The Battle Broke Out, and She Married Feng Qing'er at the Beginning

After reading the above, it seems a bit unreasonable. Why would the protagonist and Feng Qing'er care about the life and death of Fenglei Pavilion? To put it bluntly, isn't this the servant of Tianyaohuang?

What can I say? I can only say that this book is not in line with the current mainstream of online literature. I have read a lot of books. I have never seen a book in which the character of the protagonist feels a bit useless. But in fact, in reality, many people are like this. In addition, I was inexplicably notified that I was getting married, and it was done in an instant. Oh my god, I guess everyone is still covered up. It is understandable. Let's take a look.

You are talking too much. When did Feng Qing'er become Huang Tian's daughter, and when did Yin Gu have the Seven Star Fighting Saint?

Why do you want to promote yourself when you write about a fan? You suppress it first, so that Feng Qing'er feels frustrated with Xiao Yan again and again, and wants the protagonist's husband to be useful. Either lick Xiao Yan to the end, or become directly hostile, or give the protagonist a severe beating to get rid of the thought of lying down.

If it exceeds 300,000 words, you will have to rush to the street!

In fact, there is no need to be so cautious. As long as Xiao Yan can get the Pure Lotus Demon Fire, he can become the Dou Emperor.

The emotional drama is well written, it should be a female author, but I personally don't like the male protagonist's character, he is not decisive enough, and I don't like the plot of helping Xiao Yan. Since we are enemies, let's find an opportunity to kill him now before he grows up.

I admit that the book I wrote does seem to be biased towards female readers. There are too many emotional scenes. Xiao Yan was a huge poisonous point at the beginning, so many people have abandoned the book. But again, I just want to find people to chat with and write out the stories I think of. Others are just like a bunch of scoldings in the comment area that I am too lazy to delete. It doesn't matter anymore. Just enjoy it.

The character of the protagonist looks so awkward

Talking to others is like feeding me a mouthful of shit that is hard to swallow, extremely embarrassing

