Rules of Survival in the World Invaded by Monster Girls

The idea of ​​this book is actually very good, and there are not many poisonous points. However, one of the biggest poisonous points is the character of the male protagonist. This is also caused by the author deliberately creating a plot, so just skip it. As of Chapter 47, my expectations are not negative, but they are not very high, but compared to other novels, they are already much better. That is to say, I don't have many ideas to continue reading, but it is a pity to abandon it directly. Or is it, as mentioned above, that the protagonist is indecisive? Pretentious? These words may be a bit exaggerated, but it is uncomfortable to look at it like this. Why is it like this? The author may say that the protagonist's modern normal thinking is not suitable here, but that is not the case. The author put together a bunch of settings and contradictory plots. Although it can create contrast, the protagonist is very weak and has the idea of ​​becoming stronger, but Goldfinger is dispensable. This is a taboo in writing. Without any trump card, why should the protagonist be different? Another problem is the plot promotion, which is a bit delayed. Of course, it can also be called delicate, but the core will not change, just water. In fact, it's pretty good compared to other novels. The biggest question is what does the protagonist do with the potion? Make money? Become stronger? Fall in love? Or is it a mess? You may say why not together, but the fact is that what the author wrote is basically dispensable. This is the biggest taboo. I now doubt whether this book has an outline. It's a pity that this book actually has 🔥 potential. After all, if you have an idea, it's still alive. It's a pity that the real purpose of this book is not clear. It's definitely a pity that I can post a long review. Keep up the good work!

To put it bluntly, it is pure yy, where the status of men and women are interchanged, and the sex is 100 times suppressed. With the support of peers, the little chef man can satisfy the perfect fantasy of the other half. There is no problem at present. As long as the protagonist is not deliberately suppressed, it will not be very aggrieved. The problem with this kind of novel is that the progress of the protagonist is too suppressed, just to thank a few more chapters for the good money. In the end, it is boring and tasteless because of the pressure on progress. I don't know how the author will write it. I will give it a 5-star rating now.

How could someone let the protagonist talk about the history of the Ming Dynasty live in this kind of fictional article? Wrong section or brain watts? I really couldn't hold it in anymore so I spit it out😨😨😨

The ratio of men to women is one to one, and the ratio of men to women is one to 102, which means that the total number of monster girls is more than 50 times that of humans. It is too brave for humans to dare to challenge monster girls.

The rhythm is weird. The story is not exciting, the plot is like a running list, and I indulge in lust every day. Mad, the inappropriate content is always skipped, and the h content is not included; the number of words in one chapter is very small, and it also likes to drag on, and the plot does not advance for a long time. It can neither describe the delicate relationship between men and women, nor the relationship between husband and wife, nor can it describe the world background of the novel that is very different from the real world. Brother's points are also paid with money. Can you stop writing a running account like a diary? There's nothing exciting or interesting about the novel, it's just pure depression and humiliation, right? 😒

Using monster girls as a gimmick, there is no real substance at all, and the protagonist's behavior is also inexplicable. He always emphasizes that he is a normal man and a normal woman. Let's not talk about whether the protagonist is normal or not. This kind of article with more women than men has never seen a normal author. It is almost like a green tea spirit.

I'm trembling with anger, the hateful author, please give me back a cute, kind, considerate, and kind-hearted blond little angel.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. The eunuch/bad ending is not determined by the content, readers, or editors, but by the author. Some authors will continue writing even if their grades are not good, and some authors will fail to finish even if their grades are good. You can give an example downstairs. I have even seen a new author who vowed not to punish unfinished works. He was really vicious. Later, he deleted the book, canceled it, and ran away. So what are the key factors that determine this? I think it is a sense of responsibility. Xiaobai Wen can often tell the author by his writing style. You can judge for yourself whether the author has the ability to withstand stress. Why did I suddenly get attracted to anti-stress? Because this novel is essentially a "utopian" novel. The core is not so much intrigue, but a happy-go-lucky family fun. There is even a strong sense of "escape" between the lines. It can be seen that the author's mental age should not be old, or even very young. Going back to the core, this kind of core is difficult to drive readers to read further, and it is inherently inconsistent. This will cause the data to collapse after being put on the shelves, and may even not be put on the shelves at all. And this is often the beginning of the collapse of new authors. Plus, he has a criminal record. Authors can easily choose to fail under pressure. Have criminal records, are young, have poor grades, and have poor ability to withstand stress. The buff is full. I didn't give a full star warning because I received a recommendation. As a new author, my performance is actually pretty good. But I have been reading for more than ten years and I have never seen anything. I won't be afraid of being slapped in the face if I say this. Go ahead though.

The subject matter is good and will benefit the gym. But I feel that the plot is still too bland and has no tension. I suspect the author has no outline. In fact, writing about daily life is not bad, but the daily life written by the author feels a little lacking in flavor. For my second brother, I give 80 points.

