LOL: This Mid Laner Is so Loyal

According to this writing, the top 8 should be against IG. The runner-up every year will not be reborn. The top 8 will be reborn, and there will be top 16. A BO1 is 4 chapters, and one reincarnation cannot be 30 chapters.

Can you write an e-sports article after understanding the professional players? You can even write the wrong ID and the plot starts to get ridiculous at the beginning of the intercontinental competition.

I don't know the meaning of the author writing about being drugged and enduring a high fever to play the game. Do you think this was still ten years ago? Ah, the protagonist came on the stage even though he was sick and still won, it's so awesome~ This routine has long been outdated. The author is immersed in his own art and can't extricate himself, right? It's getting more disgusting day by day after watching it these days. I'm leaving, you can continue to immerse yourself.

It seemed good in the early stage, but later it turned out to be a serious problem. The author forcibly suppressed the combat power, and also gave the protagonist a combat power increase at the cost of his future health. It felt like the author was a sick young man and deliberately disgusted the readers, because it did not help the plot at all. It was written by a purely disgusting person. Originally, the protagonist was the savior, and after getting sick and paying the price, he was still the savior. It had no impact at all and it was intentional.

It's 2025, and lpl is still repaying s8ig's kindness

The biggest problem I have encountered so far is that the author likes to write skill names instead of QEWR. The same is true for hero names. I feel that everyone is more accepting of their nicknames instead of their real names. There are even some names that you can't react to at the first time when you say them.

First of all, in terms of writing skills, it is impossible to accurately describe the dynamics of the game. In addition, there are typos and it doesn't make sense without looking at the pictures drawn by the author. The second thing is that I don't understand the design significance of the plot of playing a game with a high fever. Both the story narrative and the character description are very abrupt, especially when there is an overdraft of health in exchange for strength, and the protagonist faints on the field. What driving force does the protagonist have to do this? There is no effective foreshadowing in advance, and this kind of plot comes up, which makes people feel like they are complaining for no reason. Finally, there is the logical structure of the entire novel. It feels like a fan's filter perspective on the beauty, strength and misery of their favorite characters. The plot has no continuity or rationality. It is purely about what the author thinks of and writes. I personally find it unacceptable, Kerun.

I am really forced to abandon the article. The author's BP writing is too confusing. He focuses on a ban and uses it for whatever purpose. The ideas are confusing and the article is written blindly.

I don't know why the author opened this book Maybe the authors are all Korean, not Chinese, or they are Han Chui Of course this has nothing to do with the author. Reading novels is meant to be enjoyable. But I can only say that it was too frustrating to write. If you want to beat LPI hard, there is definitely a market for this. But you seem too frustrated. They just went to the LCK to be a bastard, and the strength of the system was not reflected. The author also explained that this system is just a way for the protagonist to go to Korea if he is proficient in Korean. But at this point, I don't understand why a system is only used as a guide, and there is no drama behind it. I can only say that it is outrageous. This author is outrageous. Just go and go. As a result, the protagonist's strength was not overwhelmed, and it seemed that there was no sense of enjoyment at all. I feel that the flow of the whole article is still a bit aggrieved. So this novel is destined to not be very popular The system is invisible, and the protagonist's strength cannot be reflected. He also acted like a sophisticate in the LCK and put himself very low. See him frustrated. It's no wonder there is a market, no wonder it's free I suggest you cut it and rewrite it, or generate electricity for love.

The emotional scene is too awkward, otherwise I wouldn't have written it. The woman is completely redundant.

So far, the writing seems okay, but there are a bit too many emotional scenes. Women are a bit redundant, it's better to be with Cui Xuanxu's brother lol

No, bro, lpl is so miserable. If you write the protagonist to join the LCK, the introduction will persuade many people to quit. The author is really doing it for love.

Emmm, what should I say? It's a bit straightforward. E-sports writing still needs to be a little passionate.

LPL itself is not popular anymore, lol has not been read by many people in the past few years, and it is difficult to write lck again. I hope the author will not cut it.

This line of writing by the author should be some old guy opening a trumpet. It looks so familiar.

Too many messes, such a mess

Typos, unclear sentences, text coherence, missing words, and missing words. It's a bit serious, very distasteful

It's a big taboo to cheat and not win the first championship. Can anyone tell me if I can watch it?

Let's cut it. Just look at the title. The writing style is exactly the same as in 16 and 17.

First of all, thank you for your support. I have read all your comments and answered some questions directly in the comment area. Some are more complicated to explain, so I'll give a unified reply here. 1. What is the use of the protagonist's value, and what is the use of the system? I cannot deceive readers. If you are looking forward to a pure systematic article, this work may not meet your expectations. My original intention in designing the system was to rationalize the protagonist's behavior. For example, many readers complained, "Why does the protagonist have no ideas at all and is pushed by the system in the early stage?" This is because the protagonist needs to be ranked to get to know Cvmax and then join LCK and Griffin. The protagonist needs to be able to speak Korean so that he can gain a foothold in the LCK. Now that the protagonist is on the right track, the system's mission is completed. So my answer is: the system is useless, the system will never appear again. 2. Didn't you say that the protagonist, the runner-up, was reborn and became a different person? You can understand that it is because the versions of S15 and S8 are completely different, and the protagonist needs some time to adapt. 3. Is the emotional line too strange? The emotional line is a more important one, but this is an e-sports article after all. Please rest assured that there will not be too many emotional lines. The hidden lines between male and female characters will run through the whole text, and there will be no quick strategies or anything like that. To put it simply: the emotional line will not take over the spotlight, the main line is still the e-sports line. 4. Why are there so many typos? ? T. T The author is too good at writing, and his hand speed is not very fast. In order to update it as soon as possible, there will be some typos. But after accumulating 100,000 words, my hand speed has increased from 3k per day to 5k per day. I will check for typos and fluent sentences in the future. 5. Update the question. Because it involves recommendation issues, I try to extend the recommendation period as much as possible, so I have to update 4k twice. After it is put on the shelf, it will remain above 6k. I am working hard to save the manuscript... The title and cover may be changed next month 6. If you have any questions, please leave a message, I will answer them one by one. [ps: So far, the collection of this book is not very high, but because of everyone's support, the collection-to-purchase ratio is pretty good (for me) So I won't cut the book, and I won't run away with everyone's investment]

If you love licking, why did you let the protagonist go lck in the first place? edg, rng will directly enter the top 4 haha ​​😤

Come on

Can s8 win the championship? You won't come out to give away the plot of the ig champion. Do you have to consider the first-year fan readers?