novel, I can understand the power of legends, the strength of elite monsters, and the progress of young dragons. You wrote this book like a lord's novel, but the key point is that you didn't write the essence of the lord's novel. What's so great about you? Come out of comparison. You have been grinding monsters to upgrade. The key point is that even if you write Daluo Jinxian in the book, I can't get it. In your book, the protagonist is currently a little genius, but it does not reflect his greatness So what should you write next? I think you can write more about the dependents, those supporting characters whose talents are not as strong as the protagonist's, those whose status is not as high as the protagonist's, those who have not obtained the lord, do you understand? Of course, you'd better set the next world to be a traditional Western fantasy world and use dimensionality reduction to show off your coolness, otherwise your book will feel bad
What does it mean that all three chapters are the same? 😅😅
When I read the introduction, I thought he was a great person, but it turned out to be a system. Then why did you make the layout so big?
The author should write traditional dragon novels, and let me settle in a bit. To be honest, I particularly enjoyed reading your first book. At that time, I kept reading it every day, but then it fell apart and I didn't read the remaining dozens of chapters.
It's been three days, Looks like it was cut
After becoming a lord, can't you grow by yourself? Isn't it a bit of a loss? Originally, you can gain powerful power when you grow up normally. Now you have to upgrade. It would be great if you can integrate it.
Hey, he probably joined the palace as a eunuch again. The same chapter was published three times as three chapters 😅😅😅
The starting point father-in-law group has grown again. . Dominate the starting point sooner or later.
Anyone who publishes duplicate chapters is not a supervisor. Again, they were all cut before they were put on the shelves. Your reputation is ruined. I don't know how you got to the fourth level.
Come on, author, this is my first time reading a novel about an inhuman lord, come on