Starting from Liyue, Become the Strongest Adventurer

Is there a Shennong? Is there any random CP or other poisonous points? Looking at the introduction, it is a bit like forming a Zhonggui. I don't like them teaming up for CP. Two people fighting for protection are still comrades-in-arms no matter how much love is added to them. They are warriors. Why do you have to do so much for them? The official plot is not CP either.

Not bad, pretty good-looking, but I wish it was a harem story

Suddenly something occurred to me. The Golden Reindot mentioned before among the Five Sinners is now in power again.

The character creation is average, and the combat power feels overwhelming. It took ten years to obtain 1,000 items, and the strength is also average. The main character is only level 19. It's better to change it to one year. Or don't stress the combat power and ensure that the protagonist can do everything with ease instead of doing everything reluctantly.

In a word, don't write one thing over and over again, and don't need to explain too much, which is a waste of time and watery words.

In the past, you could still find all-inclusive collections, but now the original fan fiction is basically Tang's.

Author, please give me more words per chapter. One chapter is only two pages. It seems too uncomfortable.

The male protagonist has a bunch of useless props that are wasted. Can't the unused props be sold to people who need them? Can the author please stop messing with the lady? She also has a tragic past that makes her like this. Why should the credit be given to the young master? He is as beautiful as the lady?

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Will the Emperor refuse to resurrect his old friend? It's not a natural death,

Personally, I feel like it was written by a newbie, just like water.

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The protagonist, an adventurer for ten years, has only these few usable props, which are too few.

I think Inazuma needs a time traveler, someone who can practice swordsmanship or swordsmanship. He doesn't have the eye of God and relies purely on faith and sword skills. Brother Weixin can fight the God of Thunder.

The first thing I wrote was okay, but the later part felt boring.

Let's put it this way, a chapter has four pages, and a normal 2,000-word article should have eight pages. It's equivalent to a chapter of 1,000 words, and then 50 sheets are put on the shelves. It's similar to the 25 photos listed on the shelves. I don't know if they came from QQ reading.

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210506111517115","UserId":365956207} You are a man. Does it look good to stick out your tongue in front of a bunch of people?

How should I put it? There are too many characters that are as good-looking as the previous variety comics or have good plots. It's hard to decide whether to accept or not accept those who write too little. Especially towards the back. The previous Mondstadt has basically no plot.

It's a bit interesting at the front but not at all later. This is less than 300,000.

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This book reinforces that the Doctor is unhappy

A bad novel, a headline-grabbing novel, with only one and a half heroines