Alright

The preface says: Husband's sound is the law of heaven and earth, the breath of all things; love is the movement of human heart and the root of spirit. The interplay of eight emotions and the harmony of eight tones are the way to glimpse the way of heaven. Enter the Tao with emotion, carry the emotion with sound, and combine the emotion and sound to form the foundation of music and Taoism. However, the sea of ​​love is boundless, and the music is difficult to master, and it requires deep emotion to integrate into it. However, the way of music is like a double-edged sword. Understanding the sound of love can gain the power of heaven and earth, but it will inevitably gradually ignore the true flavor of the love in one's body, leaving only an empty shell between the music and the music. If things go on like this, my mind becomes obsessed with the mystery of music, and I gradually become a prisoner of the music. My affection gradually disappears, and I am only a puppet of the lingering sound. General Principles: There is no fixed order of practice for the Eight Emotions and Eight Sounds. It all depends on the practitioner's mind and circumstances, and he or she can comprehend them on their own. The level of the eight emotions and eight sounds is determined by the number of the feelings and sounds they comprehend. We are not limited to specific musical instruments. Any instrument that can carry emotions and express rhythms, even the sounds of heaven and earth, and the sound of the heart, can be used as instruments. If the rhythm is completed, the Tao will be revealed. Every time a love sound is comprehended, the fighting energy in the body will double the amplitude of the vibration. This demonic vibration is extremely domineering and cannot be tolerated by any method. Forcibly practicing or performing other martial arts and fighting skills will inevitably cause the demonic vibration to backfire, which may cause the meridians to be cut off, or the soul to be completely destroyed. Therefore, all methods of attack, protection, movement, escape, body refining, etc. Must be derived from the origin of the eight emotions and eight sounds. This is the only way. The number of eight tones is the limit of Taoism. If you don't understand the new tones, you will always be trapped in the current situation. If you only understand any one, two or three of the first three tones, but fail to understand the fourth 'music' tone and offset, the high-frequency vibrations of the superimposed fighting energy in the body will not be able to self-consistently neutralize, and will violently conflict. Within a hundred years, the soul of the meridians will be overwhelmed, disintegrate and die! The first note: joy It is not a flashy joy, but an open mind, a smooth mind, a sense of the endless virtues of heaven and earth, and the opportunity for all things to thrive, such as the spring sun melting snow, new buds breaking through the ground, and full of vitality. Taking the artistic conception of "White Snow in Spring", the sound should be clearer and clearer, like ice spring washing stones; the rhythm should be brisk but not out of order, like the warm wind blowing in the willows. Introduce the vitality of "joy" into the body, the fighting energy is born and vibrates at high frequency, the meridians stretch like spring buds, and sometimes there is a slight feeling of swelling, numbness and itching. The sound of the piano spontaneously causes the vegetation around the body to grow slightly, and the insects chirp harmoniously. Second tone: Anger It is not the violence of anger, but a sense of injustice in the chest, powerful and strong, the most powerful and strong, like thunder shaking the universe, gold and iron clashing, cleansing the world of evil spirits, demonstrating unyielding ambition. Taking the majesty of "The Music of the King of Qin Breaking the Formation", the melody needs to be deep and heavy, like mountains collapsing, gold and iron horses; the rhythm is as sudden as lightning and as slow as a deep wave. It is not a roar of violence, but the righteousness of heaven and earth, and the "wrath" of the unstoppable. Aroused by the "angry" intention, the drum beats, metal and stone are cracked, evil spirits are warded off, the fighting energy vibrates intensifies, like burning oil cooking in a raging fire, the meridians bulge and sting, like being pricked by thousands of needles. Third tone: Sorrow It is not a complaint of sorrow, but a sense of the longness of heaven and earth, the ruthlessness of time, and the pain of all living beings. Like the withered blue of autumn frost and the solitary shadow on the cold river, it contains a profound understanding and compassion for passing, parting and impermanence. To capture the desolate tone of "Sorrow", one needs to gulp down the sound, like a solitary goose croaking in the sky, and the rain ringing in the night; the melody is gentle and sad, like the whimpering of a deep spring, which makes one feel heartbroken and soul-crushing. The meaning of "sorrow" is imbued with it, causing the surrounding fields to be desolate. When the listener hears it, the