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This novel is very ink-written. Recruiting a commoner woman requires nine turns and 18 turns. Are you planning to write about the flow of lords and knights? The writing style is pretty good

Poisonous Weed, card collectors can watch it. It takes about 500 cards to recruit 50 people. The author likes to open a trumpet and curse people. If you don't like it, please be careful.

The fighting in chapters 15-16 is outrageous. How dare you let Vivian go up and fight the second-level opponent even if it takes an arm? Emotional fighting is a numerical game that you can almost play. It doesn't depend on equipment or experience. In terms of command, even Xiaozhi can't compare. Xiaozhi can even say something to get out of the way. You just let the little girl resist the opponent's knee, right? Funny?

The plot advances in a disorganized manner and lacks main line traction, making it difficult to accumulate emotions when reading; the characters are like puppets driven by the plot, the motivations are weak, the dialogue is blunt, and there is no arc. The overall outline looks like the lines are directly pasted on it.

What did you write? Looked confused.

It feels like the author is a woman, and she writes light novels, unlike Western fantasy written by male authors. The process of recruiting several commoners as nobles, one as the bakery's daughter, and the other as the owner of a tavern or brothel, was too cumbersome. This is not the case in the real or illusory aristocratic world. How dare you not go with an order? Unless you run away with a bucket. For me, it's a bit too grinding, especially the favorability setting inside. The favorability will be lost if nothing happens, and the protagonist looks more like a licking dog than an aristocrat. There are too many supporting characters, and it looks more like a group novel than a single protagonist.

Can you let that Vivian die? It's so verbose and doesn't look like a 2b, it's very annoying to watch.

The damage is too great, and the current combat power will collapse. The writing is okay. In fact, different people have different opinions when it comes to ink writing. I think it's a bit too fast.

Well written, don't listen to the comment section. Write at your own pace. Writing a novel is telling a story, your story is the most important

The starting point recommendation is based on the follow-up reading~ Fantasy is a cool video, and the recommendation effect is not very good. If you guys like it, please give me your support~ Thank you here~orz

It's a very good book, don't be fooled by some reviews.

Only after you actually see it will you know whether it suits your taste or not.

I finished reading it without realizing it. Overall, I felt it was okay. I hope it won't fall apart in the future.

Is the content related to the introduction?