1985 Literary Era

There are too many exaggerated adjectives and modifiers, which makes people tired and disgusting, which greatly affects the reading experience, especially the Beijing song performance section.

Most of the writing in the first part is quite good, with strength, depth and atmosphere, which is great. However, starting from the plot of going to Beijing to revise the draft, it was very flashy and flamboyant. Compared with the previous chapter, it is completely different.

I suspected that the first part was for commercial purposes. I had a feeling of pretentiousness and greasiness after entering Beijing, so I put it aside for the time being. Wait to come back in a few dozen chapters to see readers' reactions.

Someone, please tell me if this is the reincarnation of the eunuch's clone?

After arriving in the capital, the author seems to be unable to hold back and let himself go. The perception of the capital stage is indeed much worse.

Writing novels and songs is a job, but there must be some preparation. Otherwise, others will doubt where the knowledge comes from. And it's not your knowledge in the first place, so what do you have to show off? In fact, your own abilities are very poor, so why bother showing off.

Start, start, start doing those pretentious things

This book is really good. I recommend the equally excellent book "This Ghost Chaos Is Very Noble"

The first part is fine, but the second part is hard to understand. The main character has traveled back in time and can basically do well whether writing books or songs. Why do you want to go to school to be a grandson? Even if you like school, you can get a part-time job after doing well.

I didn't like the first chapter very much. To be honest, I don't like watching the growth history of time travellers. "Shanghai Bund", even if you ask me to watch it, I won't even watch it. I'm tired of watching it. Especially this, because of the so-called [ideological collision], trouble was caused in that era, the joke is quite real, but you are the protagonist, shouldn't you be a wise and powerful person?

I would like to ask, the remittance slip is in the envelope, how did the old Wangtou who sent you the letter know?

The writing is great, and it captures the feeling of the countryside at that time, as well as the liveliness of the small town, especially the department store. When I was a child, I went shopping with the adults, and it was also so noisy, lively, chaotic and festive.

Although it is written about someone who started in a rural area, it is well written, unlike some books that just feed it into a pile. And it doesn't count water.

Is this author a woman? No matter what I write, they are all short-tempered things.

I found a problem. I wrote a love song in 1985 and 1990. Isn't Luo Dayou's song called this because he wrote it in 1990?

Don't be too arrogant. It's not easy for other authors to write. If you have the ability, you can write a good-looking one, a bunch of xxx.