sound of "sorrow" penetrates into the marrow, and the vibration of fighting energy becomes deep and restrained, like an undercurrent of cold waves. The mind is easily indulged in boundless sorrow, causing the soul to tremble, and the movement of fighting energy is sluggish and cold. The fourth note: Music It is not an indulgent entertainment, but a leisurely and contented state of mind and spirit, forgetting both things and myself, and being in harmony with the Tao. Like the wild cranes in the mountains, the clouds roll and relax, they are unrestrained and carefree. It is the great freedom after experiencing sadness, joy, anger, and sorrow, and the key to harmonizing all sounds. The carefree tone of "The Questions and Answers of Fishermen and Woodcutter" needs to be ethereal and elegant, like the breeze passing through the stream and the flowing clouds surrounding Xiu; the melody is soothing and melodious, like strolling in a courtyard and sitting and watching the clouds rise. There is no trace of deliberate design, and it has a natural interest. When the flute and flute sound, birds and birds fly around, animals stop, and the mind is peaceful and peaceful, then the "music" sound is always there. Fifth tone: Worry This is not an unfounded worry, but a wise person's ability to see the subtle, a wise person's ability to see the distant, and deep thinking and caution about the unknown, cause and effect, rise and fall. Like a building locked in fog and the stars and moon hidden, it contains awe and exploration of the mysteries of heaven and earth. The faint tone of "Xiaoxiang Water Clouds" needs to be cold and deep, like dew and frost at night, and the moon reflected in a cold pool; the melody is gentle and lingering, like thousands of thoughts, endless. Express the subtle flow of thoughts. "Worry" means like silk. The strings of the piano sing by themselves, causing slight ripples in the space. Thoughts are clear and unobstructed. The vibration of fighting spirit coincides with the ripples in space. It can be sensed in subtle ways. The mind is easily trapped in the web of deduction and calculation. Excessive worry will make the soul exhausted, and fighting spirit is like being stuck in a quagmire. Sixth tone: Thought It is not a confusion of distracting thoughts, but a mind wandering in the ether, thinking through the eight extremes, and studying and meditating on the origin of all things and the ultimate truth. Like a galaxy moving in circles, it is the fire of wisdom and the light of enlightenment. To take the solemnity of "Wen Wang Cao", the tone needs to be grand and upright, like a yellow bell and a big Lu, which is deafening and enlightening; the rhythm is calm and orderly, like the breathing of heaven and earth, and the pulsation of the universe. It is not a messy thought, but an orderly deduction and "thinking" that explores the principles of nature. "Thinking" means majestic. The harmonious ringing of bells and chimes triggers the tide of soul power. The vibration of fighting spirit triggers soul resonance and touches the origin of the soul. If you think too deeply, the soul power will be overdrawn and you will fall into a boundless illusion. Seventh tone: Fear Fear is not cowardice, but the ultimate awe and trembling that arises when facing the vastness of the universe, the ruthlessness of the avenue, and the power of time and space. Just like an ant looking at the sky or a mayfly looking at the sea, it is fully aware of its own insignificance and inspires the courage to live towards death and transcend limits. Taking the chilling and oppressive tone of "Ambush from Flying Daggers", the tone needs to be low and depressing, like a ton of stone pressing down on the head, indicating the impending doom; or sharp and shrill, like cracked silk and broken jade, piercing the soul. The fear is not the fear of shrinking, but the "fear" of reverence for the way of heaven and stimulating potential. The meaning of "fear" comes, and the vibrating fighting spirit contains the prototype of the law of destruction. Its power is overwhelming, and the mind faces the great terror. If it is weak at all, it will be swallowed by fear and the soul will be scattered. Eighth tone: Surprise It is not a panic measure, but to capture the mystery of the changes in the world, the reversal of cause and effect, and the thin line of life and death in the lightning and flint, the moment and eternity. It's like a sudden flash of inspiration, a ground-breaking breakthrough, the ultimate leap beyond common sense and breaking the shackles. Using Wan Lai's heart sound as an instrument, the sound has no permanent shape, and the tune has no permanent rhythm. It may be like the chirping of the phoenix in the sky, or the first sound of chaos. It points directly to the true meaning of eternity, cause and effect, and destiny in an instant. It transcends ordinary musical instruments. The heart sound is the sound of heaven. The meaning of "surprise" is mysterious, and the mind needs to grasp the escape in a ten thousandth of a second. The number of words is not enough, the last section is not important, I deleted it

