
Douluo: Erlang Shenjun, Howling Sky Devouring the Moon
斗罗:二郎神君,啸天噬月
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 331k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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162Chapters
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The plot is a bit cliched. If you don't write about the waste material stream, if you just write about the genius stream, there will still be people watching. This writing is too cliché.
Feels unnatural
Not to mention that this character is unnatural, it is too deliberate. According to the character you started out with, your subsequent behavior and the arrangement of the plot are not consistent. It is like wearing a layer of skin, but the core essence has not changed, so it looks unnatural. Moreover, this kind of setting may not be suitable today. There are too many things on the Internet now. You can see both good and bad things. Many real things can also be seen, and children understand it early. So some settings may be like fairy tales (ideal), but they are not suitable for the reality of the current impact of the Internet.
I would like to recommend a book. New book: "Douluo: I will repay Tang San severely after my second rebirth" has been released. A new writer has updated 100,000 words. Please give me some feedback and leave your valuable comments. Thank you very much! 🙂🙂🙂
Copying Liu Ruyan is too stupid.
Damn it, it's impossible for Ning Rongrong to go back on his word. Is the per capita emotional paranoid personality making trouble with you? Your protagonist has a higher chance of raping her than she regrets.
Who is the heroine? 😰
It feels like it was written by AI. The logic of the plot before and after often conflicts, and the writing is too confusing.