Wu Sheng: I Can See the Flaws in All Things

Since you use Wu Sheng as the title, first of all you need to make sure how powerful the representative of the force value is. He must have a certain performance. You can also write about romance, but it must be described in very detailed description of the force premise. That is just an auxiliary, because what you are writing is a fantasy novel. You must determine what status he corresponds to at each stage, his status and identity. What are the external manifestations? You feel like you are watching a fantasy TV series, and if you write about romance in male-channeled novels, you actually don't take it seriously. I feel that your writing in the female-channeled market is probably average, just different. So far, I haven't seen any outstanding features. The whole story is flat and straightforward, with nothing exciting and moving. Moreover, the division of the combat power system is unclear, which makes it very vague.

It's a bit poisonous. The author is very fanciful about whether the relationship between the first woman and the pig's feet is too SB.

This is definitely a novice author. In fact, your cheat is still very good. This is a very creative and writeable cheat. However, your plot arrangement is not very appropriate. I don't know why I feel like I am watching a TV series, and it is not like a TV series.

Such a good golden finger is ruined.

Why not change it to Martial Saint: I can see all things!

Does the author often write about romance? First of all, in this novel, he has no criteria for judging combat power. That is, you don't know what level you belong to at level 1 of weapon refining and level 10 of body refining. You are considered a master or a low hand. You can't explain it clearly at all. On the contrary, you have written a lot of romance and romance, and you don't prioritize them?

It's ridiculous that a country's mission was robbed by more than thirty horse bandits from the country. Is this a mission or a tour group? I haven't brought any expert protection yet.

I don't have enough IQ and my writing is messy

I feel that the romance you write does not count as romance, and the fantasy fantasy you write does not count as fantasy fantasy. If you want to write, write more emphasis. Why do I feel that they read women's novels, but if you have to calculate it, it does not count as women's novels. My evaluation is "Four Ignorance"

It's too poisonous, buddy. A woman brought the protagonist to the rebels in the name of practicing martial arts. What you wrote is incomprehensible.

A rubbish first shot of go escort. Plus a little trash that just entered the second scene

I feel like the writing is too detailed and there are too many embellishments.