Douluo: Legend of the Dragon King: I Prove Immortality
斗罗：龙王传说之我证不朽
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 99k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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37Chapters
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What's the difference between you, a typical person who thinks you are handsome, and others who will fall in love with you? The original work was divided into two parts when Na'er was about to fall in love with Tang Wulin, and because of the attraction of the Golden Dragon King's aura, you didn't even get it. How can you be sure that Gu Yue fell in love with you? Or you just wrote that you took Na'er when you were a child and then took Na'er with you later. No one will read your writing like this.
The left and right brains are fighting each other. One moment they know Gu Yue's identity, and the next moment they don't.
Will Gu Yue be interested in the protagonist? The protagonist doesn't live with Na'er, how could he be interested?
The writing is good, but I suggest that the introduction be longer and the wrong names should be changed.