After reading it, I found it strange. The taste of Little Chef Man is too good, but if I just keep writing like this on a daily basis, I will die suddenly at the beginning.

Just keep hanging them. Let them see it but not eat it. This is the top.

Purely selling dog meat with sheep's heads. Now I see the latest chapter, the system only appeared in the first few chapters. I thought it was the kind of investigating monster girls and giving points to strengthen themselves, but it turned into a new version of the female-superior-male-subordinate gender-swapped female video. The name was changed to "Being a vtuber in a world where women dominate men" and there is no sense of disobedience at all. It is the classic Asasi male protagonist, who seems to have a high emotional intelligence, but in fact has a low IQ. (There is a high probability that the comments will be deleted. The comment sections of these new books have been strange recently. It feels like they are all trolls and there are not many normal people. Logically speaking, the writing style of light novels is not very outstanding. The plot can be said to be mediocre. The novel only has 40 chapters and the number of comments is in the early 30s at most)

If you don't care about the economy, just write what you want to write. If you want to realize your hobby and get financial returns at the same time, then you can consider the market and audience. If you want to use your hobby as a platform to engage in writing, you need to systematically learn how to write main lines and write long stories. The suggestions are over, the next step is the evaluation; It can be seen that you are a relatively new author, there is almost no main line, and the plot is basically driven by XP. But what about this? The answer is yes. Your talent is very good. Without a main line, it is difficult to write a work that resonates with XP fans purely by relying on XP drive. Need to transform? The answer is not fixed, it is based on your own ideas. If you don't want to make a full-time living by writing books, your current level is completely enough to realize your hobby and get some financial returns. I know it's hard to persist in pure love, so I don't recommend that you, the author, go all the way. This book was written in the face of review pressure, my own plot troubles, and the decline in subscriptions. But after finishing this book, I still need to think about it after taking a break. What kind of writer do you want to be? Pure hobby, semi-amateur, or full-time. Don't feel pressure if it's just a hobby. If you are a semi-amateur, your current level is completely sufficient. Just keep working hard for the next book. If you are a full-timer, you can accumulate slowly. In short, I am very optimistic about you. After all, there are too few that suit personal tastes.

It's just a fantasy before eating a rat's feet and stepping on flower cakes to get poisoned, and then the dragon lady will die.

7 Points. I seriously suspect that the author has no outline and just started writing with an idea. It was a batch of failure as soon as it was released. The plot is bland, the characters are human-machine, and there is no main line. The live broadcast plot is purely superficial, embarrassing and bland. Apart from the setting being conducive to the gym, there is no highlight.

The highlight of this book should be the novelty brought about by cultural differences There is no main story at all. The identity of the protagonist is bound to make him rich and powerful, and his harem is like a cloud. There is no challenge at all The author's daily part is not outstanding, and the emotional drama is even weaker If the author does not arrange an exciting and refreshing main story, this book will become silent when the novelty wears off.

I came to see the ecology of monster girls, not to see a little virgin and a few repressed women having sex at their extremes. Author, do you still remember the golden finger you gave the protagonist? Collect information about monster girls to enhance yourself. That golden finger is what I see, understand and conquer. As a result, when the little virgin falls in love, he only sees females and nothing else.

Inexplicably boring, have I lost my fantasy?

Why is it over? If you die, who can help me make up for the missing monster girl?

Good guy, the author didn't finish the book after finishing it. It hasn't been updated for seven days. From the starting point, my investment failed.

Various monster girls are not reproductively isolated from humans and suddenly appear in human society. In this book, the monster girl can be said to be the main body of society. Basically, humans are no longer able to maintain an industrial society after leaving monsters. Men no longer have the courage and fearlessness to survive and have been spoiled. Human women are even worse. There is a huge gap in physical fitness, appearance, and magic, and they are almost eliminated. The human race has no future, and the monster civilization has peacefully swallowed up the human race.

After reading these recent chapters, it feels like I haven't read them before. Even if I go to another city to highlight the atmosphere of different races? And the various social differences derived therefrom. With this slime girl, it is very clear what will happen next, and there is no hope at all. Keep it first. If what you write next is exciting, remember to give me a kick.

I thought it was a bit strange to like stockings and feet, so I stopped reading. It would be better to write more about the different values ​​​​of other worlds and the emotional interactions of different heroines. However, I may not have been in so many relationships and there is no way to draw materials.

No, is this the end? Then whose money I spend belongs to me?

Here, it's better than pixiv

I was wondering why there had been no group messages in the past two days, but when I saw the group messages, the author quickly opened a new group

The author joined the group through one step

Looking forward to the next one 😍

Is it two human bodies put together or one human body and one horse body? If it is made up of two bodies (I think this is more erotic) Can both bodies be used for pregnancy, or can only one body be used for pregnancy?