Class? No Dogs Are Allowed!

The relationship between the protagonist and Fa Xiao is a mystery. You would say the relationship is bad. The protagonist promised to be the best man for someone. You would say the relationship is good. The protagonist knows that the girl is a career driver, but he is unwilling to mention it more. If it is a green tea girl who is a scheming girl and a gold digger, it would be okay not to remind Fa Xiao. The key is that she is a career driver. . . .

Hurry up and cut it. I've been reading it for hours and it's still the first one I'm following.

It was a little interesting at the beginning, but later it started to revolve around women and rely on various women to advance the plot.

The female author has a character named Zhao Di. I wonder if she can box.

The plot arrangement is so deliberate! See Chapter 10! Not tight! Withdrawn

Am I the first to cast 17 recommendation votes?

Female author? It's Zhaodi again, and it's the man hanging on the wall who is honest.

I want to travel through time and become your brother-in-law, and then I will wrap up all your five sisters.

The male protagonist is just starting out and already earns hundreds of thousands every day. This money is too exaggerated. It's still about the same for you in Japanese yen.

I don't care about you and your brother's little 99, but the bus has not been cleaned from the beginning to now and I am speechless. The disgusting character has always been left. It is so speechless and uncomfortable, and it is not pleasant at all.

In fact, the best way to combine systematic writing is to use the extra money directly to create industries. Then a lot of stories can be written. You can write about dog barking, strict enforcement of labor laws, etc. It's not like Wen Tiantian, who is a Shenhao system, is just a bar KTV and the second-generation bullshit there to vent their anger.

The dog can't get on? I'll go 🙂

Spot? Not even dogs can get on board 😌

What are you writing in the last few chapters? Are you enjoying yourself?

Damn it, this is my shortest full order, I really saved money.

It's hard to imagine a person spending so much money to get to know each other and looking for strangers. There are many people you know who you can find. What a cerebral palsy plot

Full score 10★ 1. Can't handle small relationships 2. There are typos in the introduction 3. Humanized system text

It's obvious that the writing is from an experienced hand. I won't say too much, but I'd like to make a small suggestion. The songs dropped by the entertainment system should be carefully designed. The songs should serve the plot. Don't put the cart before the horse and make the plot serve as a foil for the dropped songs. The most retarded example is that I read a book before and the protagonist dropped songs such as "Blue Lotus" and "Shameless" when he had not graduated from high school. They were completely inconsistent with the character and were designed to be a big hit. (Do you have the experience and environment to write such a song? You can sing it.) To be honest, when "Apple Smell" dropped at the beginning, I was really stunned. I thought I had to taste poison again. Fortunately, the plot arranged for the protagonist's father to sing it.

In the beginning, the purpose was to fake a marriage, and the plot was quite interesting. The rest of the story is very boring. The plot is too deliberate. It doesn't look like lying down, nor does it look like a struggle. Especially what happens around the heroine, the writing is really a failure.

Eunuch, run quickly

Although everyone has their own preferences for radishes and greens, the prerequisite is that they have decent cooking skills.

What the hell is the plot, and the song selection is also hard to describe🤮

Quick update, quick update, um, can you read my book? What kind of immortal can you become if you stay in the Demon Sect? Thank you very much

The creativity is pretty good and the writing is decent. But when I saw the plot in Chapter 13, I was really stunned. Have you agreed to keep it secret? Why did you ask two garbage men to go there? And the relationship between the two garbage men and the protagonist is not good to begin with. Did you say lie down? Shouldn't those who lie flat behave like this and not hesitate to reveal secrets just to show off? Isn't this causing trouble for yourself? Those two are garbage people and not friends of the protagonist. They are people who have a bad relationship to begin with. What about logic? Elder brother! Is it really for the sake of plot, just to slap someone in the face?

Five sisters, is there any need?

Neither can you, the author! It's short and weak, you can't say no! Come on, there are ten updates a day!