It's a cold night. The dry well is deep, the child's eyes are stained with blood, and the moon is full of weeping. For the first time in Qin Valley, there are stars and bamboos, and the sky is filled with flowers and rain. The seven emotions are refined, and the precious mirror coagulates the blood. The red makeup of the medicine court is as warm as jade, how could you expect that the ice soul locks the haze. The string is suddenly broken, and the hatred is hard to extinguish! Frost invaded the top of Jianming Peak. Carrying the mysterious coffin, walking through the Nine Netherworlds, the soul is in ecstasy. The Heavenly Demon Jade Jane chooses a naive child, who can understand it if it corrodes the bones and burns the heart? The golden feather system is the knot of past sins. Ignorant and unaware of the evil of the storm, the stone door is closed, and the evil sound is broken. Thousands of mountains are covered with snow, solitary remains are buried.

I don't think the main character's musical instrument attack is suitable for a male video. The power of swords and spears is more suitable. Anyway, it looks a bit confusing.

I wrote about it in the work related section, but I didn't expect that it could only be seen in the starting point and not in QQ. This information was also what I planned to explain in the Sound Valley chapter, but I've already posted it, so I'll tell you in advance First, Mo Qianyu's technique is a big pitfall. I designed "The Eight Sounds of the Demon" to express joy, anger, sorrow, joy and worry. Fear is the basis, and the level is promoted in combination with music, so it does not start with fighting spirit. Mo Qianyu's level is bound to emotions and music. The higher the level, the faster the cultivation speed, and the less emotional. This is the main reason why Mo Qianyu sealed part of his own cultivation Secondly, I designed Shangyin Valley's People are basically bound to the music, which is the main reason why they are unwilling to leave the valley (written in the first chapter, elders Zhang San and Li Si said that if you have the time to run around, you might as well study the music in the music pavilion) Thirdly, the main reason why he is a Seven-Star Fighting Saint but is willing to marry the Sky Demon Phoenix Clan is that, Gu Xingzhu wants marriage, not a couple. As long as he is willing to marry, and can tie up Mo Qianyu in advance so that he will not be stripped of all his emotions because of the martial arts, it doesn't matter to Gu Xingzhu who he marries. This was explained by Feng Qing'er in Chapter 2. Fourth, why doesn't Venerable Lei know? Can you read some history? The vassals of your vassals are not my vassals, and the allies of your allies are not my allies. Do you understand, brother? Fifth, where did the Sound Valley come from so many Dou Saints? In my setting, the Sound Valley is basically all music cultivators, and the techniques have more or less similar acceleration effects and threshold effects. This is the basic reason why there are many Dou Saints. The reluctance to come out is because of the side effects. Part of the emotion has been stripped away, and I am addicted to music, so I am unwilling to come out. Sixth, the remaining content Just continue to look back. As I said, if the circle comes back, all the shortcomings in front of me are just buried threads. If the circle doesn't come back, if the circle doesn't come back, I will be scolded to the sky Seventh, if you feel that your cultural level is very high, you can go and read the content of the "Tianmo Bayin" exercise method that I posted at the back of the comment area, but please agree in advance that I wrote it by myself, so don't mess with it.

It is important for the author to refer to readers' opinions, but his own ideas are equally valuable. Come on! !

To be honest, I don't mind anyone finding fault. After all, the hole I dug is a bit big. I originally wrote it with the idea that either the book would go to heaven or the author would be scolded by heaven. If I dare to dig a hole, I dare to fill it. If I can fill it, the hole in front of me is called foreshadowing. If I can't fill it, if I can't fill it, I will sacrifice myself and enter it, and there will be no possibility of follow-up.

Fast-forwarding to Xiao Yan is different from the original Xiao Yan. The protagonist cannot defeat Xiao Yan, and is arranged by Xiao Yan to listen at the door. The sound of his wife fighting with Xiao Yan makes little Dudu stand up.

The following books: "Dou Po: I Married Feng Qing'er at the Beginning", "Dou Po: Then I Want to Educate Feng Qing'er Personally", "Dou Po: Feng Qing'er's Just Revenge", "Dou Po: Feng Qing'er's Counterattack Journey", "Dou Po: Rebirth of Feng Qing'er and Conquers Xiao Yan" (I won't mention the famous "Feng Qing'er's Dark Revenge") I personally have an impression of the character Feng Qing'er. The image is quite deep, because of her extremely proud and somewhat paranoid character in the original work. The main reason why her popularity is relatively high now is because of the good looks of the Doupo anime model. If her character and design are lovable, her popularity will be much higher, because this character's distinctive and unique personality makes me very interested in fan stories based on her. I have read the five listed books, and currently only the author insists on updating them (the day before yesterday, Rebirth of Feng Qing'er updated a new chapter four months after the break). Among them, my favorites are the author's "Marrying Feng Qing'er at the Beginning" and "Rebirth of Feng Qing'er: Conquering Xiao Yan". The plot settings of these two books attracted my attention. Both books are good at portraying the characters' emotions, and the plot design is also okay. Let's talk about "Feng Qing'er I Want to Educate with My Own Hands". In fact, I still like it based on the plot background and the protagonist's character. I am just not interested in this type of genre that opens the system. Of course, the most critical problem is that it was finished in a hurry and I only wrote Chapter 85. The original book seemed to be good, but there was no follow-up, which was quite uncomfortable. However, I was not interested in the plot background of "Feng Qing'er's Counterattack Journey" and I didn't write much about it. Updates have been discontinued since then. In the end, the synopsis of the story in "Feng Qing'er's Righteous Revenge" is basically a replica of the original work Lucky Brother. However, the new setting is indeed a bit interesting, but it feels like a remake based on the original work. Moreover, it has been on hiatus for more than half a year due to the same problem. The only one that has been stably updated is "Marrying Feng Qing'er in the beginning", so keep up the good work and hope to see a complete Feng Qing'er fanfic. The above are my insights and thoughts on following my fans during this period. I am sharing this as a post. I really want to finish this book and look forward to the author's continued updates and enthusiasm.

