Ximen Invincible Dongfangqing

What the hell did you write? It's a mess.

I just don't understand why Ning Zhongze is required. Thinking about it makes me feel greasy.

The writing is messy, please find a construction site

I don't know why, but with less than 30,000 words, I was suddenly notified that it was recommended for testing. I ask all of you who are book readers to turn to the latest chapter first, even if you don't want to read it because of the small number of words. . .

I found that many of the holes in the original work have been filled in. For example, during the sword sect and air sect competition, the number one master Feng Qingyang was inexplicably tricked into marrying a prostitute; For example, the three corpse brain pills are configured differently for each person, and the antidote is also different. After Dongfang Bubai died, those who took the medicine People seem to get better automatically; For example, Dugu Nine Swords, why is it completely different from the one in The Condor; For example, Ning Zhongze's suicide is very abrupt and poorly explained; For example, Yue Lingshan's marriage, the original work is also very vague. This book is too friendly to the original author party.

The author's portrayal of female characters is really wonderful. From Pan Jinlian in the previous book to the two major plots of Hengshan Snow Night and Songshan in this book, the transformation of Yilin and Yue Lingshan is really fun and natural. It is a pity that the reading threshold of this book is a bit high. On the one hand, it inherits the plot of the first book, and on the other hand, the setting of dual personalities is not easy to accept. Hope you can stick to it.

Zuo Lengchan led hundreds of disciples to practice swordsmanship in the palace, I can think of it; Lan Fenghuang drugged her to become stronger, which was a bit unexpected; Even Yilin was silly and cute and returned to secular life, and she could accept eloping in public; When Chunmei came out, holy shit, the specifications were full, she really wanted to be the empress...

Come on

Continuing to write like this is obviously forcing me to fall in love with nuns.

I want to visit the mother and daughter in Huashan

Come on

I want to see Ximen Invincible. I want to see Ximen Invincible. I want to see Ximen Invincible. I want to see Ximen Invincible. I want to see Ximen Invincible. I want to see Ximen Invincible. I beg the author to write more from his perspective, Dongfang Qing is too calm.

The new book has a small number of words and if you are not satisfied with it, you can read the prequel "The Invincible of the East Crosses Ximen Qing". The prequel is a bit of an abstract stream of consciousness, so please stay in good spirits. . .

I also skipped through the original book, and was torn between whether to watch it or not. I was attracted by the writing, and the plot was subversive, but also sad enough. The same goes for this book. I originally liked it, but I said that the name in the introduction is not the heroine, but the male protagonist has already been flirted with so much. Is it a tragedy in the end? The biggest pleasure of watching a fan tell the truth is to make up for the regrets. Yilin, the junior sister of Ning Nuxia in the original Swordsman, is a tragedy to me😮‍💨This book currently also has a setting that Huashan Jade Girl is the undefeated Bai Yueguang of the East, and the next two people use the "Spirit Rushing Sword Technique", which is double the damage and regret😫

Looking for novelty, do you have to use a shemale as the protagonist? 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂, I feel physically and mentally uncomfortable when I see the protagonist, how can I watch 😐

I hope you can teach me a lot

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What is it written? I feel confused when I read it, as if the film was broken.