Please Let Me Become the God of Love

The score of the book is already bad, but something happened in real life that I couldn't accept, so I made some changes. I'll update it on Friday or Saturday. I'm not good at eunuchs. I'm really sorry.

The screen transitions are too stiff, and it would be uncomfortable to watch if there is no connection between the scenes.

The first few chapters are pure suspense, and then it becomes the style of joining an organization and fighting monsters. I can't comment on whether it's good or bad.

Don't be too superstitious about the first thing, I feel like you can write in your own style 😍

It's good for the author to learn the style of writing, but don't learn to be a eunuch.

Is it the trumpet of the great sage and sage? This style of writing

So you also watch Fight Club

Chuck Palahniuk Doetowski Disco Elysium Three Axes

1. The heroine aspect. To be honest, I don't think there is any problem with Xiaomai as the female protagonist. Although she has been lying around for a few chapters since she was released and has not given any help to the male protagonist and has become a weakness. But judging from her performance when she is still awake, at least she has no poisonous points and is in line with the position of a wife. What puzzles me is that on the other hand, does the male protagonist really have any love or inseparable feelings for Xiaomai? Although Xiaomai is barely the same as Bai Yueguang in childhood (doubtful), after all, more than ten years have passed, and it seems unrealistic to expect the relationship to be strong. Secondly, Xiaomai is, after all, a wife who is part of Youai, and she accepts the same "perfect wife" education as other wives. So for the male protagonist, does he love wheat or just any product of this education system (that is to say, does he love a specific person or anyone who happens to be his wife and is above the qualification line)? Including the male protagonist's current care and watch over Xiaomai, is it out of the love between husband and wife, out of some obligation and morality between husband and wife, or just out of guilt for involving her in a series of events? 2. About the different loves in the article. It is conceivable that in this worldview of standardization, process and systematization of love, it is normal for the concept of love to be alienated. The love between husband and wife seems to be more out of duty and joint business (treating the family as a joint work, a very close colleague relationship). This view of love may cause people to go away. Humanization/emotional exhaustion, etc. Thus affect all aspects Cite some examples of abnormal love: The husband loves himself more than anything else, and at the same time he regards his wife/children as an extension of his body. While he wants to vent his control over himself, he also has an instinctive dislike that cannot be used easily. The husband accidentally came home and didn't react even if he saw him ntr in person. He even reminded his wife to end everything before the child came home to avoid violating the minor protection law. A husband only marries a wife to avoid social discussions and legal provisions, without any emotional connection. In his opinion, a wife, as a mass "product" of society, is not necessarily more attractive or noble than a prostitute who is forced to sell on the street. All in all, it is strange that there are so many examples of true love in this worldview. It is difficult to say that this connection is strong. So for couples, what do they see in the other half, is it true love/themselves/NPCs or the mass-produced toys accumulated at home in a factory (absolutely dominant and tradable, not unique)/Or is it just the fact that someone is with you that reminds them of a good time in the past and uses their partner as a trigger for such memories?

I'm afraid this follow-up reading will take 300,000 words to be published.