Depth of Despair

The book is a good book, but the paragraph and chapter reviews are just terrible. A group of short videos with white text have ruined the basic reading ability of people. I suggest you just turn them off.

It fits the title of the book very well, and it has a full sense of despair.

After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was actually quite interesting, but I don't know why but it just felt so weird. After reading the whole book, I obviously found it quite interesting, but it just felt uncomfortable to read. I feel like there may be too much description in some places. It just feels like I have been describing a shocked expression for several pages in a row. (Of course, I am exaggerating.) How can I put it? After reading a few chapters in a row, I feel that nothing else has been written, and I have been writing about the shock of the protagonist. It is like watching a TV series for ten minutes, and the main sentence is shocked for nine minutes.

34-45, These ten chapters have been completely rewritten. The plot is completely different and more exciting. It continues the fear and despair before and after. Everyone who has already read it can give it a chance to watch it again. Just think that something weird happened in reality and the past has been changed. If you think the rewrite looks good, please give me a reward. I am really burning out. I have written an extra 20,000 words in the past few days. It is really not easy!

The idea is good, but the writing is so bad that it's over. Comprehensive evaluation given💩

The official should have concealed it from the beginning. Even if this kind of weird event that can be recorded in writing can be forgotten, as long as no traces can be 100% erased, the official will know about it sooner or later. When Chinese people encounter such a major incident, their first thought is to call the police. When the police arrive, they immediately ask questions and record the incident. It is recorded in the record and will be forgotten once or twice, but the record is still there. As long as it is dug out, the matter will be serious. The city will pay attention to it, the province will follow up, and the central government will look at this. . .

Dear author, since there is definitely no heroine, don't describe too much about women, especially the kind that describes how beautiful a woman is, let alone the story about a woman having an affair/secret love/feeling with the protagonist, etc. It's better to have a supporting role. Don't write too much about couples. If you write about a book without a heroine, just write the protagonist and the plot and that's it. In my opinion, you can read books without a heroine, but as long as there is a plot related to the plot I mentioned above, it's just a piece of cake that doesn't stink but is more disgusting. I'll add the bookshelf first, and I'll come back when I have a million words. Finally, I hope your work will become popular! PS: The above is only my personal opinion, and it only represents me. Some people should not use your opinions to refute me. If you refute me, I am right.

If ghosts appear so frequently, wouldn't humans have become extinct long ago?

The first few chapters are just like the introduction, using people to turn into dogs to point out that there is something wrong with the world. The following chapters also use some details to describe the impact of ghosts (curses?) On the protagonist. The first part is attractive enough, but what you write afterward is just boring. You spend dozens of chapters describing how the protagonist is doing and looking for solutions everywhere. By chapter 40 or 50, you are still writing about the influence of ghosts on the protagonist and how the protagonist finds solutions. I skipped the whole thing after reading the rest. It took me a long time to write to give the protagonist a little hope, and the method found may not be effective. Come on, how can anyone write online articles now? After a long time of writing, the protagonist still has not improved at all. It made me want to watch something scary, but there wasn't much behind it. Watching the main character was so satisfying that I was pressed for dozens of chapters, but I didn't feel good again.

In fact, this story implies that capital alienates people, so ghosts cannot be eliminated.

The author is really creative, but the writing style is quite rusty, and he deliberately tries to remove emotions. I really frowned from time to time while reading, and memes are invisible. To highlight the invisible influence, it is better to use a contrast method. For example, in the early stage, the protagonist creates a kind and fair image, and then is affected, and the behavior and thinking deviate from the original image. It may be better to shape it in this way. Generally speaking, book lovers who lack horror novels can read this book.

Well written, it is a real horror novel, not a fantasy novel disguised as horror.

I feel that there is something wrong with the setting. The density of ghosts is too high and they can be seen everywhere. If ghosts had existed since ancient times, there would be no modern society. Judging from the problem with the protagonist's face, even the photos saved on the mobile phone have been changed, which shows that the influence of ghosts can directly rewrite reality from the past. If a top scientist dies and is forgotten, will the technology he invented also disappear, directly leading to the loss of a large part of technology? , The chain reaction is not to mention total collapse, at least it will go back a few years. If the high-level officials have stable technology or ability to fight against ghosts, then the despair that the protagonist is experiencing now is just the despair of ordinary people. It would be ridiculous to write so many despairs. If there is no stable ability to fight against ghosts, high-level scientists will die and be forgotten at any time, and reality will be rewritten at any time. There will be no modern society at all.

This kind of horror is really great, ghosts with no solution are ghosts

Come on, come on, I'll read other books and save monthly tickets to support you

The front is so amazing, it feels like watching the resurrection of horror. Ever since I left my parents, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I want to use the ghost mechanism to kill the machine, but there is no plot foreshadowing. Too dry. Just find a ghost on the side of the road and give it a try. The writing at the back is also a bit too watery. There are many words and things that make me dizzy.

This protagonist is frightened at every turn, his character is as timid as a mouse, submissive, and boring. Look at Quan Yu's extreme coldness, that's really scary.

A very interesting horror novel. It's been a long time since I've seen a horror novel with a smart protagonist and a well-designed plot. This quality will definitely make you a god when you finish it! ! !

It feels a bit like an ancient supernatural novel. Only novels of this type are more interesting the more ancient they are.

In terms of character design, it can be seen as similar to the protagonist of the corpse hunter next door. Over there is the super rational inner demon and the protagonist who suddenly fell into a mess. Over here is, hey, take a look for yourself.

After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist's reaction after meeting a ghost is in line with the mentality of a normal person or an ordinary person, but it does not match the mentality of a protagonist. This is the problem that some people struggle with the protagonist's character.

Well written and interesting!

It's a really well-written horror novel, but it felt too rushed at the end. It could have been expanded and written a lot more. Or write a book in which the protagonist is the protagonist, and it will be more enjoyable.

Are there any new books? 😭😭

Why can't the protagonist live towards death, but the truth is the repression of compromise?

Author, you have become popular in just two weeks and your performance has skyrocketed. Keep up the good work and keep updating!

This book is really full of ideas, but it's a pity that I couldn't master it in the later stage. I'm looking forward to the author's progress. Where is the new book?

It's actually finished. Please subscribe and support me. I hope the author will continue to work hard on the next book.

Just keep raising books and it will be over

When you see 67 grazing, you know it's cool. Is this kind of plot something you can write at your level? I don't have enough fans to dare to write this kind of plot, I can only say it's hard