This Naruto Has Watched Naruto in Advance

First of all, in the anime and manga, Naruto did not forgive Obito for his parents, nor did he forgive Obito himself. He said that Obito is the most handsome, and he said that Obito, who yearns for Hokage, is the most handsome. This sentence is a rebuttal to Black Zetsu, and it also describes Obito, who had the same ambition as Naruto before turning black. Secondly, Naruto is a Japanese comic created by a Japanese cartoonist. It adopts Japan's national conditions and conforms to the Japanese moral habits, ideological logic, and social structure. And all of us are arguing about Naruto from a Chinese perspective... Don't you think the donkey's lips are wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong? ? For example: Chinese people pay a price if they do something wrong. But the Japanese have a culture of shame. If you make a big mistake, as long as Dogeza and Anko can express your sincere regrets in a private horse race, you should be forgiven... If a fan author writes a protagonist who enters Naruto based on a Chinese perspective, the sense of separation will be too serious 🤭. Many of the contents written are also contrary to the original work. Fan creation in this case is tantamount to failure.

The beginning of this introduction is very touching, making people want to watch it. Unfortunately, pirates are introduced at the end of the introduction, and I immediately stopped watching it.

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As far as the introduction setting is concerned, even if Naruto is reborn, he will follow the same old path. Unless you are the reader, the setting is not rigorous.

Let me tell you, cut it off as soon as possible, the novels about Naruto and other worlds are all dead.

I saw a post before that Naruto's personality, no matter how you treat him, is one that is hard to change to the extreme. The problem is not Naruto's relationship, but Asura's chakra relationship. Whether it is Asura, Hashirama, or the reincarnation of Naruto, the characters of the three of them can be said to be exactly the same.

Except for the scolding scene with Kyuubi, which I didn't like, the other plots were all pleasing to the eye, and now I had to read more.

After reading the introduction, the first sentence is a bit incomprehensible. Is it a bit giant? Why? 1) The relationship between Kakashi and Minato should be similar to that of superiors and subordinates (Kakashi also calls Naruto and the others his lovely subordinates). It should not be the kind of master-disciple-master-family relationship we understand in martial arts dramas. The relationship between blind guessing is closer than that of "supervisors and subordinates leading subordinates", but it is not as good as our traditional master-apprentice-disciple relationship and does not have that kind of "family" responsibility and obligation. If Kakashi has a guardianship obligation to Naruto, does Jiraiya and Tsunade also have to discipline Asuma and even Konohamaru? 2) When Kakashi was growing up, his dead father, dead gay friends, teammates entrusted to him by his dead gay friends, and everyone around him died one by one. Ninja is also a business of murder and arson, and the mental illness is very serious. The original book tells many times about Kakashi wandering at the dark door, and if I remember correctly, Danzo also tried to drag Kakashi into corruption many times. How can a person who is still struggling himself have the energy to save others? 3) The original work does not seem to directly indicate that Naruto was abused, starved, etc. It seems that he was only isolated (there are many second creations by the same author). Kakashi and Naruto are not related to each other. The Hokage (imagine your mayor) is personally responsible for raising the baby. How can an outsider interfere? And from a ninja world's perspective, isn't this kind of isolation of the jinchūriki fundamental? It's as if A's doctoral supervisor B died, leaving a baby C who was taken by someone else. Then N years later, C came to scold A, "Where are you after all these years of suffering alone?" C means wronged and angry, A means WTF, what are you talking about?

The most unreasonable thing is that Hinata has paid so much. In the end, you changed the heroine. I can't understand it at all.

I want to see a sweet love affair with Ino!

The timing of putting it on the shelf is wrong. You should wait until the protagonist takes revenge before putting it on the shelf. Reading is just for the fun of reading. Otherwise, if you write like this, all the people in front of you will run away, and no one will read it at all.

The pirate Chun Chun is a failure, he is neither good nor good.

I thought so when I saw Huangmao before, and now I have Hinata

Only the water in the Pirate World can be effective against Devil Fruits, because the water contains PYROBROIN, the active ingredient of Sea Tower Stone. In other words, what Devil Fruits are afraid of is not water, but PYROBROIN. Devil fruits in other worlds are equivalent to being perfect without weaknesses

The inner drama should be as concise as possible, as it seems a bit long-winded.

After it was released, there were seven chapters in a row. Do you think you subscribed too much?

I don't think it's a hodgepodge, it's very abrupt. If I really want to write it, I can write an infinite stream. I'll finish writing Naruto first. The Naruto part is really good.

I don't think there are many book stamps in this book, but I find it very interesting. The author is quite sophisticated. Is it a problem with the name and introduction? Naruto, who knows the plot, has no selling point. There are many similar products. Would it be better to change it to something like Dead Fire Sea Brawl? The introduction also does not reflect the characteristics. It only makes a bit of mystery in the last sentence. This is not popular now. It is more attractive to be more straightforward 🙂

The previous writing is very good and quite to my liking.

Make a new one, just write about Naruto, I'll follow them all

It started out okay, and then we fell in love. If you want to succeed in writing fan fiction, you either have to control your subordinates and focus on your career. Or change the place and let go completely. What I'm most afraid of is being caught in the middle, without being embarrassed.

The author, at this stage, it is still cost-effective to develop the nine tails. Get the other half of the nine tails and collect the chakra of the nine tailed beasts. For such a big thing as the invasion of another world, it is time for the Sage of Six Paths to come out and pass on his skills. Then refer to Sasuke's idea in the ending and use his own body as a container to fuse the nine tailed beasts and his own chakra. He will soar all of a sudden, and the enemy will not beat him casually.

Why is Itachi Uchiha invincible against Hokage just by relying on Tsukuyomi? And the protagonist is the Kyuubi, the Flying Thunder God, the exchange system, time travel, and the magic of immortality. Danzo is a coward.