When writing "Fighting to Break the Sphere", you need to understand and integrate the story from Xiao Yan's 15 years old to his 30+ years to become an emperor. Even if Xiao Yan does not become the emperor, Emperor Hun Tian will become the emperor. The protagonist still has time here and doesn't know the plot, and slowly becomes confused and confused. I don't know what to think!

The emotion is well written, but the protagonist is a bit cowardly

These make me sick enough,

Will the author finish this book? I'm curious.

Did the protagonist of the original work destroy Feng Qing'er's whole family?

Come on! I don't know why, but I really want to give Feng Qing'er a good ending.

The author's literary talent is good, but some places are a bit deliberate. Although I understand that it is a second design, the strength of Yin Gu is too strong🤣With this strength, except for the ancient and soul clans, it basically crushes other forces.

I think the setting of having Feng Qing'er as the heroine is a good one, and it can be used to expand the story. First, it is about how Mo Qianyu and Feng Qing'er got to know each other without having to marry in such an abrupt way. It can be written as, for example, Qian Yu has been practicing in Yingu for many years and got the master's permission to go out for training. After that, he met Qing'er and fell in love with each other. Then they get married. This kind of plot can be mentioned directly without spending a lot of pen and ink, or it can be the old-fashioned kind of male and female protagonists who go through many experiences and difficulties and finally become married. Of course, I know that it would not be consistent if it was written like this. It fits the title of the book Second, I think Mo Qianyu's background setting is actually pretty good. I was shocked when I first saw that his master was a Seven-Star Dou Sage, but after thinking about it, the strongest casual cultivator in the original work, Shennong, was a Six-Star Dou Sage. Saint, and I also mentioned that there are many hidden forces and powerful people in Zhongzhou. The epic level enhancement of Sound Valley actually highlights the feeling of being an expert outside the world, and I think it is also very good that Feng Qing'er is well taken care of after returning to Sound Valley with her husband. Third, regarding the interaction with the original protagonist Lucky Brother, I feel that the interaction is nothing more than three types of relationships, friendly, antagonistic and neutral. It seems that most people either want to be friendly or hostile. This is understandable and after all, it is really difficult to deal with neutrality, and if it is this kind of relationship, there is no need to write a scene with Lucky Brother. And the author also mentioned that he wanted to write the relationship between the two on the opposite side, that is, on the Fenglei Beige side... Many people have already complained about this, so I won't go into it. After all, given Mo Qianyu's background, it is indeed difficult to have a friendly relationship with Xiao Yan, unless the settings of Feng Qing'er's character and Tianyaohuang's emphasis on bloodline are modified. Fourth, many people have complained about Mo Qianyu's character. His character setting does not fit with his background as a young valley master and having such a strong master. Moreover, he is also very talented and his cultivation level is not very low when he appears. After all, many people, including me, also like a character that is not easy to cause trouble but is not afraid of trouble coming to him. After all, I feel that my principles should be made clear. Take the latest episode of searching for medicinal materials for refining elixirs for his wife. It is obvious that he is still submissive even though Zi Yan has made things difficult for him. Moreover, he has traveled through that world for so many years, too. You should understand that fists often work only with hard words. Anyway, I think you should be tougher now that you are facing things related to your wife. In the latest chapters, Qian Yu's behavior is really a bit aggrieved. It's too uncomfortable to let others bully you when you don't cause trouble. Fifth, the emotional drama can be really good. Sixth, after seeing the ways the author enhanced Feng Qing'er, I personally think these original settings are very interesting, and they do not necessarily have to follow the opportunities of the original work. These are probably my thoughts. I have no other intention, just to express it. When I read fanfiction, I just want to draw a cool word. If there is anything that attracts me, I will give it full marks. After reading it, the author is also doing it for love. Since this is the case, just write according to what you think in your heart. If nothing written by someone can be liked by everyone without distinction, then please yourself first. I hope the author can continue writing this work until it is finished. Come on.